Unscripted vs Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R Votes

G'Luck mayne

Letz Do This!!

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-28-05 at 05:56 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Tha 1 An Onlii B has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-05 05:57 PM.

Unscripted describes how you should leave your lyrics
I'm gonna have to end and diminish your high hope spirit
You can't drop a quick 6?,How you expect to collide
It makes me laugh, The so called skills you provide
Sittin, sayin I look whack,Your Paul Wall,Sittin Sidewayz
You cant comprehend? Thats why your lookin dayzed
For you this battle must have been a great calamity
Your verse is a horror worse than the one in Amity*
When it to comes to you and me I will always precede
Its over already, you should just start to receid

Explanations

*The AmityVille Horror is a movie about the devil taking over this guyz body and it tells him to kill everyone in his family so he does...TRUE STORY TOO!!!

Unscripted has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-27-05 10:35 PM.

This wack cat here's a wannabe, and he'll even admit it
Says he's "interested" in pimpin, but that aint how he live it*
His punches dont hit, even his name dont mean shit
Cuz we already kno that he's the one n onlii bitch**
B's thinkin he's dope, but i'ma put him in his station
He drops it "like" its hot, thats cuz he got "imagination"

*look at his profile- "pimpin" is listed as an interest, but not occupation
n in case he changes it... http://img1.imagetitan.com/img1/1/8/untitled-1copy.jpg
**"b"="bitch" (e.g.- lil' kim is also known as the "queen b" or "queen bitch"

Uppin for votez...Nice drop mayne...UPPING FOR VOTEZ ON THIS

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Upping for votez on this shit...Holla at me!!!...1

Voted For: Unscripted

Unscripted describes how you should leave your lyrics
I'm gonna have to end and diminish your high hope spirit
4..no,the 2nd line didn't diss at all.
You can't drop a quick 6?,How you expect to collide
It makes me laugh, The so called skills you provide
5...too generic
Sittin, sayin I look whack,Your Paul Wall,Sittin Sidewayz
You cant comprehend? Thats why your lookin dayzed
3..poor rhyming,weak punch
For you this battle must have been a great calamity
Your verse is a horror worse than the one in Amity*
2...no,didn't connect as a punch
When it to comes to you and me I will always precede
Its over already, you should just start to receid
3...blah..not a punch

This wack cat here's a wannabe, and he'll even admit it
Says he's "interested" in pimpin, but that aint how he live it*
5...decent concept..didn't like the rhyming
His punches dont hit, even his name dont mean shit
Cuz we already kno that he's the one n onlii bitch**
6...decent
B's thinkin he's dope, but i'ma put him in his station
He drops it "like" its hot, thats cuz he got "imagination"
5...blah,boring

OK..I got to give this one to Unscripted.
Tha 1 an onlii B didn't have anything decent.A lot of his shit was just generic.I mean,look at the amity line...epotome of a generic punch.

So I vote Unscripted for throwing decent punches....

Vote-Unscripted

Upping for more votez on this one.....VOTE!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for Unscripted
 

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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

ok this was a close ass battle i almost didnt vote


Unscripted describes how you should leave your lyrics
I'm gonna have to end and diminish your high hope spirit
ok line punch wise loving the multis and vocab 6/10
You can't drop a quick 6?,How you expect to collide
It makes me laugh, The so called skills you provide
good personal good rhyme scheme 7.5/10
Sittin, sayin I look whack,Your Paul Wall,Sittin Sidewayz
You cant comprehend? Thats why your lookin dayzed
probably ur worst like 5/10
For you this battle must have been a great calamity
Your verse is a horror worse than the one in Amity*
decent line liked the vocab 6.5/10
When it to comes to you and me I will always precede
Its over already, you should just start to receid
good vocba ok closer 7/10
id liek to see more multis and personals work on ur wordplay uve elveated with ur vocab and rhyme scheme props

This wack cat here's a wannabe, and he'll even admit it
Says he's "interested" in pimpin, but that aint how he live it*
decent line 1st line was all filler though bad setup 6/10
His punches dont hit, even his name dont mean shit
Cuz we already kno that he's the one n onlii bitch**
played personals bad setup again 5/10
B's thinkin he's dope, but i'ma put him in his station
He drops it "like" its hot, thats cuz he got "imagination"
not a good line no wordplay lol 4.5/10
ok you have good lines but your setups are wear if you could nail that youd win easy no doubt upp ur vpocab and you have a problem wiht wordplay last line wasnt really good wordplay work on personals not bad at all props

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

This battle was close as hell...But I gotta give it to Tha 1 An Onlii B because his vocab was better and because he had a better structure...Once again this was a close battle but I have to give it to Tha 1 An Onlii B

Iight thanx mayne..Uppin for more ovtez on this battle right herr...Letz close this battle and declare a winner for this G's...HOLLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!...1

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Uncsripted-Your verse was quit good for a new cat...you had some good concepts and good wordplay problem is i dont think it flowed right...and breaking it down..it all comes down to flow.....if it dont flow...it aint god...nuff said..........

Tha 1 an onlii b-your verse was mediocore...ive seen better from you....you had some good concepts worded poorly but it flowed good...overall punches in this battle were not too good...but it really came down to flwo cuz everything else was missing.......

v/tha 1 an onlii

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This was feedback posted for Tha 1 An Onlii B
 

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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Vote:1 and onlii

The one and onlii
Yours was longer and he kept up your scheme scheme. Granted you jumped around a lot and didnt flow from one punch to the other but still its better than the stuff Undescried provided;

Best line:
For you this battle must have been a great calamity
Your verse is a horror worse than the one in Amity*

Worst Line:
Sittin, sayin I look whack,Your Paul Wall,Sittin Sidewayz
You cant comprehend? Thats why your lookin dayzed


Undescribed: Nobody really takes their profiles serious and thats all you went on i think it was a dumb way to find information to write a verse. Your rhyme was good , there just wasnt a lot of complex words and it was kinda jabby more then punches. I only really liked your first line.

Best line:
This wack cat here's a wannabe, and he'll even admit it
Says he's "interested" in pimpin, but that aint how he live it*

Worst Line:
is punches dont hit, even his name dont mean shit
Cuz we already kno that he's the one n onlii bitch**

Thanx for tha votez...uppin for more on this shit homiez...HOLLA!!!....1

Voted For: Unscripted

Ehh.........not from this site and so far haven't really seen anything spectacular in the Text department but Onlii B came harder with his verse with a betta consistancy and vocab even with his punches this wasn't a complete slaughter very close but Script you came with played lines and bad personals.......sorry vote goes to B

Unexplained vote removed

shit.............my fault polled wrong...........not from this site still new.........but if you can get it fix'd then thas wassup if not the my fault

Uppidy Up Up Uppin for 1 last vote on this shit right herr...C'mon letz close this shit and declare a winner...1

Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

This wack cat here's a wannabe, and he'll even admit it
Says he's "interested" in pimpin, but that aint how he live it

vs.

For you this battle must have been a great calamity
Your verse is a horror worse than the one in Amity

Punches: Neither
Wordplay: B
Flow: B
Creativity: B
Metaz: B
Multiz: None Realli
Structure: Neither

OVERALL--> Tha 1 An Onlii B


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