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Illist vs ELite.
Battle Rules:
8 lines. No crew. Hate. Dick ride. Bites. Etc. Good Luck -n- please don't ho show.. thank you. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-21-05 at 08:00 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-05 08:12 PM.
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Trust..It's your time, this kid's not 180 degrees homie..
& this kid's so outta line he's turnin perpendicular on me Prepare to fall off kid, no1 rocked you like me, dont worry fuck writin ya verse.. I'll have this mothafucka droppin stories & your losses are chewed up by this, just watch me go.. truth is el-eats so much.. ...........................Yet he still can't drop any heavy flow! Ya not above or equal to me, watch him flip these^.. Anythin besides a win against u is failure.. ...........So if i tiedye i kill myself, like suicidal hippies |
I accepted n dropped, u havent even accepted? thought u said you wanted a quick one?
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ELite. has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-18-05 08:17 PM.
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kidd i'm sonnin you quick, and to feel pussy...you jus rubs on ya dick i'll clap u then split, either way u gettin "popped" like a pimple or zit!! remind me of clits, cuz illist can 'catch da yeast' so i'm 'pitchin bread' now he gettin fed, cuz no1 "thinks" of him but aint missin their heads! rushin me to drop so u lose fast? and he dont fight cuz he lose clash wanted 2 "Roc" so bad, he gave his 'car wings' & literally 'flew dash'! told me he wanna battle me, and ya fuckin baby raps jus rattle me... cuz lyrically, u couldnt "GUIDE MY FLOWS" as "moses managin me"!!! DONE |
chea good verse illist, lets get some votes on this
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chea bump this once again, since evidently niggas is blind...
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looks like we never gettin votes on this one homie lol
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Wurd. ^
votes take way too damn long to come on this site. |
Voted For: Illist
Illist Trust..It's your time, this kid's not 180 degrees homie.. & this kid's so outta line he's turnin perpendicular on me Cool.. Prepare to fall off kid, no1 rocked you like me, dont worry fuck writin ya verse.. I'll have this mothafucka droppin stories Nah.. & your losses are chewed up by this, just watch me go.. truth is el-eats so much.. ...........................Yet he still can't drop any heavy flow! Didn't connect.. Ya not above or equal to me, watch him flip these^.. Anythin besides a win against u is failure.. ...........So if i tiedye i kill myself, like suicidal hippies Decent.. Achilles kidd i'm sonnin you quick, and to feel pussy...you jus rubs on ya dick i'll clap u then split, either way u gettin "popped" like a pimple or zit!! Played as hell.. remind me of clits, cuz illist can 'catch da yeast' so i'm 'pitchin bread' now he gettin fed, cuz no1 "thinks" of him but aint missin their heads! Nah.. rushin me to drop so u lose fast? and he dont fight cuz he lose clash wanted 2 "Roc" so bad, he gave his 'car wings' & literally 'flew dash'! Decent.. told me he wanna battle me, and ya fuckin baby raps jus rattle me... cuz lyrically, u couldnt "GUIDE MY FLOWS" as "moses managin me"!!! Not a punch.. Overall, Illist had one good punch and one decent one. The other punches didn't connect. Achilles had one decent punch, and the others weren't that good at all. One of his other ones were played, and the other ones didn't connect at all. Illist just had the better overall verse. He had better concepts, more punches connected, and better wordplay. That's why he gets my vote. Vote - Illist |
chea i was off thats aight though, good look votin...0-1
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Voted For: Illist
illist-Your verse was structured good, you had good flow..your wordplay was nicely set up and incorporated...had some good punches and personals....your verse came hard and was appealing to the reader...overall 6/10 Elite. -Your verse was structured good but becuz your worded your punches and shit wrong it flowed bad...you had some played wordplay and punches....u worded them very childishly....gutta be more creative and up your game...overall 4/10 v/illist.... rtf in sig within 48 hours or this vote goes bye bye |
This was feedback posted for Illist
good battle to both of you big ups jsut showing love s work on the structure a bit u too illist not bad props
jsut stopped by to show love bump |
word.... thanks for the feed.
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Voted For: Illist
Illist... I liked your shit... wasnt to much direct punches and shit but it reminds me of back in 2003 and those type of punches... had nice flow... your punches connected and your structure was good aswell... give your verse a 7/10 cause one of the punches didnt really connect ELite... Your verse... first off dont bold your shit... it makes your verse look ugly and yeah... NO... Your punches wasnt too bad but i didnt feel as though they conected to well and your flow was a bit off... eleveate v/ Illist |
Thx for ya vote.. Uppin' this for 2 more votes,
or however many it takes. |
you are easily the most slept on person on rv lol get this shit closed its been open for quite a while lol
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Voted For: Illist
hmmm Illest didn't really come with it in this one like I've seen em do in other battles... still I though his punches hit a lil harder than Achilles... and that he was more creative over-all... Opener: Illest (Ach's pimple line is played) Closer: Illest Punches: Illest Personals: Achilles (nothing really but he did mention Illest rushed em) Structure: Achilles Vocab: Illest Multies: Illest Vote: Illest |
Voted For: ELite.
i voted for achilles cus he had better flow and just better lines even though both were no punchers illist u lost cus of just being basic but keep on rymin and ur last line confused me no hate people thou |
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