Shazz vs Big_O
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Come With It :thefinger

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-15-05 at 01:19 PM

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Big_O has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-05 12:20 PM.

Shazz... more like shit cause thats what i smell facing this bitch

You want to battle cause i voted agianst you*

Just Like Christiana Aguilara Dirty** Try Shampoo

Your sick and Disgusting and got no flow

And people hate you where ever you go***

Your dumb and retaded so give it up

Next time just dont show up...........
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* On AIM asked if i would battle Cause i voted agianst her

** In One of her post she was talking about christina Aguilaras Dirty Video and Peep the Sig

*** In one post she said can you merge files from RB and people ripped at her

Shazz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-05 12:53 PM.

Ayo….
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Big_O hes 0-7, The next time you win a battle id be in heaven
Only battle Big_O would win would be because of a no show
Hes got a avatar as a city? Ya can’t even go there with your ability
Garbage trash, damn you suck so bad you could use a bath
Your shit so boring...... its just like another damn day in math
Your shit was so damn funny....I would even hire you as a clown
But in a battle like this .....at the very end you leave with a frown
Sorry you went first and get embarrassd....you even called me out
Im going to add this to my record as a win...K.O. without a doubt
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blah. quick battle

uppi n

uppin............................................. .........

Voted For: Shazz

Shazz... more like shit cause thats what i smell facing this bitch
0...played and basic concept worded horribly.
You want to battle cause i voted agianst you*
Just Like Christiana Aguilara Dirty** Try Shampoo
0....no...u got something here,but wording was the worst I ever seen
Your sick and Disgusting and got no flow
And people hate you where ever you go***
1...noooooooo...what the fuk is this shit?
Your dumb and retaded so give it up
Next time just dont show up...........
0...this isn't even a punch.

OK..I'm not gonna break down Shazz's verse as it's clear that he won.

Big_o...don't separate ur lines like that...it just makes it look newbish.And don't explain ur punches...that's just gay now.It's played out.Word ur punches so u don't have to explain it.ANd u need better concepts for punches.Seems like u kept talkin about christina.And that was boring.

Vote-Shazz
Drop a vote in the link below
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=209572

Voted For: Shazz

wtf at this shit rhyming off both of you,

fix your structures up now.

big o ATTEMPTED personals, but they were all weak...

hit me up il give you some tips..

shazz you came harder in the last few bars

The best bars:

Your shit was so damn funny....I would even hire you as a clown
But in a battle like this .....at the very end you leave with a frown
Sorry you went first and get embarrassd....you even called me out
Im going to add this to my record as a win...K.O. without a doubt

and they were weak. elevate both

NO HATE

PLEASE RTF IN SIG ASAP

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211483

^RTF here shazz if that other battle is too long

Voted For: Shazz

easy win for shazz
big o, ur 1st line isnt paired, but neither r shzz's beginning
i guess thats one way to expand the line limit....
big o's second bar (you/shampoo) isnt even a diss, when u use wordplay u need 2 remember to make the line mean somethin as well as havin the wordplay
the rest of big o's is played n extremely uncreative (ur disgusting, people hate u, ur retarded, etc.)
shazz spits a solid verse, n wins easily

vote- shazz

Voted For: Shazz

Shazz Took Dis EZ

Da Other Guy, BIG O Had A Worse Verse Than In Our Battle

Dont Seperate Yo Lines Like Dat Dawg! It Looks Awful

U Had Little 2 No Punchlinez Eitha..

Shazz Yo Verse Was Hot Hommie, Had Errythin Dat Big O Didnt

EZ Win 4 U

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Or Vote Will Be Removed.

calm down guyz/..
Uppin...................................

rtf then asap please :cool:.......................

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=206797
already closed.

Its bien re-opened...

...but just honest vote on my oreo one.

Dipset holla .

need one more.... omg...........................................

This was feedback posted for Shazz
 

i honestly can't vote...there are no appealing punches personals rhyme scheme vocabular multies wordplay etc.

this battle was by far one of the worst ive read in a while.....you both should up a alot on everything

big-0- try upping your structurre and making it more fluently like shazz's ok, when your trying to throw a punch make sure the line above it is a set up...and when you do throw a punch make sure it isnt a 4th grade punch...actually put some thought into it so it looks like you care.....i mean.....seriuosly..."next time dont show up" no thats not a punch...just elevate fo real...

shazz-i heard you were dope on rb, but so far you've batteled no body except for newb's dawg...and no offence but your battle skill seemed to have died...your first 3 lines dont rhyme....and your whole verse had atleast 5th grade punches...i mean..this shits boring like math class?.......nope sry...dont work...gotta be more creative and constructive with you verse.....your structure is iight...probally the only thing going for you..

no hate to either....just some elevation tips...1

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Fuck it uppin............................................

Voted For: Shazz

Flow- Shazz
Structure- Shazz
Punches- Shazz
Metas- Shazz
Enjoyment- Shazz
Vote- Shazz
No offense.... But Big O i didnt really see anything in your battle that made me say "wow" Shazz def got this by my view.

Your dumb and retaded so give it up
Next time just dont show up...........- Big O

The closing 2 didnt really help, and ya rhymes were kinda basic and didnt really have any strong points....

"Hes got a avatar as a city? Ya can’t even go there with your ability
Garbage trash, damn you suck so bad you could use a bath"- Shazz

Good lines Shazz.