Will S.Unyu vs Apostrophe
 

Battle Rules:

1:00 - 1:30
No Biting
No Hate or D/R votes
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after you check in, you got 5 days to drop ya shit


Minimum posts to vote: 1500

Check in by: 10-31-05 at 09:57 AM

Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

Will S.Unyu has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-05 10:10 PM.

Apostrophe has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-30-05 10:12 PM.

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Things needed to know

1. 412 is the area code in pittsburgh
2.green meadows, despite its name, is a hood in pittsburgh

This was feedback posted for Apostrophe
 

i cant vote coz he's in my crew will... but this is an ight battle..

This was feedback posted for Will S.Unyu
 

checkin polls

















:cool:

This was feedback posted for Apostrophe
 

Didnt know you did audio,

checkin this fam.....

Voted For: Will S.Unyu

alright listening

Apostraphe:

hmm. your quality isnt that good. but it doesnt matter because its a battle track. Not an actual song. Umm the worst thing about your verse is your flow. Don't cut it up like that. you should just keep it flowing your like..I....am....sick....with....it , but you should be like..>IM SICK WIT IT..naww meanz..the lyrics was nice though. Nice lines in there. your emotion was aiight..

6/10

WIll S.Unyu:

jea you got this. You was on that gangsta tip. and you had the better quality and flow obviously. the lyrics werent really that much better. but you had a much better flow and your verse was alot clearer. Your shit was nice famz.

7/10

vote: will Sun Yu

This was feedback posted for Will S.Unyu
 

:slick:
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This was feedback posted for Apostrophe
 

pollz fam..............................................

wtf there's another way you can check the polls
BY FUCKIN VOTING

he's in our crew u dumb fuck..............................

crew votes are allowed, YOU DUMBFUCK!
Read the rules, YOU DUMBFUCK
before you call someone else dumb, YOU DUMBFUCK!

This was feedback posted for Will S.Unyu
 

yoo i like ya shit man.. word..... ya shit was nice!!!

holla

This was feedback posted for Will S.Unyu
 

I just want to check the polls..

..as I'm interested, like turkey sandwhiches.

you can check the polls by actually voting!!
pricks

Voted For: Apostrophe



Ok...

Dope Beat..


Intro:Meh....Nothing Special

YOu Come In

Meh YOu Aint Got Much Confidence Lol@will sun yu line

Sound like you mumbling cant hear u that well

it aint very long

Well The Punchlines wot i herd were good but quality was bad

You Seem To Be Mumbling....

Vote GOes To


Will Sun Yu

Good battle tho apos u gettin better


Vote switched

Will Ya punchlins are good lmao@seem straight line

Dope Beat

ya Flow works well

love how you come in like jus talkin on the beat then beat comes in properly

DOOPE


Delivery is much better

presence is too


Umm sorry for the top

it cut off half my post n voted for wrong person SHIT THING!!

This was feedback posted for Apostrophe
 

checking polls n shit.............................................

WHY THE FUCK!
Stop checkin the fuckin polls
you can VOTE and check the polls at the same time.
stop cloggin up the fuckin thread if you're not gonna vote

Voted For: Will S.Unyu

Apostrophe - Vocals need to be lowered......drastically. Punches were pretty mediocre. Flow was off as fuck. I understand that you are new to this, but you really need to step your shit up.

Will S Unyou - Flow was pretty nice. You seem a little more comfortable on the mic than this other dude. Your punches weren't that great either, but much better than his. You actually came with a few nice punches in the second verse.

Vote - Will S Unyu

I hope you realize that people would have to check the polls to see that.......LMAO...

This was feedback posted for Will S.Unyu
 

Will S.Unyu took this shit, lmao.

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uppin
2 more votes!!
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This was feedback posted for Will S.Unyu
 

E-Style..........u got this ez.....................

This was feedback posted for Will S.Unyu
 

i tried voting on tihs but my posts ain't up yet... maybe i'll try and get my other acount combined with this one... i'll holla at strobe so y'all can get this shyt moving

Voted For: Apostrophe

listening:

apostraphe meh verse was ok i like a few bars in ya diss beat choice was poor...intro is meh...quality could do wit fixing up...flow needs improving too the vocal volume as well needs attention...it jus went BOOM...parents shoulda aborted ya bar was ok...been used before though...

Will S.Unyu: using a memphis bleek beat...quality is poor...flows better...i ain't feelin the gangsta style diss rap you bring to this at all...apo had some comical stance to his verse and to be honest...omg @ you biting the hook...na i ain't feeling this...quality makes some of ya bar inaudible...

v/apo...reason...ok here it goes...1st beat choice i thought will's was better but thats just personal opinions...2nd apo tried some humour in his verse where as will went for the typical ima kill you routine in his raps...3rd will flowed better but his style i wasn't feeling where as i wasn't impressed wit apos either but i was less impressed wit his if ya catch my drift...4th...biting that hook & re-wording it to you wack you wack you wack instead of d-block d-block d-block is horrible...

so thats my main reasons for making this vote...