common vs Theory
 

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6 lines
No crew votes

No DR

Minimum posts to vote: 1000

Check in by: 10-15-05 at 05:58 PM

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common has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-05 05:29 PM.

Theory has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-15-05 05:32 PM.

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Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!

My bad

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!

Common a.k.a Flash a.ka. Auspicious a.k.a Wack faggot who got banned around 6 times for biting, lmfao, your done...

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause

y'all both suck.............................................. .........

Common a.k.a Flash a.ka. Auspicious a.k.a Wack faggot who got banned aruund 6 times for biting, lmfao, your done...

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause

^^ Is what it was suposed to look like, omfg @ spelling and shit, now i'm gonna lose cuz of it

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

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This was feedback posted for Theory
 

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Voted For: common

Theory
Um i didnt get that, your rhymes were pretty basic, the rhyme scheme was horrible to me, your stucture was alright but you had nothin creative in there, barley any hard hittin personals and yet you had no creative wordplay to twist shit up, i suggest you learn more before you say all that garbage shit you said in your verse.

common
well I dont like how you bit the name, haha, and thats one thing he could used on you but ehh, your flow was good but i didnt really see much i seen some attempts but they werent so great, your punches need more define in them, explain better and twist them words even more, but for the fact that attempted better punches and what not you get my vote.

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Voted For: common

Theory

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
^aight first bar,good wordplay formed into punch

Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
^uhm not really feelin this bar actually

You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
^uhm again the hot flash thing, good wordplay into punch though but same concept basically

Solid battle, good wordplay but using the hot flash concept twice kinda threw me off you know.
Could've been more creative, vocab was coo, flow was aight...solid...

common

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
^hehe, good opener, coo wordplay and all

Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
^hmmmmmm just like with him i don't like this one...

When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
^LMAO, damn you killed it with this one...hahaha...

First line was cool, second kinda threw me off but man that last line was nice hehe. Vocab
was cool, got flow down and just overall good battle.

Voted For: Theory

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
6...good punch.
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
5....decent personal...
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
2..no...u using a hot flash line again?

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
5.....decent...
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
2...weak ass punch...wtf is this?
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
5...decent,but these type of lines are 'blah" now.

OK..
Theory...
U started off with 2 good lines.But that last one...u had already used a hot flash line as a opener..why use another one as a closer?Esspecially in short line battles.DOn't do that.
Common..
UR opener was decent...But the middle bar,that was fucking weak.It barely hit him as a punch.The 3rd bar ite...but sex lines,unless done creative, are blah

Vote-Theory

This was feedback posted for common
 

theory bad structure ok punches i dont think either of yoou came that good honestly but commons punches were better by far

good thing strobe edited my verse. anyways, LMFAO @ willapeer, bad structure, WHO THE FUCK CARES ABOUT STRUCTURE. And wtf @ natural killa, I didnt even use the same fucking concept, omfg, so what I worded it wrong. ha, other then that, good battle.

This was feedback posted for common
 

checkin the polls...lol at commons verse

I know Cezar im wack :(

Rofl

lets do a 6liner once this is closed or some shit

^^ LMFAOOOOOOOOO @ Cezar, Aus, you should really whore that kid.

Voted For: Theory

Common

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Pretty played concept..
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
Haha.. This was pretty good..
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
Nah.. Didn't connect..

Theory

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Haha.. Pretty good..
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
Decent..
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
Not as good as your first nameplay.. still decent though..

Overall, Common had 1 good bar.. Theory had 1 good bar.. Theory also had 2 decent bars.. whereas Common's other bars weren't that good. So, basing off of that, I'm giving this vote to Theory. His verse was just more consistent and better.

Vote - Theory

woot woot............................Tied now, :thumbup:

Voted For: Theory

alright...i thought common came too plain, didn't like common's opener, thoughth theory's second line sealed it for him, that was good....tight battle, think theory edged it out though, well done to both, keep up....wordness

v/common

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v/theory, i mean, obviously, hahaha, oh shit lmlo.

Voted For: common

this was a pretty weak battle but ima have to give this one to common to me he had more harder punchlines , theory basically tried to get at his alias's and how many times he got banned but failed to make any good punchlines , there for i feel common took this one hands down.

Elevate theory learn to make more direct punchlines , and work on your structure

^^ you see only a fucking herb like wild-fire would tell a text battler to work on strucutre, stfu kid.

Upp...

and theory stop wit the hostility... all love...

Fuck a bitch

Voted For: common

Aight this was a somewhat close battle.

Theory: Your opener was good.. but you used the same wordplay for your closer and it got played quickly. THe c4 punch was ill. But that whole hot flash repeat killed you.

Common: Aight to me the only punch that came hard was the last one. The opener was eh. The following line was weak. Now even if theory had more wordplay. Most of it was played.
And common's punches hit harder instead of completly relying on the wordplay punches throughout the verse.

No hate/dr or anything like that. Good job to both. But common takes it.

pc

Voted For: common

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
^nah not feelin it too much its aight though
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
^if its true nice punch
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
^Not feelin it



Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
^Shit that was a good one.
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
^nah…No meaning
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
^lol… It was alright..

Overall- battle was tuff to decide… both evened out pretty good I re-read it and I think since it made more sense and I liked the multies and was put better togther ima go with common… I don’t even know you … But good verse. Theory you did good as well also.. I just thought he came harder with everything as I explained it

V/Common

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Voted For: Theory

Damn. Theory Took This So Bad.

Common:
Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Pretty Poor Punch, But It's Aiight, Ok As An Opener
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
That Just Seems Like Filler To Me.
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
haha, That was pretty Funny. Nice Closer.

Theory:
Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Lol, Dope Punch, Nice Opener
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
That Second Line Was Fuckin Nice, But the First Cuod've been worded better
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
lmao, nice personal, dope closer, good punch

Theory Pretty Easily Took This, He Had Better Punches And Personals.

Word.

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upping fuck.............................................. . :shoot:

Voted For: Theory

hmm.. decent battle.. Common u really need to shake that rust off... you're a beast texthead.. and normally i could see you crushing a cat like this... but he took it to u.. i wasnt feeling the hot flash concept.. u used twice.. but the C-4 line was tight.. even tho i saw a similar concept used by Lay Doubt.. Common your opener was coo.. but i really wasnt feeling the rest of your verse.. soo no hate to you.. but i just feel Theory took it..

Voted For: Theory

Theory

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Dopeness...4.5/5
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
Not bad, good personal...3/5
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
Not as hard as the others...2/5

Overall - 9.5/15

I thought you last line coulda been harder and worded better. Maybe try getting some better structure. I didnt like how you repeated the hot flash thing either...but everything else was pretty good.

Common

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Ok...3/5
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
Kinda wack...1.5/5
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
Funny closer...4/5

Overall 8.5/15

Wasnt really feelin this verse as much. I know you are capable of better. First bar wasnt that good, second bar hurt you cause it was stupid, last bar was actually pretty funny but wasnt an actual punch at Theory. Next time try hitting you opponent rather than their family members (harder personals), word your punches better, and get creative.

V/Theory.................

Close battle.

Voted For: Theory

Dope & Its Hopeless When I'm Throwing Explosives & Carry Bombs
While?
Your Career Is In Left Field, Trying To Shake Hands With Barry Bonds
Eh, nah, 6/10
Your Whack, But I Guess You Don't KNOW BETTER...But Wait Bitch
I Almost Forget You Just Met Me, Please Refrain My Earlier Statement
lmfao, nice one, 8/10
When It Comes To Jokes I Don't Understand... I Don't Get Enough Credit?
I Mean, Your Sisters Ass Was A Fucking Joke, And Boy Did I Get It!
good, but not hard hitting son 7/10

21/30

Fuck your wack aliases, beat me? not the way you drop ass
This girls gone wild but we still don't see a hot flash
Nice, haha, 8/10
Get beat into a cast, i'll smack ya this whore and...
I aint callin' ya the bomb when we c-4 of your acounts banned
oh, wordplay, cool son, 7/10
You suck man, i'll give your bitch ass the metal dawg
Cuz if I ever see a hot flash...
it's a bitch on Menopause
that was cool, 7/10

22/30

Fucking close here, but theory had some cool wordplay, and common you came with some witty punches, I didnt like how theory used the "hot flash" shit twice, but wt/v, and I didnt like commons opener, I think theory edged it out though.