Theory vs Drakel
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Feeding of any kind
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R

word, gl.

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 10-17-05 at 11:34 AM

Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in.

Theory has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 10:53 AM.

Drakel has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 11:00 AM.

His alias is Veyetal (vital.) Also peep his avatar

Theory'll stomp this bitch, take gold, n' leave this whore last
& when ya named after dragons
...it aint hard to get medieval on your ass
But fuck dragon characteristics, my punches got ya duckin back
& I aint referin to forked tongues when I say hiss lines are fuckin wack
The hell you win battles? I'll call ya a cheater, cuz you are
The moment I saw ya name, from the beggining, I knew it was DR
Straight bashin this faggot dude, i'll toss the whore
Cuz I aint referin to ya avatar
...when i'm dragon you across the floor
Fuck drake, if someones gettin owned, you can bet it's him
But I guess i'll take a veyetal loss, as long as I get the win

he's already uncertain, and hasn't yet dropped his verse
this annoying kid aint german, but i know this brats the wurst
you're not at all clever, and far from being witty
shit, your stuff is more bazaar than middle east cities
see, i know you're a fruit, damn, your stuff never varies
and you're in a jam now, cause you're about to be berried
shit, you world's coming down, there aint nobody feeling
and the only secure hold you have on things in your hands on the ceiling
you alias' make me fucking sick, so here's a quick sketch
people aren't throwing up their hands...just throwing up, wretch
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eh, time to eat an orange

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

The hell you win battles? I'll call ya a cheater, cuz you are
The moment I saw ya name, from the beggining, I knew it was DR

lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooo

i love boobs, and thats all ha matters............

Your just all like "I'm a big man, I like big boobs, i'm gonna go piss on something" :wtf:

yeah man, shit, they cushion my hands.....and daubs has a crush on tizzle cause it looks like his cousin

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

This battle was pretty good..

Pretty close and shit..

I just want to check the polls.

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

good verse man, i think u honestly got it.....pollz fom

Voted For: Drakel

ok..i'm doing it this way.....so..

Theory
1st Bar-good...but u forced ya rhyme scheme in the 1st line.5/10
2nd bar-Forced...hiss is not pronounced like his.Hiss stresses the "s" in it...while his doesn't.His sounds more liked "hiz".4/10
3rd Bar-Nice rip wit the Dr-akel shit..but dickridin is played.And the 1st line....fake personal.Drakel neva cheated or nutin..so..4/10
4th bar-Forced ya rhyme scheme in the 1st line again.Nice wordplay in punch tho.6/10
5th bar-Didn't like this...was flat out weak.3/10

Ok..you had forced wordplay(hiss/his),played shit(dickridin),And forced rhyming on numerous occasions.Not a specacular verse...but decent.

Drakel
1st bar-Decent punch wit the german thingy.6/10
2nd bar-Lmao..I liked this one,Never seen it done before...so good creativity.7/10
3rd bar-Good wordplay wit the jam/berry thing...nice job.6/10
4th bar-Didn't like this one,honestly -_-..4/10
5th bar-Even worse than the other one...that wretch part,aside from rhymin purposes,seemed pointless.3/10

Ok...ur 1st 3 bars were dope.I liked them.Only problem were the last 2...just flat out weak.

But in my opinion...Drakel got it.
Theory had too many problems with his verse...

Vote-Drakel.
RTF........

^^ Biiiiiiiiicth Vote............................. :thumbup:

You kept telling me how you were rusty, you came better then I expected cuz of that, ha, nice battle though hoe, g/l

but uh, ya, upping again..........................

.............................uh, yaaaaaa..........

upping fuck..............................................

upping............................................

ooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmffffffffffffffgggggggggggg

Drake start upping this too man, fuck I want some votes on this shit, lol

oooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmfffffffffffffffggggggg gggg

:shoot:

ooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmffffffffffffffgggggggg again

upping for the tenth time.........................

now for the eleventh, fucking hell man..................

This was feedback posted for Theory
 

:slick:
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^^ Stfu, homo boy, lets get some cool and honest votes here.

Voted For: Theory

Drakel:
he's already uncertain, and hasn't yet dropped his verse
this annoying kid aint german, but i know this brats the wurst
this was cool wordplay
you're not at all clever, and far from being witty
shit, your stuff is more bazaar than middle east cities
lmfao, nice son
see, i know you're a fruit, damn, your stuff never varies
and you're in a jam now, cause you're about to be berried
word, played but you flipped it well and shit son
shit, you world's coming down, there aint nobody feeling
and the only secure hold you have on things in your hands on the ceiling
nah, didn't like this one
you alias' make me fucking sick, so here's a quick sketch
people aren't throwing up their hands...just throwing up, wretch
played as hell son, nah

Overall: You started off with 2 dope wordplay bars I liked, but then started to fade, I could see where you were going with that ceiling line, but it didn't connect, and then you had a few played lines, one you flipped cool and shit, the other was just wack and played.

Theory:
Theory'll stomp this bitch, take gold, n' leave this whore last
& when ya named after dragons
...it aint hard to get medieval on your ass
lol, ok
But fuck dragon characteristics, my punches got ya duckin back
& I aint referin to forked tongues when I say hiss lines are fuckin wack
lmfao, nice wordplay son
The hell you win battles? I'll call ya a cheater, cuz you are
The moment I saw ya name, from the beggining, I knew it was DR
this shit is kinda played, but you flipped it cool
Straight bashin this faggot dude, i'll toss the whore
Cuz I aint referin to ya avatar
...when i'm dragon you across the floor
played shit, but i'll guess it's a personal, but we can't even see the dudes avatar when we read this, so =/
Fuck drake, if someones gettin owned, you can bet it's him
But I guess i'll take a veyetal loss, as long as I get the win
lmfao, dope word/nameplay on his alias yo

You had some good shit, really good verse here but you had some un-original lines, but you flipped them in an original way son. Closer was dopeness. The drago-on line, was nah, cuz it was played and you can't tell what his avatar is when you look it dosn't show, nah mean? But.....

Due to more consistancy. vote= Theory

votes like that rock....stfu up theory, i'll up it however i feel

This was feedback posted for Drakel
 

Just Checkin' The Polls and all that cool shit that friends do.

Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuupppppppppppppppppppppppppp

.................... vote ........................ :shoot: :thumbup:

Voted For: Theory

yea ima have to give dis to Theory because he had better punches n personals, also i was feelin his flow n he was hot the whole way through...Drakel started off hot but then started fallin off IMO n he lacked flow, but hell of a battle , but ima have to give this to Theory....RTF, drop an honest vote on my battle against GKillaz05

Voted For: Theory

Lol. Doper verse. Good battle from both though. Better personals and punches. More wittier and clever concepts. Dope to both.

cool, i'm winning, :D.......................... :love:

I think mimesis should have fucking voted.........

2 more, come on man, 2 more, :(

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Voted For: Theory

Theory - Good spit, it had some good punchlines, and it flowed well.

Best Line - Theory'll stomp this bitch, take gold, n' leave this whore last
& when ya named after dragons
...it aint hard to get medieval on your ass

Worst Line - NONE

Drakel - You flowed well, and some iight punches, and some ok wordplay.

Best Line - he's already uncertain, and hasn't yet dropped his verse
this annoying kid aint german, but i know this brats the wurst

Worst Line - you alias' make me fucking sick, so here's a quick sketch
people aren't throwing up their hands...just throwing up, wretch


OVERALL - This was a really close battle, but I gave my vote to Theory becuase I think he had the better punches. The other guy just use more wordplay next time.

Vote - Theory

RTF in Sig of Vote be REMOVED!

ya i'll rtf soon.....................................

Voted For: Theory

Theory'll stomp this bitch, take gold, n' leave this whore last
& when ya named after dragons
...it aint hard to get medieval on your ass
^^lol,...decent opener
But fuck dragon characteristics, my punches got ya duckin back
& I aint referin to forked tongues when I say hiss lines are fuckin wack
^^was ok.....decent play
The hell you win battles? I'll call ya a cheater, cuz you are
The moment I saw ya name, from the beggining, I knew it was DR
^^kinda got it(im a bit slow tonight)lol
Straight bashin this faggot dude, i'll toss the whore
Cuz I aint referin to ya avatar
...when i'm dragon you across the floor
^^good, but kinda obvious
Fuck drake, if someones gettin owned, you can bet it's him
But I guess i'll take a veyetal loss, as long as I get the win

^^ok....
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nothin overly spectacular but it was a solid verse
most everything was on point
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he's already uncertain, and hasn't yet dropped his verse
this annoying kid aint german, but i know this brats the wurst
^^nice....
you're not at all clever, and far from being witty
shit, your stuff is more bazaar than middle east cities
^^to simple but good concept, elaberate more...ect
see, i know you're a fruit, damn, your stuff never varies
and you're in a jam now, cause you're about to be berried
^^to simple
shit, you world's coming down, there aint nobody feeling
and the only secure hold you have on things in your hands on the ceiling
^^wasnt feelin it bro
you alias' make me fucking sick, so here's a quick sketch
people aren't throwing up their hands...just throwing up, wretch
^^nah
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started off your verse decently but lacked the content after your 1st 2 bars...basically theory was just more consistent with complexity...