WTF i was tripping
 

aight im writing to this beat right now

aigth im writing the first verse right now
and before i know it i have 1 page

i was like wtf? theni counted the beat and it had i thnk 30 bars

i was like wtf? i dont know if the chorus is different or something, i cant figur eit out :huh:

30 bars too one song for one verse?? wtf

so how'd you explain Games 300 eh?

how would i describe it.....i'd describe it bad..i hate that G Unot 300 bars shit its gay but i thought he was talkin about just a reg. 16 line verse

im talkign about this beat i downloaded and it got 30 bars each verse, but it shouldnt have that many, its just i cant figure out where the chorus starts, shit is confusing me.....

start the chorus wherever....some beats dont have distince chorus's so most cats drop a 16 do a chorus another 16 ect.

nah becuase theres a sample in the beat where a guy says Prisoner a few times and thats the chorus....i playe dit on cool edit to see where it would be but i cant figure it out.........

yo if i drop the link will one of you guys listen and help me out?

the beat you listening to prolly had an intro, a regular verse, a pre-chorus and a chorus then another verse, pre-chorus, then chorus...


Some beats made like that as well

yeah drop the link........

i think lady fiya is right, i hope so shit.........im not sure if it has 30 bars but i know its more than 23 bars

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=293000

the beat is called prisoner

yup....

it has 24 bars the first verse.

a bar is every 2 claps.......so yea

i think i have an idea what it is but first i wanna here what lady fiya or anyone else has to say

aight intro is done at 0:30, when the beat kicks it that's the chorus...

chorus is done @ 0:50,
in comes the verse (regular amount of bars),
ends at 1:31 (pre-chorus is when the beat drops)...
actual chorus picks up @ 1:40... finished at 2:00,
@ 2:00 the 2nd verse kicks in.. (regular amount of bars)
ends @ 2:40

Your verses are 40 seconds long.. both are equal in length...
I'mma triple check that in a minute.

damn yo how you figure that shit out?

lol i was tweaking last night on this shit...LOL but hey...good looks....are they 16 bars? becuase 40 secs is kinda short but better for me
**ps im lazy when it comes to writing

yea i dont realy like how it transitions from chorus to the verse

it kinda is wack, the beat should change or have somehting...sounds too much alike

yeah it's 16.... lol...

damn yo what you think of the beat...nice or wack

becuase im having second thoughts becuase i dont like how the chorus switches tot he verse....damn it i liked the sample tho....fuck

I actually like the beat Lol... and the transition can be used nicely... you just gotta make it creative for the part where the beat just disappears and it's only his voice (the pre-chorus portion)... You can either just leave his sample playin or say something catchy, each time leadin on to the chorus...


Make it dope, cuz I'd listen to that lol..

aight..........i will have this recorded in a week becuase then next few days i got to focus on school.....but you will get a pm when ever this is done...

r u still trippin man?????????????????????????????