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He Watches Me
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Chief - Your Hustle Aint Beautiful Mad Dog -Rap Game song The song is called "He Watches Me" Me and my cousin recorded this song last month. It may be our first song to go on our CD. www.soundclick.com/implicitus Leave links and i'll return feed. |
well I dont know who is whoo....at the begining but i like the introo....a lil off key jus a lil...igh implicit...im not christian but i apreciate and respect other religions..and i like this track...the beat is not...ure verse is pretty good...lyrically this is nice...flow wise im feelin it..like it how you switched it up...nice track..im downloadin this....9/10...nice track..ayo whatsup with our collab...
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uppin this right here. i will return feed. just leave links.
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come on yo. leave some feed
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uppin this song right here.
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Just checking out some new stuff.... word - i think Ike used this beat before, maybe someone else I dun remember... Intro could be redone - does seem a little off to me, but anyways - it aint bad. 1st verse, good flow, nice presence, obviously elevating here. On the hook, seems a bit crowded - just something you might want to clean a bit. word.
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thanks Phenom..
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Listenin ....Like The Intro ....First verse comin on the flow on point,good emotion good delivery good pressence.........its deep this track Like it a lot hook comin on.......H=Ya Cuz sing's this right?DOPE ....lol
2nd Verse.........Lyrics are dope this prob ma fav verse Hook again dope hook I Think Your Emotion Is Strong In This Track A Lot Track=Dope Overall:9.5/10 |
the singing was irritable...and yea, bunched up
ur flow seems on point lyrics seem introspective/personal good track 1 |
thanks for the feed. leave links and i'll rtf
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sorry for not feeding before uhh yeh pretty dope track yoh flow was on point i liked the concept of this very deep...and the beat was pretty dope :thumbup: |
^umm okay thanks.
uppin this for more feed |
uppin this for more feed
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Intro is bad mixing shit, the things just overlap in bad way...just annoys me...fix the mixing and it'd be nice you know...
Your flow is on point, good delivery as well, it shows that this is an important topic for you. Lyrics are definitely suited for this type of track, people can relate to it, had some deep things in there. The hook is nice, sometimes vocals are bit low, and they overlap in bad way here and there as well you know...good concept for hook though Second verse same as first in fact, flow was consistent throughout entire thing. Presence is there without a doubt, I feel like you were building it up which is quite good. Fell off a little near the end but nothing bad though... Solid song! :thumbup: |
When you kick in, the flow is ill in my opinion, i dont see it fall off...
Some decent multis in their lyrics are deep, spittin real stuff hook meh, goes eith the track so yeah, its ite 2nd verse, emotion seems upped which works well Ill track mate, stay up. |
thank you both for the feed. upping this for more feed.
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the intro was nice, just stacked too many vocals on top of one another, it wasn't off key, it was just flatter notes, it all worked with the key of the beat though...ya'll got skills, the hook is dope...verses are definetly nice too, better mixing on the intro would make this track even better yo you mixed things the opposite way "..been through so much in my life...one thing that I know.." that should be louder and the other part should sound more like backround vocals cuz that's what they really are...this track's dope, being family your voices blend better than they would if you weren't and that definetly works in your favor, because you two have a really nice vocal blend ya'll got a MySpace paGe? |
dang where did u find this page?
naw we dont got a myspace |
I've heard this beat before - Ike I think. Anyways - The hook is nice, could use some touch ups n stuff, but pretty decent - I love the feel of this and the message. Whoa - I don't remember you flowin this good man. You upped your game CRAZY. Good verses, and pretty good quality - I'd work on mixing the hooks, but regardless - feeling this jam. Good looks.
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The singing is nice but seems like it goes to another beat... this beat is nice in my opinion.. i like your flow your delivery seem mad relaxed which is alright but its nice to hear some infliction in your voice every now and then... seem like the chorus would sound even better if you added another layer of you talkin over the singing.. overall the track is fairly decent, but from last i heard from you (which was a LONG time ago) you have elevated. Wish the song was longer!! RTF. :)
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wut up tho.......intro sounds a lil clutterd but it was a nice touch first and second verses was cool couple slip ups in the second verse tho hook sounds like a bunch of ad libs....i worte alot of shit in this feed but it got erased by me on accident lol overal nice drop
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Singin' was dope man i cant sing so of course it is dope ahahaha 1st: Very simple but at the sametime the flow was nice...delivery was perfect lyrics an concept was crazy...i like that shit...dubs was placed well HoOk: that shit is hot man 2nd: Better than the first verse deffinitly i like how u touched this one...like the lyrics an concepts there was more emotion on this one...man..delivery was on point as well... HOoK: Same Over-all nice track dog...like how everything came together man...mixed well only thing i see wrong was the hook where some parts of the singin seemed muffled when they coulda bin brought out a lil more.. but other than that shit was hot..my ratin 8/10 holla |
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