apostrophe vs Kon.Tay.Juz
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 500

Check in by: 10-23-05 at 06:18 PM

Must drop verse in 39 minutes after check in.

Apostrophe has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-05 05:36 PM.

Kon.Tay.Juz has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-05 05:38 PM.

Thought his name was hidden...Till i looked in the crapper..
U winnin? please, everybody knos apostraphe's cum after..
This Kids pussy.......It's evident that kon own's this whore..
Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
.............................Is when keyboards have vocal chords..
This faggets elevatin.......with his feet locked in shackles..
.Thought this fag was straight, Nope!, He's "adam's Apo"..
Apostraphe's a homo, Talented? Nope Just a waste of life..
You still couldn't get a "Holy",
..............................If you was bangin the preacher's wife..

Voted For: Apostrophe

Thought his name was hidden...Till i looked in the crapper..
U winnin? please, everybody knos apostraphe's cum after..
This Kids pussy.......It's evident that kon own's this whore..
Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
.............................Is when keyboards have vocal chords..

VS

Kon's fallen off so, when will this dude see...
that i'll smack this ass.. quicker then his avy's booty...
I Kill with verses.. && make you die with sentences..
cause Kon couldnt make the club jump..
....................................if he was shynes apprentice..


Both verses were pretty even,

this could honestly go either way...

kon, i aint like the adams apo bar, forced and didnt rhyme good...apo you came weaker than i expected too,but still cam harder.

V./ apo for having harder hitting PERSONALS,

NO HATE

HIT UP A BATTLE IN MY SIG

will do famz........uppin this battle...good drop apo..

oh, and you can pm strobe to close our battle...
you got it.

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Apost
You used to do crazy shit but comin from this was a key it's alright. I thought you didn't use the same concept through out the verse, you had complex punches some were kinda meh. I was hopin for more personals maybe, try doin that shit you used to do man. but fa real I think you had a tad more of better punches not by far but I know you can really kill bars sometimes.

Kon
I think that you did pretty good here, but you swear a little to much in your disses. you had a real nice closer haha if you woulda used more lines like that then possibly you woulda grabbed my vote. but overall I think you did pretty good but you had to much of swears, try workin wit personals more as well if you can.
just hittin it honest yall

RTF HERE: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211749


Vote switched

Voted For: Apostrophe

Kon's fallen off so, when will this dude see...
that i'll smack this ass.. quicker then his avy's booty...
I Kill with verses.. && make you die with sentences..
cause Kon couldnt make the club jump..
....................................if he was shynes apprentice..
I've seen all your names around...............
&& i've known you've been a bitch from the start..
cause i dont need to be a retired oriole.. to rip kon apart..
Your Audio's are garbage.. for a laugh is the only reason i check it..
&& This battles over easy.. just how i like my breakfast..

vs.


Thought his name was hidden...Till i looked in the crapper..
U winnin? please, everybody knos apostraphe's cum after..
This Kids pussy.......It's evident that kon own's this whore..
Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
.............................Is when keyboards have vocal chords..
This faggets elevatin.......with his feet locked in shackles..
.Thought this fag was straight, Nope!, He's "adam's Apo"..
Apostraphe's a homo, Talented? Nope Just a waste of life..
You still couldn't get a "Holy",
..............................If you was bangin the preacher's wife..

EXPLANATIONS:

kon-Your verse was iight, you had some good wordplay and punches/personals...some things to look out for....try and come more creative with your verse..i wasnt thrilled reading your verse...i just thought it was pretty average.....good flow...overall 6/10

BEST LINES:This Kids pussy.......It's evident that kon own's this whore..
Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
.............................Is when keyboards have vocal chords..

Apostrophe-Your verse was funny, all about laughs...kept me laughing the whole way...you had good wordplay...and goood punches/personals...not so hard hittin but deffinitley comical and appealing....overall 7/10

BestLines: && i've known you've been a bitch from the start..
cause i dont need to be a retired oriole.. to rip kon apart..



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Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Apostrophe -
Take a little bit more time with your stuff..Seemed like to me , a bunch of quick rhymes and short lines. And breakfest? I so didn't get that part.... Sounded like shit to me lol... Your flow and structure was really good even though the flow was a little bit basic but the structure i like alot it went smooth with it. Overall nice job but i think he got it.


Kon.Tay.Juz-
I like the multies thats the first thing that was sick that i liked. Another thing was the flow that was pretty tight , structure was good easy to read and it blended in with the verse pretty good pretty good. Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
..........Is when keyboards have vocal chords..Lol that was my favorite line of the verse shit was good , very good personals good job with this i said good enough times now.. Dope verse Word.

Done deal

V/Kon

Holy shit down 3-1...
All i did was gave an honest vote...
Pz GL......

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Thought his name was hidden...Till i looked in the crapper..
U winnin? please, everybody knos apostraphe's cum after..
3/10...played...been used in the punchline league not too long ago
This Kids pussy.......It's evident that kon own's this whore..
Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
.............................Is when keyboards have vocal chords.
4/10...meh..
This faggets elevatin.......with his feet locked in shackles..
.Thought this fag was straight, Nope!, He's "adam's Apo"..
5/10 decent punch
Apostraphe's a homo, Talented? Nope Just a waste of life..
You still couldn't get a "Holy",
..............................If you was bangin the preacher's wife.
3/10 not really feelin it

15/40...Not all that.U had a played line,in the 1st bar with the apostrophe's come after..as it been used in the Punchline league.

Kon's fallen off so, when will this dude see...
that i'll smack this ass.. quicker then his avy's booty...
4/10..ok
I Kill with verses.. && make you die with sentences..
cause Kon couldnt make the club jump..
....................................if he was shynes apprentice..
3/10...not feelin it so much
I've seen all your names around...............
&& i've known you've been a bitch from the start..
cause i dont need to be a retired oriole.. to rip kon apart
5/10..decent
Your Audio's are garbage.. for a laugh is the only reason i check it..
&& This battles over easy.. just how i like my breakfast..
2/10..really played

14/40..Meh,not the best verse from you.What hurt you wuz ur 1st bar..as rippin on avys is getting blah...and the last bar..with the over easy one...becuz that is really played..

Close battle..

Vote-Kon.tay.jaz

Drop an honest vote in the link below
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waits for apostrophe to rtf the favor man!..........

*checks Mystic's Battle*.. *realizes its closed*.. *punches mystic in the face* *tells mystic to give me another battle to rtf on*

Voted For: Apostrophe

Apostrophe

Kon's fallen off so, when will this dude see...
that i'll smack this ass.. quicker then his avy's booty...
Ehh..
I Kill with verses.. && make you die with sentences..
cause Kon couldnt make the club jump..
....................................if he was shynes apprentice..
Connection was off.. decent concept..
I've seen all your names around...............
&& i've known you've been a bitch from the start..
cause i dont need to be a retired oriole.. to rip kon apart..
Pretty good..
Your Audio's are garbage.. for a laugh is the only reason i check it..
&& This battles over easy.. just how i like my breakfast..
Nah..

Kon.Tay.Juz

Thought his name was hidden...Till i looked in the crapper..
U winnin? please, everybody knos apostraphe's cum after..
Nah..
This Kids pussy.......It's evident that kon own's this whore..
Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
.............................Is when keyboards have vocal chords..
Didn't connect..
This faggets elevatin.......with his feet locked in shackles..
.Thought this fag was straight, Nope!, He's "adam's Apo"..
Wording was bad..
Apostraphe's a homo, Talented? Nope Just a waste of life..
You still couldn't get a "Holy",
..............................If you was bangin the preacher's wife..
Played as hell..

Overall, this battle wasn't that good. Apostrophe had a few decent concepts, but only the Ripkon bar stood out. Everything else either didn't connect or was worded wrong. Kon.Tay.Juz had a few average concepts, but none of them really stood out as "dope" to me. Both attempted wordplay.. both attempted to be witty.. but when it comes down to it.. Apostrophe had the better overall verse. He had more potential with his concepts, and more connecting concepts as well. That's why he gets my vote.

Vote - Apostrophe

Voted For: Kon.Tay.Juz

Apostrophe - Good spit homie, you had good punches, and it flowed well.

Best Line - I Kill with verses.. && make you die with sentences..
cause Kon couldnt make the club jump..
....................................if he was shynes apprentice..

Worst Line - && i've known you've been a bitch from the start..
cause i dont need to be a retired oriole.. to rip kon apart..

Kon.Tay.Juz - Pretty good punches, it flowed well.. and I liked personals.

Best Line - This faggets elevatin.......with his feet locked in shackles..
.Thought this fag was straight, Nope!, He's "adam's Apo"..

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - This battles was iight, it was very close, but I think Kon had the better punches, and I liked his personals better. Apo your stucture is pretty weak, and you didnt have much wordplay.

Vote - Kon

Voted For: Apostrophe

Apostrophe:

Kon's fallen off so, when will this dude see...
that i'll smack this ass.. quicker then his avy's booty...
^^good personal ok opener 6/10
I Kill with verses.. && make you die with sentences..
cause Kon couldnt make the club jump..
....................................if he was shynes apprentice..
^^lol ok bar 5/10
I've seen all your names around...............
&& i've known you've been a bitch from the start..
cause i dont need to be a retired oriole.. to rip kon apart..
^^ good meta ok punch 6/10
Your Audio's are garbage.. for a laugh is the only reason i check it..
&& This battles over easy.. just how i like my breakfast..
^^ lol good closer 7/10

Overall: 24/40 (60%)


Kon.Tay.Juz:

Thought his name was hidden...Till i looked in the crapper..
U winnin? please, everybody knos apostraphe's cum after..
^^good nameplay ok opener 6/10
This Kids pussy.......It's evident that kon own's this whore..
Only Time somebody's gonna "scream at you"
.............................Is when keyboards have vocal chords..
^^kinda stupid 4/10
This faggets elevatin.......with his feet locked in shackles..
.Thought this fag was straight, Nope!, He's "adam's Apo"..
^^ok nameplay decent punch 6/10
Apostraphe's a homo, Talented? Nope Just a waste of life..
You still couldn't get a "Holy",
..............................If you was bangin the preacher's wife..
^^didnt work too well 4/10

Overall: 20/40 (50%)


Vote: Apostrophe


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