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Status 10-22-05 06:09 AM

Help, Rhyme schemes and Bridges
 
aigth i know what a rhyme scheme is and it makes a song real dope, but i only do real basic rhyme schemes, anyone know some dope songs that got dope rhyme schemes, so i can get some knew consepts and shit, and "learn some shit


and bridges, im not sure what a bridge, is, i may have already recorded a song and have done a bridge but i dont know exactly what a bridge is

can someone help me out
and use some examples and OMB if you come in here talking shit your fucking wakc for following me around every thread dissing every thing i say becuase you suck , thats why you dont record, bitch

Mad Dog 10-22-05 06:12 AM

listen to some old Eminem stuff his rhyme schemes are actually quite creative...

Status 10-22-05 06:16 AM

word....hmmmmm aight you think it would work if i read his lyrics or would i have to listen?


*****im really tryign to elevate, LOL word

Mad Dog 10-22-05 06:21 AM

well listening would be the beat option coz there wouldn't be as much to learn through reading his shit...coz you got ya own writing style but listening and taking it in should help other stuff like flow and timing better because the more you listen the more you understand other stuff and also understand the flow needed on beats a lot better as well...which in turn will help writing more complex rhyming schemes...

Status 10-22-05 06:24 AM

word right now im on my smae old rhyme scheme but im doing my first solo track and have learned that the song will be boring unless i switch up the rhyme scheme

so every verse has a rhyme scheme change and ive already used the only 2 rhyme schemes i know of, i got one more but its a lil more harder considering its the third verse and i dont really know what else to talk about, LOL

Ysdat 10-22-05 06:34 AM

I feel you dont need a specific rhyme schem,thats what make sa techical tracks more solid, your just spitting dope lines placing rhymes in all over the place without forcing yourself to switch your flow to dramatically, unless you liek being a schitzophrenic rapper then ya can switch ya fucking flow 20 times :thumbup:


Kids on this site are too hooked up on the text side of things, I see rhyme scheme valid for text,but not so valid for audio. aslong as your spitting solid ryding the beat to perfection. You cant go wrong.
fuck'a rhyme scheme.

Status 10-22-05 06:39 AM

nah rhyme scheme is what seperates dopeness fomr doperness, word

becuase it gets boring after hearing 2 bars of the same rhyme scheme on the same subject by the same vioce, i feel it keeps the listener busy, keeps them focused...word

Terumoto 10-22-05 06:48 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Status
aigth i know what a rhyme scheme is and it makes a song real dope, but i only do real basic rhyme schemes, anyone know some dope songs that got dope rhyme schemes, so i can get some knew consepts and shit, and "learn some shit


and bridges, im not sure what a bridge, is, i may have already recorded a song and have done a bridge but i dont know exactly what a bridge is

can someone help me out
and use some examples and OMB if you come in here talking shit your fucking wakc for following me around every thread dissing every thing i say becuase you suck , thats why you dont record, bitch


Theres only a few set commonly used rhymeschemes. Most of which are covered in the tutorial I wrote... Good luck trying to listen to professional artists complex rhymeschemes, because they constantly change and are all very original.

A bridge is a variation of the normal pattern of a track.. its a bit like a hook.

for example youd have
verse 1
hook
verse 2
hook
verse 3
bridge
hook

Its hard to explain the content of a bridge... But the thing its most like is a hook or chorus.

And i'd be happy to battle you audio.. so if you're willing, let me know what rules you want.

Ysdat 10-22-05 06:51 AM

hmm, i feel you some what contridicted yourself there. To me a rhyme scheme would stay the same thru the entire peice.
But a peice with out a signifigant rhyme scheme allows alot of switch ups a few pause's,samples used. diffent echo's and all sorts of shit, allthough, a solid exact perected rhyme scheme will create a stable solid flow, but if your not dropping some deep fucking originaly bars and just dropping played concepts,that shit will be reapeditive sounding and peopel wont take as much notice of you,compared to a track with a few solid flow switches, and alot of extra shit (not over done)

Status 10-22-05 06:57 AM

well i got a track im gona post up in 24 hours so listen to it becuase its dope, i just finishe dth elast verse, so yea tell me what you think to me its the best song ive recorded and i havent even recorded the last verse, lol

Ysdat 10-22-05 07:02 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Status
well i got a track im gona post up in 24 hours so listen to it becuase its dope, i just finishe dth elast verse, so yea tell me what you think to me its the best song ive recorded and i havent even recorded the last verse, lol


A wise man once told me.

"kid,you shall see people make threads in hope to get early advertisment on there tracks" :thumbup:

Status 10-22-05 07:17 AM

lol word, but yo really i think this trakc is gonna be my best out thus far so i would really like all the feeback possible

plus thanks ad dog and ydats good looks on the advise, helped alot
[thumb up]

Terumoto 10-22-05 07:34 AM

so how about that battle?

Mad Dog 10-22-05 07:44 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by One Man Band
so how about that battle?


check audio bitch slapped...he made a callout

La Cosa Nostra 10-22-05 07:44 AM

Fuck using simple rhyme schemes...................n00b.

Terumoto 10-22-05 08:05 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nostradamus
Fuck using simple rhyme schemes...................n00b.


word.. Once you learn the basics you get over rigid rhymeschemes...

Ysdat 10-22-05 08:10 AM

fuck rhyme scheme's all together. People been putting way to much restriction and bullshit on rap and saying thats what makes our music.

How the fuck are we going to worry about a rhyme scheme,when cats are rapping nursery rhymes and the radio is helping that track explode to sell millions.

rhyme schemes aint shit.

La Cosa Nostra 10-22-05 08:24 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ysdat
fuck rhyme scheme's all together. People been putting way to much restriction and bullshit on rap and saying thats what makes our music.

How the fuck are we going to worry about a rhyme scheme,when cats are rapping nursery rhymes and the radio is helping that track explode to sell millions.

rhyme schemes aint shit.

Uhh, wtf are you on about?

Restrictions on rhyme schemes? You mean subject matter right...?

Rhyme schemes are flow, rhythem and vocal techniques employed to give your rhymes character. If your gonna say fuck rhyme schemes all together, then your gonna sound fucking aweful on a mic..

theblob 10-22-05 08:26 AM

Eminem's rhyme scheme is kinda clunky to me


Jay Z has a dope rhyme scheme

but Biggie's rhyme scheme was ahead of it's time



classic cats? Big Daddy Kane



just be creative


I like to use internals more than multi syllables

Ysdat 10-22-05 08:31 AM

not saying fuck them all together. mearly saying fucking being so worried about them. When i write a track, it somewhat comes naturally to me, Im focusing more on centent than the rhyme scheme.
My style brings rhyme thrown in all over the place...


.....times moving quick,but most lifes seem slow
In front of this mic, am I living my dream goal
I seen flow been stript from certain people
Im'a stand here visual while others are hurt and equal
if I said Im at the studio for the night,words were spoken behind my back
but my mind stands in formation like parralel lined attacks

then I could switch it up and type a completly diffrent style....

....numerous acccounts of outdated scientific experiments still being condone
growing up I was taught we are all kings,,,why is there only on throne?
one home is broken while the next is a perfect fit like the right puzzle peice
corruption,lies,brutality,theift,murder,rape hate also knowen as police
I release a album a month as if im a musical calender working in crazy times
12 records dropped a year...but I snort thousands of lines
minds been warped thousands of times,I have a backwards life like we live ours in rewind


no structure,no set rhyme scheme. But when I write a track, from bar to bar i know exactly how im going to be spitting it.

Kids on RV, learnt alot about text writing,and get all chocked up when coming to writing rhymeto acctualyl record.

Audio is mainly about your delivery on the mic and ryding the beat. If you can spit while being able to clearly decypher the beat in youe mental. then you fucked.

Rhyme scheme aint shit(to be worried about) :thumbup:

La Cosa Nostra 10-22-05 08:37 AM

If you actually do spend time thinking about more complex flow patterns ya shit turns out better................Theres some decently out of the norm rhyme schemes in this new track I'm doing........

STFU
EDITED BITCH.NORECORDS.

theblob 10-22-05 08:38 AM

a boring rhyme scheme = a boring audio








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Ysdat 10-22-05 10:43 AM

yeh I see what ya mean nos. But damn thats some fucking solid lyrics you got for that track, hit me up once its done.


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