ThatNigga vs Illist
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No dick riding fag. Come and get served, bitch. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-25-05 at 02:29 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-05 02:30 PM.
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ThatNigga has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-22-05 02:49 PM.
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I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla'
use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record.. .............and beat the pro portion outta ya Big lip bandit. ya funny but only looks are to me.. ..shit, we have the real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe. It's clear you're an herb.. this kids frikin' lame.. ..I didn't even have to peep a verse. ..I figured that out by your sig n username! punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation- It's a parent ya wack... .... like havin' kids from masturbation.. Murkage. |
Drop already you cunt.
It doesn't take this long for 4 bars. |
This dick riding faggot is fuckin stressing me like whoa
He hangin off tha tip of my dick and he wont let go Couldn’t pull a bitch if wanted, this niggaz scared of the clit You could call him chuck, cuz u know u quick 2 get sticked* Ill blast this nigga wit 1 clip dropping mad bricks he wont get up this time Im gon leave this dirty mutha fucka missin thas why they call it victimless crime “Illist” what an original name dawg, theres no one else like you ill rip yo ass 2 shreds, and anyone else that got a problem despite who *Chuck from trapped in the closet was gay |
wow.....wack.........but uppin fa these votes...........
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This was feedback posted for ThatNigga
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Voted For: Illist
yea, this verse was a lil more on the complex side.... I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla' use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record.. .............and beat the pro portion outta ya ^pretty decent punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation- It's a parent ya wack... .... like havin' kids from masturbation.. ^str8 wordplay it was to the point....good flow...i dun like the structure, though....punches were there...pretty kew....nothing was like OMFG!!....but, yu made up with the wordplay and such ThatNigga:....i wasnt feeling ya opening bars...getting pussy is -eh- in battle form unless its stands out....which in this case it didnt...and the punches didnt realli hit him directly...ya flow was here and there, aswell ...iLList had the better verse....plain and simple |
This was feedback posted for Illist
Illist definately took this...He had punches...Thatnigga you had prolly 1 decent punch...Both flows and structures were way off...Illist,From the way it says Guilty of Chryme underneath your username Im guessing your in C.S....So i cant vote cuz it says no crew votes so..Anyway..You whored this fool...HOLLA!!!...1
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This was feedback posted for ThatNigga
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Voted For: Illist
ThatNigga This dick riding faggot is fuckin stressing me like whoa He hangin off tha tip of my dick and he wont let go Not a punch.. Couldn’t pull a bitch if wanted, this niggaz scared of the clit You could call him chuck, cuz u know u quick 2 get sticked Still not a punch.. Ill blast this nigga wit 1 clip dropping mad bricks he wont get up this time Im gon leave this dirty mutha fucka missin thas why they call it victimless crime Random violent shit like this, still doesn't count as a punch.. “Illist” what an original name dawg, theres no one else like you ill rip yo ass 2 shreds, and anyone else that got a problem despite who Man.. this isn't a punch.. Illist I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla' use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record.. .............and beat the pro portion outta ya Concept had potential.. worded to shit though.. Big lip bandit. ya funny but only looks are to me.. ..shit, we have the real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe. Not a punch.. It's clear you're an herb.. this kids frikin' lame.. ..I didn't even have to peep a verse. ..I figured that out by your sig n username! Concept had potential.. not worded right.. punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation- It's a parent ya wack... .... like havin' kids from masturbation.. Decent.. Overall, this battle wasn't that good at all. ThroughoutThatNigga's entire verse there was not one punch. It was all random statements with the occasional violent remark that just makes it look even more stupid. His verse was just weak and nothing came out even decent. Illist had a few concepts with potential, but were just worded wrong, along with one decent punch, but all of his concepts were punches. That's what separates these two verses, and that's why Illist gets my vote in this battle. Vote - Illist Please hit this battle up: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=213318 I half assed my verse, but I think this dude is getting some major dr and shit. |
Voted For: ThatNigga
This is way to obvious, that nigga won this, no questions asked he killed him, illist's lines were way to short and didn't really have any good punch-lines at all, that nigga had some good ones, so I'm goin wit him. |
lmao^...
..if thats not dr, then i dont know what is. |
lmao^...
..STFU thats not dickriding its telling tha truth DUMBASS, he couldnt dickride me cuz he doesent know me fuckface |
I don't think that vote was dr.. but I still think ThatNigga lost.
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This was feedback posted for Illist
Whatt up? This is how I think it wen't down...
ThatNigga- This dick riding faggot is fuckin stressing me like whoa He hangin off tha tip of my dick and he wont let go ^^^^Played out in my opinion, it was decent. Couldn’t pull a bitch if wanted, this niggaz scared of the clit You could call him chuck, cuz u know u quick 2 get sticked* ^^^^First line played in my opinion, chuck line was decent Ill blast this nigga wit 1 clip dropping mad bricks he wont get up this time Im gon leave this dirty mutha fucka missin thas why they call it victimless crime ^^^^^These lines were too long, second line was good “Illist” what an original name dawg, theres no one else like you ill rip yo ass 2 shreds, and anyone else that got a problem despite who ^^^^^Lines kinda long once again, b oth lines were coo' overall ThatNigga, in my opinion you should work on originality, punches, and structure more..it helps homie overall-6/10 Illest- I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla' use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record.. .............and beat the pro portion outta ya ^^^^^Nice opener.. structure kinda weird Big lip bandit. ya funny but only looks are to me.. ..shit, we have the real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe. ^^^^Lol real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe.. It's clear you're an herb.. this kids frikin' lame.. ..I didn't even have to peep a verse. ..I figured that out by your sig n username! ^^^^^Nice wording and punch..weird structure once again punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation- It's a parent ya wack... .... like havin' kids from masturbation.. ^^^^^LOL at masturbation line..weird structure overall-Structure was kinda different but the verse was overall nice with v ocab, wording, punches.. vote-Illest because his punches and wordplay was more effective towards ThatNigga in my opinion..Nice job niggas.. ~1~ |
This was feedback posted for Illist
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Voted For: ThatNigga
this really was a weak battle with that being said... YL just threw a couple of harder punches than Illest... but not by much... Opener: YL Closer: YL Punches: YL Personals: Illest Creativity: Illiest Complexity: Illest Structure: None Enjoyment: None Vote: YL |
This was feedback posted for ThatNigga
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I may like bacon but I'll eat some pancakes too. Word.
Peace. |
Voted For: ThatNigga
punches: TN structure: TN flow: Il wordplay: TN TN took this cuz his verse to me was a lot easier to read, an alright battle. TN had some pretty funny lines but a little side note, i think that implyin that ppl are gay is gettin a little played cuz it seems that its like the only insult i hear ppl call each other now a days |
Voted For: ThatNigga
rofl @ Illist, wtf, sum of that shit didnt make scence at all. n there wuz like no punches. I'm dope while you far from it, dont front, fake battla' use 1/6 of my skills, like ya battle record.. .............and beat the pro portion outta ya lmao, that wuz such bad rymin Big lip bandit. ya funny but only looks are to me.. ..shit, we have the real life Tyrone Biggums wannabe. wack It's clear you're an herb.. this kids frikin' lame.. ..I didn't even have to peep a verse. ..I figured that out by your sig n username! lmfao, wiggity wack punches- you lack.. nuff, here's the explanation- It's a parent ya wack... .... like havin' kids from masturbation.. i see u wuz tryna make a punch, but fucked it up. V/Young Law, werd |
Voted For: Illist
this was a pretty close one, neither were that great but illist came a little better with the punches. yall need to elevate |
i have elevated this is old as hell .
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Voted For: ThatNigga
Illist: decent read, made me laugh a little...but ive seen one of those lines used before...im not sayin you bit, it was just not new. good flow, the structure was wack tho. but structure dont determine W's...punches do, yours were aight. good punches, but none really seemed to relate. but like i said, decent read. young law: hmm stretched and blown, but new and original. i like the opener. the close was aight. yea it flowed decently, but you structure was wack as well..but fuck it, your punches related, and hit well...so your takin it. vote: young law... return the favor, link in sig. |
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