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Texxus 10-16-05 11:52 PM

Theory vs -Cezar-
 
Battle Rules:

Established Crew Battle: The Legacy[TL] vs Livin Legends[LL]

10-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-19-05 at 11:52 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 10-17-05 12:34 AM

-Cezar- has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 12:34 AM.

Texxus 10-17-05 12:36 AM

Who the fuck Theory?...the kid is weak...Watch me snatch the victory
My wack is at your peak...so me droppin dope vs you is unnecessary
Fukk outta here bitch...go in T's house...act like his toilet and run shit
I'd put nades in ya mouth
be onlytime ya lips open up explosive
Shit kid,hoppin on myside of the fence...you should ducked like mexicans
Make ya jaw clinch...put a straw in...and drain out all of your organs
Face it faggot...ya aint bout shit...getting no pussy just like a muslim
I know this...Cuz in school T was the type 2 attend dances with his cousin
Fuckin prick...had to hop on all of LL's dicks...just to get picked
There for im have to get rid of ya quick..10lines to prove theory aint shit

System 10-17-05 10:11 AM

Theory has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 10:11 AM.

Theory 10-19-05 11:55 PM

Omfg, we weren't in the mood for this shit. But wt/v, you get ripped either way

Quick to rip a bitch, & he can get it spittin' sub par
Cuz i'll eat Caesar quicker then vegans at salad bars
Fuck The Legacy, bitch, these punches'll make ya face swell
& I aint talking ya wack crew when I say you'll be reppin' The L
Theory'll break ya chest, hard enough to give ya cardiac arrest
So i'll take a stab at Cezar, followed by Cassius, Brutus, and the rest
Go back to school, try to learn some shit
And by the way, it's spelt "Caeser" YOU DUMB BITCH!
Now get ripped, respect you kid? That's degrading dude
How you expect us to like ya
...when even your closest advisors assinated you
Fuck this girl yo, i'll put a hole in ya head & make it cave
Plus i'll caeser win so quick Julius'll start turnin' in his grave
Faggot prick, suck a dick, i'll whore this poor head
Cuz the only Empire Cezar commands
...is C.A.L.I in his bed

Theory 10-20-05 12:25 AM

uh, ya............................................

Daubs 10-20-05 11:13 AM

This was feedback posted for Theory
 
EZ man,

good shit.......................................

Kawn Flixx 10-20-05 10:38 PM

This was feedback posted for -Cezar-
 
Poolllzzz........Good verse ya'lll

Abraxas 10-20-05 11:26 PM

This was feedback posted for Theory
 
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!o0o0o

Theory 10-21-05 05:15 PM

^^ uh..........................................thanks ?

N.Tavarez 10-21-05 05:16 PM

Voted For: Theory

jack pm me when u get the chance..................

Removed

Dickard. 10-21-05 05:20 PM

This was feedback posted for Theory
 
lmao...good battle dude had me laughin man...good shit

noname 10-21-05 05:31 PM

This was feedback posted for -Cezar-
 
pollzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

N.Tavarez 10-21-05 05:47 PM

My bad meant to hit feed, but matter of fact leave the vote........ill leave a fully explained vote later.........

noname 10-21-05 05:49 PM

Theory is Jack the Ripper?

OOh.....that mother fucker :mad:

Theory 10-21-05 08:41 PM

I'm not Jack The Ripper only, kids dont understand shared acount. Lol.

Theory 10-22-05 07:40 PM

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E.C 10-23-05 06:19 AM

This was feedback posted for Theory
 
lol your last 2 batrs were ill........ pollzz......

Theory 10-23-05 12:33 PM

woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooot

Theory 10-24-05 12:07 AM

wooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooot

Theory 10-24-05 05:58 PM

this is getting gay, fucking vote...........................

Texxus 10-24-05 06:47 PM

vote vote....i didnt know you where jack?...wow if i knew that i woulda had some personals on you or some more creative punches....cuz really i didnt know anything about you so i was like fuck it...i ask people if they knew who you where and they were like nah...but w/e good battle...keep upppppin

Theory 10-25-05 07:33 PM

^^ Actually, i'm not Jack, it's a shared acount, he only uses it sometimes.

..Decree.. 10-25-05 11:32 PM

Voted For: Theory

-Cezar-
Who the fuck Theory?...the kid is weak...Watch me snatch the victory
My wack is at your peak...so me droppin dope vs you is unnecessary
too simple son
Fukk outta here bitch...go in T's house...act like his toilet and run shit
I'd put nades in ya mouth
be onlytime ya lips open up explosive
pretty weak, didn't hit
Shit kid,hoppin on myside of the fence...you should ducked like mexicans
Make ya jaw clinch...put a straw in...and drain out all of your organs
your just stating what your gonna do to him =/
Face it faggot...ya aint bout shit...getting no pussy just like a muslim
I know this...Cuz in school T was the type 2 attend dances with his cousin
this made me laugh, but it wasn't hard
Fuckin prick...had to hop on all of LL's dicks...just to get picked
There for im have to get rid of ya quick..10lines to prove theory aint shit
that was really just a filler

Overall: You really didn't throw any punches, nothing was aimed at him, you just stated what you would do to him, didn't even use metaphors at the least. And you had a lot of filler. Your stuff was really simple. I guess your still just elevvating. Iunno, try to find some personals on the dude son, and then work on that I guess.

Theory:
Quick to rip a bitch, & he can get it spittin' sub par
Cuz i'll eat Caesar quicker then vegans at salad bars
Ok
Fuck The Legacy, bitch, these punches'll make ya face swell
& I aint talking ya wack crew when I say you'll be reppin' The L
haha, this was dope but played son
Theory'll break ya chest, hard enough to give ya cardiac arrest
So i'll take a stab at Cezar, followed by Cassius, Brutus, and the rest
kinda played but you flipped it originally, dope fucking line!
Go back to school, try to learn some shit
And by the way, it's spelt "Caeser" YOU DUMB BITCH!
no, simple, wack
Now get ripped, respect you kid? That's degrading dude
How you expect us to like ya
...when even your closest advisors assinated you
again simple, didn't connect
Fuck this girl yo, i'll put a hole in ya head & make it cave
Plus i'll caeser win so quick Julius'll start turnin' in his grave
oh shit, dope name/word play son
Faggot prick, suck a dick, i'll whore this poor head
Cuz the only Empire Cezar commands
...is C.A.L.I in his bed
ahahaha, this was funny

Overall: You had a dope verse, it first part and ending or cool, but in the middle, the spelling the name wrong, and assinated by his advisors line were pretty wack, and you put them in a row, I found it really took away from the beggining of the verse by hurting the consistancy of it all, I still think you dropped harder and got this though. LOL @ the cali line, dope son.

TonyTone 10-27-05 08:52 AM

Voted For: -Cezar-

v/ Cezar
he just came w/ harder punches, more creative and a better structure although at first his lines seemed stretched but they weren't
and omg theory came played as fuck played as fuck

Cezar plz go back and poll in my battle.....Solitude vs VIP
this is solitude btw

Theory 10-27-05 05:06 PM

wow mak, I really didn't expect a vote for him to come from someone like you, =/

noname 10-27-05 05:57 PM

:slick:
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Texxus 10-29-05 09:49 PM

uppppin for votes....

Texxus 10-30-05 12:12 PM

upppppppppppppppppppin..........

Texxus 10-30-05 10:36 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppin

Texxus 10-31-05 05:51 PM

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Texxus 10-31-05 10:51 PM

.....................hoecakes vote........................

Theory 11-02-05 01:45 PM

voooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooote.......

~Conflict~ 11-02-05 06:06 PM

Voted For: -Cezar-

yo wat up long time no see! ima vote fo u cause u had a more solid attack and ur punches hurt a bit more than his. ight i liked ur openin and ur closin

Theory 11-04-05 09:42 AM

ya, his punches did hurt so much, I got bruises all over me now. :rolleyes:

Theory 11-05-05 01:05 PM

.................... vote ........................

Theory 11-05-05 11:08 PM

omfg........... VOTE.....................VOTE............ VOOOOOOOOOOTE

Theory 11-09-05 12:29 PM

um, ok................................................

Gotti Nuffguns 11-09-05 02:03 PM

Voted For: Theory

Punches - Theory
Nameplay - Theory [ firsst bar was coo ]
Metas - None
Multies - Cezar [ although they weren't that good ]
Structure - Theory

My Vote - Thoery

Thoery's punches were Nice N Were just a jab
Cezars lines could've been worded better

Theory 11-09-05 03:30 PM

wow, nice herb vote, lmfao, um upping..............


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