Kontroverzy - I'm Too Hot [HEAD BANGA!!]
 

the intro is cool. Doomsday sounds so mean. lol

oh snap. i hate these kinda beats. but thats still cool.

first verse - i think your flow is too strict. like i think you should kinda relax more with the flow and let it flow. you are on the beat though. lyrics nah. but that dont matter cause people usually just listen to the beat.

chorus - boring. nothing special

second verse -flow same as first. alicia keys line? umm its okay. lyrics again werent too good. your prescence was there. matched the beat well.


overall good club song.


rtf in my sig on the song He Watches Me

lol yeah the crowd on this site likes the underground shit. but the fanbase in my area likes the head bangin. shit like this. so i'm goin back and forth between what kind of shit to do. imma be doin alot of underground tracks starting soon though fo sho

dope ass intro mayn props to apexx aka dooms.

the beat is a fuckin banga like dayum, I like that, the ewing line is so dope....the lyrics are fa sho dope...overall dope track ima rock on my speakers for awhile. the quality is good as well.

overall dope track keep it up

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thanx famz...i appreciate the feedback..

im bout to go drop some feed on other tracks....do the same and drop feed on this..

Oh and big ups to everybody that helped me on this track

this track was coo.. hook was plain.. but it was a good club banga

yeah i have the track without the hook. im going to add another hook. I just didn't have time to think of one.

godaamn @ this track...
first things first

intro-
loving how the dude apexx got on it
it really gives it more of a protege type/up and coming star feel to it..

beat-
pretty str8
someone wanted me to do a track wit em on this beat but i turned it down...
however, im DEFINETLY liking you on this beat
i think you fit it perfectly

and word to how you get right into it
i loooooove the start of your verse, i unno why i jus do
killin them punches, shit sound like something you be spittin on the street to a group...and thats wassup
ya first verse is almost perfect in my book, i aint findin nuttin i dont like in it...if i had to find one thing itd be quality, and even thats pretty damn decent.
emotion is off the fucking chain, like i said i picture you spittin this to a group...

the 2nd verse is pretty solid as well
not as good as the first, mostly because your flow was a tad bit off in some parts
lyrics is still pretty str8
overall i say the 1st verse outshined the 2nd though, but hey still nice...

but the number one thing im not feeling in this track is the hook..
i know hooks can be a pain in the ass most of the time, but just sit down and think about it for awhile and youll eventually get one..
the whole point of a hook is to make it catchy, nah mean?
i think it wouldve been crazy had you kept the whole concept of it now, but thrown in something right before it sorta like..
"i thought you knew? im tooo hot for yalllll man"
^^just an example
but yea, hook could use some work, but thats really it.

overall, i was most definetly feeling this track
i listened to it a few times, out of pleasure..
most of the times ill jus peep a track once, maybe twice just to write up some feed for it..but this i actually bumped cause i liked it. so thats saying something
8/10

keep em coming fam
and we should hit up a collab sometime

Damn the beat is kinda weird but im feelin ya flow the song isn't the best quality new style im feelin it man sounds like u just put the speakers to the mic and recorded hot rhymes man 8.5/10

Word much respect for the feedback. Jea im going to redo the hook once i have more time and i think of something interesting too say..i might even sample it with some rappers from other songs. I respect the honest feedback

ya flows a lil' strict, instead of lettin it come out naturally it seemed really structured, but uhm, the lyrics were nice *raspberry* I wasn't bout to read, I actually heard everything you said... Lyrics were pretty good, flow was good for the beat, intro- nice by Apexx, i was feeling both verses... your energy was pretty good on the track, stay up..

this wasn't bad, the only thing I wasn't feelin was the Chorus, It seem like you coulda added much more to it. But yeah, straight track.......
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thanx ma i appreciate the honest feedback. LOL yeah i know about the hook. and i dont think it was that structured but hey thats the shit i dont notice right?

respect

thanx famz. i appreciate it.,

God Damn!This is the best song to ever Hit The RV cause that Beat is Hard as hell and the Hook was on Point,The Lyrics were Ok but the Flow was Tremendous.You said youll Return The Favor but i say you dont have to cause Hearing this Track was Worth The Time.You Deserve More Respect In this Site.Well Ill Give This Track a 9.8 out of 10.0

Hook-9.9
Beat-10.0
Lyrics-9.0
Flow-10.0

Good Shit My Nigga Keep Doing your Thing cause you got some skills and to whoever made that beat,Mad Fucking Props :thumbup:

Ok...wuzn't feelin the beat..
Quality wasn't the best..but I still able to hear what u were saying..so it's all good.
Hook was blah in my opinion...didn't like that.
Flow,delivery and everything was fine..nothing I can really say wrong wit it.

ur lyrics were all OK..except for that jet-son line,been used a lot..LoL.

So overall...a decent track...
it was just the hook and beat that didn't work for me...

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its hot man dooms was good too keep it up

DAMN homie. LOL thanx famz. i appreciate it alot

Everybody says i have a god damn lisp. wtf is that. and where am i sayin it.

lol, dope intro by dooms. nice beat, nice lyrics. i dont think i u got a lisp tho. u gotta git a video or sum shit my spicca, shit'd b ill. werd

Solid track!

keep this shit banging!

AI!

sounds like was flow was orced but it was on beat

sounds like was flow was orced but it was on beat
the lyrics..i dunno i know club bangers are about flow but at least put a couple good meta4's or somthin in there
over all 7/10

word at the video. boom Clap, ba boom ba boom CLAP.. <--beat

then i come in with the shades.

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, this shit's fuckin redonkulous. Kon, you know this is going on that 'mixtape mixtape' right? Way to kill it. 1

i did put metaphores in there...read lyrics. Lol @ meta4's

The intro was hilarious. But anyways onto your song..

The beat was cool. I'm sure it would bump with a system. The flow was nice. Didnt fall of or anything. Your mic presence was felt. You spit it nice. Your lyrics were cool. Some were definantly better than others. Your George Bush and Jetson lines were my favorite. Just a tight track dog. I enjoyed it

Thanx Homie. and fo sho. i just gotta fux around with that Hook and it shuld be a wrap. and big ups on that intro. i asked for an intro that got everyone hyped up and ready for the track. and you gave me even more than that. respect

thanx famz i really appreciate that..

getz at cha nigga

Intro: Dooms... get at me for one of them right thurr!!!! Feeling the intro... he was on some DJ kayslay / papoose shyt...lol

Beat: Grimy... just how i like 'em... :thumbup:

1st verse... simple lyrics... kinda like when i did my Brooklyn joint but on a different flow... up ya quality on ya verse to Doom's level cuz it definitely sounded different between the two... words were clear... just soundy ..iono... ashy?... almost raspy like....

Hook:... too much coulda been done with this for you to settle for that... get creative with ya hooks... they connect ya verses and add life to ya tracks

2nd Verse: same as the first... safe track... especially if that's what they into in ya hood... do you man.... stay up

decent overall... 7/10

ehhh and that's not a lisp y'all hearing... it's da hiss in his track... just needs to compress and de-ess that shyt ... that all :thumbup:

iight, let's see........

intro- iwas definitely feelin it....... i don't know why......

1st verse- iight, flow was too uptight, u sound like u practiced too long instead of havin fun with it........ nice voice, u sorta sound like Juelz Santana........

2nd verse- wasn't really feelin your actual lyrics as much....... sounded like it flowed better than the 1st, but rhymes were so-so..........

overall- 7.5/10........ good beat, good intro....... uptight flow and sorta simple rhymes got u tho.......

lol @ practiced...word up..thanx for feedback.

and again. i know about. the hook. im going to change that up.

and apexx has good equipment..i have a mic and a sock

and its hard to cram lines in there. i think i had decent lines. because it wasnt a lyrical track. you wanna hear some shit. I might let ya'll peep the intro for my album. thats some lyrical shit

Oh yeah man, you know how we do it. Go hard or go home, lol. But yo, when the final version is finished, send me a copy of the file. I'm working on another project that you'd definitely be interested in.

oh yeah man, you know how that goes. I go hard or go home, and you def murked the monkey shit outta the beat. But yo, as soon as you get the finalized copy, shoot me the file. I'm working on something you're definitely gonna be interested.

alright homie. Will Do. thanks again famz

I was feelin that shit homie...Especially tha beat but tha lyrics were pretty nice and I thought your flow was pretty good also...Keep at it cuz your nice at this...Theres nothin for you to leave feedback on thats mine so dont worry bout rtf...HOLLA!!!!...1

thanx man i appreciate it. getz at me homie