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Illist vs Withersman
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6 lines 15 minutes to drop Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-18-05 at 02:34 AM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Withersman has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-05 02:08 AM.
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Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-05 02:11 AM.
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Manly Flow... Son... You're Whining With Your Banging Bitch Spits
Take The Tie From My League Record & Fucking Hang You With It After This, Dukes Won't Be Standing, This Pussy Needs His Panties Beauties Only Skin Deep, That's Where My Knives Come In Handy Gifted In Here, Open Your Mouth ... And I'll Lay Knuckles Upon Dentals & I've Been A Top Secret, Since I Found Out Your Girl Was Confidential |
what... nigga got a 2-6 record who wanna fuck wit me
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This fag bags lackin schemes, you the wackest cat i seen
& 'liter ali' dipose 'em so bad.... .......You'd think I was throwin' away boxing magazines homies in a loss for words, ill be quick to hit 'em w/ a clue.. peep ya girl.. ...I'm 'wit her' so much... she fucken forgot about you! This kid's pure ho, Can't revive my rhymes, the cures slow nicknamed me curtain call................ ................................Cos after me, It's the end of your show. |
LMAO...
Nice shit man... Uppin for votes.... |
This was feedback posted for Withersman
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The face that this isn't a league.. and you don't have a tie on your record, makes me confidentally believe that you recycled that line. I'm not going to vote because you don't like me for some reason.. but whatever. Good luck to both of you. |
LMAO.....
Wow, a fake bar. Wurd, thx for pointin that out mim. |
Voted For: Illist
This fag bags lackin schemes, you the wackest cat i seen & 'liter ali' dipose 'em so bad.... .......You'd think I was throwin' away boxing magazines aha nice 6-10 homies in a loss for words, ill be quick to hit 'em w/ a clue.. peep ya girl.. ...I'm 'wit her' so much... she fucken forgot about you! lmaooo nice nameplay 8-10 This kid's pure ho, Can't revive my rhymes, the cures slow nicknamed me curtain call................ ................................Cos after me, It's the end of your show. real nice close homie 8-10 nothin to complain about in ya verse, ended real strong Manly Flow... Son... You're Whining With Your Banging Bitch Spits Take The Tie From My League Record & Fucking Hang You With It this was aight but blah 4-10 After This, Dukes Won't Be Standing, This Pussy Needs His Panties Beauties Only Skin Deep, That's Where My Knives Come In Handy ehh not dat serious 4-10 Gifted In Here, Open Your Mouth ... And I'll Lay Knuckles Upon Dentals & I've Been A Top Secret, Since I Found Out Your Girl Was Confidential best line u had 6-10 ya best line wasnt strong enough to overcome illist's shit, but overall he had tha more decent verse vote: illist |
word... thanks for the vote achilles, uppin' this shit.
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Voted For: Illist
i don't know what Withersman was thinkin with that trash. creativity was seriously lacking. vocab was basic, and i think the only thing he had goin for him was flow and structure. his punches were not connecting in the least to be quite frank. all three of his bars were threats as opposed to creative and witty punchlines so i wasn't feeling that at all to be honest. Illest had better punches and came with a whole lot more creativity with his bars, i thought the boxing magazine line was a good punchline. then he started talkin bout his girl which made it kinda lame but then he brought it back again with a good closer about the curtain call. |
thanks for your vote..... I'll gladly return the favor in a bit, unlike other cats in rv who cant retur favors. lol
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Voted For: Illist
Withersman-Nice verse man ill give that to you...you had some good attempt at wordplay...and good punches/personals.....they werent that hard hitting and effective but still present....your structure was good, i got good flow off of it....overall 5/10 Illist-Your verse was dope...i like how you structure it...sounds so much better wehn i read it...you had some dope wordplayy to begin your verse and dope at the end...inbetween you added some dope punches and wordplay...not the best/effective but again still appealing...you got this easy overall. 6/10 v/illist rtf in sig yo |
word... thanks for voting, i returned the favor.
lol, you recycled n still losing 0-3, lol @ you withers. uppin' this. |
show me where i recycled bitch???
Fuckig homo knew i shoulda put this i EFL |
Voted For: Withersman
ILLest this is the first I've ever read one of your text verses and I'd say you have potential at first. I think like most of your lines were spelt wierd and seemed forced kinda, I can't explain it but it just feels like it. your flow could use a bit of work and so could your punchlines you don't run up the personals much either try n twist words more man, play wit the definitions of words. Withers I liked your 6 lines a bit better they were a lil streched but the flow was there in a way. stucutre was cool but what I most noticed abbout yours was that you had better punchlines and creativty in your verse. the fact that you twisted shit more was dope you should went a bit longer though man. overall dope.. 1 |
This was feedback posted for Illist
ok good flow just work on ur structure a bti really easy win props just showing love
bump |
This was feedback posted for Withersman
yea?.............................................. ................
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Voted For: Withersman
just checking poll... liked top secret line.......... |
Voted For: Illist
Withersman OK,too many threats in your verse.Like..I see the wordplay you did in the 1st bar,but you didn't put it in a way that dissed.Saying u'll hang him doesn't diss at all.And nearly ur whole verse was made of threats too.The girlfriend line was the only decent line you had,and that was becuz it actually dissed. Illist First off,I think you overused the 3 line method in your verse.But other than that,it was a pretty good verse.Esspeccially the 2nd bar wit the girl line..that punch hit hard.Only line I wasn't feelin was the last one.Cause it seemed to self glorify more than diss... Vote-Illist Drop an honest vote in the link below http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212726 |
uppppppppppppppin this easy win for ilist props..
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Voted For: Illist
Shit...2 me this was completly one sided cant deny or even hide it the flow belonged to Illist, his verbs vibed the realest... all his punchlines were sharper Withersman faded away like Ron Harper... almost seemed to be a no show couldnt pick out one better personal --------------------------------------------------------------- Illist best Lines: This fag bags lackin schemes, you the wackest cat i seen & 'liter ali' dipose 'em so bad.... .......You'd think I was throwin' away boxing magazines --------------------------------------------------- Withersman Best Lines: Manly Flow... Son... You're Whining With Your Banging Bitch Spits Take The Tie From My League Record & Fucking Hang You With It ----------------------------------- |
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