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Flow Intelligent vs Natural killa
Battle Rules:
12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate Votes First to 5. Or 3.0 K.O By accepting this battle you accept those rules. Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 10-25-05 at 10:49 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
Flow Intelligent has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-05 10:54 AM.
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Im'a drop right now... You got 2 days to do ya verse...
Check It.. Natural You're just a classic groupie, So watch me wreck your bones Ill take the punches you throw at me and use 'em as stepping stones Wishing i was'nt on your hitlist, Now learn you're far from best Even ya punchlines suck at flirting, They're playing hard to get Since when were you ill? Bitch you aint the best, So step down But Natural... You do rap with heart... When you stick ya chest out You a Killa, Natural? Then come test me... I got guns that embellish But on the real i think ya hot dog... Especially on a bun with relish But watch what you say to my face Nat, Or i might be cracking ya jaw Got something to get off ya chest ? Well you can start with the bra The role of a wack emcee.. You're doing a good job at playing it son Ya not gutta bitch, But fuck with this, And ill have you laying in one |
Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-05 04:55 PM.
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yea.....i'm usin ya pic in a battle..but don't get all chipped up & shook,
cuz no-one on RV is blind.................................so why rip on ya looks? ur name gets skipped in the books and ur legacy's in the trashbin cos you be the first herb on rapverse to ever pull out 50 wins even in ur best battles,you still end up gettin pissed on for trying only thing more blurry than those pics...............................is ur rhyming I'd git to hidin if i wuz a trigga like u,who's git shot up with glocks for struttin u been merked so many "times" cuz ur style bassically "clocks" up nothing so much of a fraud in you,with every verse u drop you boost the scandals & ya girl is more than a slut........she been screwed more loose doorhandles http://img68.photobucket.com/albums...lligent/me2.jpg http://img68.photobucket.com/albums...lligent/me4.jpg http://img68.photobucket.com/albums...ent/janessa.jpg |
aah...fuck..
.I forgot to put the pic in there as well....LoL........ ooh well..... |
good verse.. lets get some votes in here :thumbup:
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yea...good thing strobe edited my verse..:)
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Voted For: Flow Intelligent
yea.....i'm usin ya pic in a battle..but don't get all chipped up & shook, cuz no-one on RV is blind.................................so why rip on ya looks? ^^^good personal 6/10 ur name gets skipped in the books and ur legacy's in the trashbin cos you be the first herb on rapverse to ever pull out 50 wins ^^^i get the legacy part but the first part of the setup looked like you were just tryna make up the space. from when you had "trashbin" instead of "trash bin" you made it harder for yourself cos for it to flow you shoulda made the punchline rhyme with "trashbin" and not just "bin cos that fucked up the flow. and the punch was weak. 3/10 even in ur best battles,you still end up gettin pissed on for trying only thing more blurry than those pics...............................is ur rhyming ^^^meh personal.nothin special 3/10 I'd git to hidin if i wuz a trigga like u,who's git shot up with glocks for struttin u been merked so many "times" cuz ur style bassically "clocks" up nothing ^^^so you know for a fact he gets shot up:huh: punchline was aite though 4/10 so much of a fraud in you,with every verse u drop you boost the scandals & ya girl is more than a slut........she been screwed more loose doorhandles ^^^daymn the setup line was good but then you hand to end it with some childish shit bout his girl 2/10 overall NK: 18/50 vs Natural You're just a classic groupie, So watch me wreck your bones Ill take the punches you throw at me and use 'em as stepping stones ^^^setup was meh. punchline was ok 4/10 Wishing i was'nt on your hitlist, Now learn you're far from best Even ya punchlines suck at flirting, They're playing hard to get ^^^good 6/10 Since when were you ill? Bitch you aint the best, So step down But Natural... You do rap with heart... When you stick ya chest out ^^^wasn't feeling it too tough...3/10 You a Killa, Natural? Then come test me... I got guns that embellish But on the real i think ya hot dog... Especially on a bun with relish ^^^lol that was actually pretty funny 6/10 But watch what you say to my face Nat, Or i might be cracking ya jaw Got something to get off ya chest ? Well you can start with the bra ^^^whats the point of threats on the net:huh: but the punchline was amusing though 4/10 The role of a wack emcee.. You're doing a good job at playing it son Ya not gutta bitch, But fuck with this, And ill have you laying in one ^^^didn't get that punch but the flow was good so 2/10 overall Flow Intelligent: 25/60 Flow Intelligent came out on top in this battle. ~peace~ |
well....good looks on voting......................
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This was feedback posted for Flow Intelligent
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Voted For: Flow Intelligent
Flow Intelligent-Your verse was structured pretty good your flow was on point and everything was present.Your verse consisted of good punches that really were noticebale and good personals..you had good attacks at your opponent that stood out and your wordplay was quite amusing...pretty good piece from you man best lines: You a Killa, Natural? Then come test me... I got guns that embellish But on the real i think ya hot dog... Especially on a bun with relish overall: 8/10 Natural Killa-Your verse was structured the same as usual but your flow was off to me...i feel you poorly set up ur verse for flow really bad flow. Your punches were pretty decent i was fealing them a bit. Personals were ok but there were a couple of lines that jus tdidnt do it for me i feel you lacked more than your opponent in all honesty man best lines : I'd git to hidin if i wuz a trigga like u,who's git shot up with glocks for struttin u been merked so many "times" cuz ur style bassically "clocks" up nothing overall: 6/10 v/flow intelligent no hate on this vote just basing my opinion |
yea.....i'm usin ya pic in a battle..but don't get all chipped up & shook,
cuz no-one on RV is blind.................................so why rip on ya looks? aight... ur name gets skipped in the books and ur legacy's in the trashbin cos you be the first herb on rapverse to ever pull out 50 wins made no sense? legacy in the trashbin ok but then you say he pulled out 50 wins thats a complament not a diss.... weak even in ur best battles,you still end up gettin pissed on for trying only thing more blurry than those pics...............................is ur rhyming ooookay I'd git to hidin if i wuz a trigga like u,who's git shot up with glocks for struttin u been merked so many "times" cuz ur style bassically "clocks" up nothing decent punch, so much of a fraud in you,with every verse u drop you boost the scandals & ya girl is more than a slut........she been screwed more loose doorhandles preety good ending.... you had ups and down, but still a decent verse kid.... vs Natural You're just a classic groupie, So watch me wreck your bones Ill take the punches you throw at me and use 'em as stepping stones eeh ever since eminem used it, i must of herd this like 100 times... weak... Wishing i was'nt on your hitlist, Now learn you're far from best Even ya punchlines suck at flirting, They're playing hard to get good hit feeling this.... Since when were you ill? Bitch you aint the best, So step down But Natural... You do rap with heart... When you stick ya chest out nah man... You a Killa, Natural? Then come test me... I got guns that embellish But on the real i think ya hot dog... Especially on a bun with relish ha funny... But watch what you say to my face Nat, Or i might be cracking ya jaw Got something to get off ya chest ? Well you can start with the bra another line i herd befor quote: Got something to get off ya chest ? Well you can start with the bra... wow why did you use this?? was playing eminem while you did this verse? The role of a wack emcee.. You're doing a good job at playing it son Ya not gutta bitch, But fuck with this, And ill have you laying in one aight noting hard hitting well honestly i was dissapointed in flow verse, i thought you had him un-till i read a played line that was said by eminem, i thought it was aight then down the line another line from eminem WTF? im sorry but i go with originality which you lacked here and even thou N.K verse was slight under-par hes was original which gets extra cool-aid-point in my book.... vote/ N.K to bad i cant vote in Elevated front line yet.... |
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i guess its legal now a day to use other people lines thata re famous they dont concider that biting any-more??
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Voted For: Flow Intelligent
Flow Intelligent - Good spit, it flowed well. You had good wordplay and strong punches. Best Line - But watch what you say to my face Nat, Or i might be cracking ya jaw Got something to get off ya chest ? Well you can start with the bra Worst Line - Since when were you ill? Bitch you aint the best, So step down But Natural... You do rap with heart... When you stick ya chest out Natural killa - You had a solid flow, I liked some of your punches. Best Line - yea.....i'm usin ya pic in a battle..but don't get all chipped up & shook, cuz no-one on RV is blind.................................so why rip on ya looks? Worst Line - so much of a fraud in you,with every verse u drop you boost the scandals & ya girl is more than a slut........she been screwed more loose doorhandles (bitched about my Door Knob rhyme, and then go and change it, make it even worse) OVERALL - This battle was good, but F.I. took it. He had way better wordplay, and his punches hit hard. He flowed better as well. NK you should have came wit some good wordplay. Vote - F.I. |
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