-fokuss- vs Mystic Chaos
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

*person wit most votes after 16 days wins

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-29-05 at 03:17 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

Close - old battle - draw

-FokusS- has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-05 02:50 PM.

Mystic Chaos has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-29-05 03:00 PM.

Give him a atlas wanna hit the map but his brain is'nt in the rite state
explains y he "washed up" when he "dishes" bullshit when up to the "plate"
Chaos Used to be the "Yes" man in the Movement most don't "No" this
But when "Soft Drinks" are mentioned is the only time "Mystic" is noticed
His Ghost Writers write suicide notes cuz they croak when the pressure is there
But someone needs to give him a rope so he can actually hang in there

Couldnt run a crew right, went on hiatus to re-pent
Put my lyrical foot to ya face ill have you seein c-ment
Lets be men, dawg from my verse your gettin 'wet'
My verse pisses on ya like ya was a pregnancy test
On the real yo, ya raps is 'tired' not yet back on ya feet
Ya verse is still like nyquil, dawg puts me right to sleep
Not yet as his peek, Sonnin this cat hes mad soft
Ya tha type ta go on a roof...........................................
........................throw ya demo just to say it dropped


eazy

good battle right here...g'luck dawg..........................................

This was feedback posted for -FokusS-
 

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This was feedback posted for -FokusS-
 

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This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

-FokusS-

Ok..in a 6-12 line battle,you shouldn't go 6.Just gives the oppenent an advantage.Your flow,was bad.Your lines were really stretched out.Shorten them fuckers up.Your best punch was in the last bar,with the suicide one.While The rest,it seemed as though your trying to be too complex.

Mystic

ok,your flow was better than Fokuss,but not all that.You even had a bar that didn't rhyme(last one).You Had some played shit like the pregnancy one.And sleep lines are bassically weak now.Your 1st bar was your best one.

Vote-Mystic...for not being as technical as Fokuss

Vote on my battle with Flow intelligent...it's on the first page in EFL.

thanks man ill rtf tomorrow when i get outa school......uppin

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This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 

u bit that last line!!!!!! i know coz poster boy says that in a battle!!! and dont lie coz i herd him say it b4 i know for a fact!

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post the link to where poster boy said it

This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 

polls famo............................................

i kno...but i think its a Jae Millz Line i'll try and find it....

who the fuck is paper boy?

and i didnt bite shit

maybe a used concept cuz all my "good" lines seem to be played now a days

ne ways uppin

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Voted For: Mystic Chaos

Mystic had a better flow, but he bit Cassidy..... Cassidy vs. Freeway, everybdy's heard that before..... i'm gonna give it to Fokuss, cuz even with the Cass lines on Mystics verse, Fokuss had better punches........

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This was feedback posted for -FokusS-
 

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This was feedback posted for Mystic Chaos
 

Mystic Chaos is in my crew.. I just want to check the polls..

werd, upping for ummmmmm votes...........................

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This was feedback posted for -FokusS-
 

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Voted For: -FokusS-

Couldnt run a crew right, went on hiatus to re-pent
Put my lyrical foot to ya face ill have you seein c-ment
ummm...ok
Lets be men, dawg from my verse your gettin 'wet'
My verse pisses on ya like ya was a pregnancy test
heard it before...so many times
On the real yo, ya raps is 'tired' not yet back on ya feet
Ya verse is still like nyquil, dawg puts me right to sleep
woah...there sparky...cass said somethin like this
Not yet as his peek, Sonnin this cat hes mad soft
Ya tha type ta go on a roof...........................................
........................throw ya demo just to say it dropped
dropped...soft....can't find the rhyme in that one



breakdown-i don't know but i am starting to guess about these lines that you put in here...both of those lines were used in one of cassidy's freestyles.....i ain't sayin you bitin but you need to watch ya self fa real............on a good note....your opener was the best part of your verse...everything else was played and whack




Fokus
Give him a atlas wanna hit the map but his brain is'nt in the rite state
explains y he "washed up" when he "dishes" bullshit when up to the "plate"
nice word-play son
Chaos Used to be the "Yes" man in the Movement most don't "No" this
But when "Soft Drinks" are mentioned is the only time "Mystic" is noticed
haha i see ya
His Ghost Writers write suicide notes cuz they croak when the pressure is there
But someone needs to give him a rope so he can actually hang in there
ok



breakdown-your verse was nice and complex...so it really caught my eye...had a couple punches in there...and that one personal on his name...fell off wit the finisher but the rest of the verse was strong...


VOTE-FOKUS

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uping.....................gime sum man......it;s been 17 days i get win rite

dis battle still aint closed......................