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Allah 10-31-05 04:13 PM

Allah vs Natural killa
 
PINK SLIP BATTLE

loser gets IP Banned from the site.

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding

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voters must have registered before August 2005.

explain your votes.

Minimum posts to vote: 40

Check in by: 10-31-05 at 04:43 PM

Must drop verse in 55 minutes after check in.

Allah 10-31-05 04:19 PM

you gonna check in or what?.......................................

noname 10-31-05 04:19 PM

nigga...Hold the fuck up.............

I'll check in soon....

System 10-31-05 04:23 PM

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-05 04:23 PM.

System 10-31-05 04:24 PM

Allah has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-05 04:24 PM.

noname 10-31-05 04:44 PM

sopposely armed to the "teeth"..when Kempo got ya bleeding from the"tooth"
just look at how paranoid you are....puttin "no feeding" in the rules..?
I'll have u readin the truth..when I say you ain't shit in this world,
cuz while "allahcums" on AIM....he could never do it for his girl
it's hard to beat u badly cause your familar with getting your ass beat,
your rhymes ussually work about as good....as WBL this past week
if life's sopposed to be an "album"..then your just living up a "skit"
Allah's "fallen" off so bad already..how'm I spposed to give him the "slip"?
your so full of shit..and your prolly the worst thing ever to hit keys
I said "allah,your wack!!"..and his excuse..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Allah
^^na man. I only do quickies..

noname 10-31-05 04:55 PM

Hurry Up And Post Your Verse!!!

Allah 10-31-05 04:58 PM

I will.. why havent you posted yours??..................

noname 10-31-05 04:58 PM

I did post mine...................................

Allah 10-31-05 05:08 PM

Pink slip battle me??

hahaha

Nigga your fucking shitty, everything ya drop’s poop
and we gonna see ‘killa band’… like camron started a rock group
I really love basketball, just like some other suckers
So I never thought I‘d say this, but N B A whack mother fucker
Excuse me for half assing, but how weak can u be cunt?
I’m known for champin’ leagues, ur known for 6, 000 posts in 3 months
they says OHH when I spit, you getting wrecked kid
while people do say O’hhhh after N… but only in the alphabet bitch
You cant spit for shit man, don’t act like ya verse clever
Everybody’ll start rapping whack.. since natural flow is the worse ever

Magic5 10-31-05 05:15 PM

Voted For: Allah

Allah

Nigga your fucking shitty, everything ya drop’s poop
and we gonna see ‘killa band’… like camron started a rock group
Decent..
I really love basketball, just like some other suckers
So I never thought I‘d say this, but N B A whack mother fucker
Cool..
Excuse me for half assing, but how weak can u be cunt?
I’m known for champin’ leagues, ur known for 6, 000 posts in 3 months
Haha.. Dope..
they says OHH when I spit, you getting wrecked kid
while people do say O’hhhh after N… but only in the alphabet bitch
Nah..
You cant spit for shit man, don’t act like ya verse clever
Everybody’ll start rapping whack.. since natural flow is the worse ever
Cool..

Natural Killa

sopposely armed to the "teeth"..when Kempo got ya bleeding from the"tooth"
just look at how paranoid you are....puttin "no feeding" in the rules..?
..And? There's no punch..
I'll have u readin the truth..when I say you ain't shit in this world,
cuz while "allahcums" on AIM....he could never do it for his girl
Played..
it's hard to beat u badly cause your familar with getting your ass beat,
your rhymes ussually work about as good....as WBL this past week
Decent..
if life's sopposed to be an "album"..then your just living up a "skit"
Allah's "fallen" off so bad already..how'm I spposed to give him the "slip"?
Nah..
your so full of shit..and your prolly the worst thing ever to hit keys
I said "allah,your wack!!"..and his excuse..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Allah
^^na man. I only do quickies..

There's no punch..

Allah won this battle. He came with a few dope punches, some decent ones.. and only one that I didn't like. Natural Killa had one decent punch.. the rest was either played or wasn't worded into a punch. He had a shit load of just random statements that aren't relative to a battle at all. I have to vote Allah, yo. He came with the better overall verse.

Vote - Allah

Daubs 10-31-05 05:19 PM

This was feedback posted for Allah
 
I really love basketball, just like some other suckers
So I never thought I‘d say this, but N B A whack mother fucker

lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Just check the polls on this though.

Dickard. 10-31-05 05:22 PM

This was feedback posted for Natural killa
 
NOT elligable to vote on tihs one man

so pllaz..

David Lama 10-31-05 05:24 PM

This was feedback posted for Allah
 
word thanks guys....

are mods like suppose to know about pink slip battles

anyways

1-0 me..

up for more.

Nynth Degree 10-31-05 05:29 PM

Voted For: Allah

Natural Killa:
sopposely armed to the "teeth"..when Kempo got ya bleeding from the"tooth"
just look at how paranoid you are....puttin "no feeding" in the rules..?
The first time I battled on this system, I put "no feeding" in the rules too, 'cuz I didn't know the drops would be blind.
I'll have u readin the truth..when I say you ain't shit in this world,
cuz while "allahcums" on AIM....he could never do it for his girl
This was actually remotely decent.
it's hard to beat u badly cause your familar with getting your ass beat,
your rhymes ussually work about as good....as WBL this past week
Concept was ok, but could've been worded better.
if life's sopposed to be an "album"..then your just living up a "skit"
Allah's "fallen" off so bad already..how'm I spposed to give him the "slip"?
No.
your so full of shit..and your prolly the worst thing ever to hit keys
I said "allah,your wack!!"..and his excuse..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Allah
^^na man. I only do quickies..

Weak closer.

Allah:

Nigga your fucking shitty, everything ya drop’s poop
and we gonna see ‘killa band’… like camron started a rock group
Decent opener, haven't seen his name flipped like that.
I really love basketball, just like some other suckers
So I never thought I‘d say this, but N B A whack mother fucker
Lol was feeling this.
Excuse me for half assing, but how weak can u be cunt?
I’m known for champin’ leagues, ur known for 6, 000 posts in 3 months
Good and direct, but doesn't connect since his posts were transfered from alias accounts.
they says OHH when I spit, you getting wrecked kid
while people do say O’hhhh after N… but only in the alphabet bitch
Decent, not as good as the NBA play, but still hit.
You cant spit for shit man, don’t act like ya verse clever
Everybody’ll start rapping whack.. since natural flow is the worse ever
[b]Another decent nameplay, but it worked.

Allah had some nice shit in his verse, although he kinda hung on the nameplays a little too much. Some of 'em were pretty good though. Natural Killa came with 1 alright line and the rest was lacking.

V//Allah, even though this will probably be DQ'd as a hate vote. :rolleyes:

Magic5 10-31-05 05:30 PM

^ Nobody mods this forum. After this battle gets closed the winner needs to pm strobe to have the loser banned.. as he's the only one who can do it.

King Solo 11-01-05 01:42 AM

Voted For: Allah

sopposely armed to the "teeth"..when Kempo got ya bleeding from the"tooth"
just look at how paranoid you are....puttin "no feeding" in the rules..?
nah, this is weak...especially cuz ya tried to play off that rules shit, doesn't work NK...
I'll have u readin the truth..when I say you ain't shit in this world,
cuz while "allahcums" on AIM....he could never do it for his girl
played concept really, but ya flipped it into a personal so that was aight...
it's hard to beat u badly cause your familar with getting your ass beat,
your rhymes ussually work about as good....as WBL this past week
the setup was fuckin wack, but the punch was nice...
if life's sopposed to be an "album"..then your just living up a "skit"
Allah's "fallen" off so bad already..how'm I spposed to give him the "slip"?
forced wordplay, but ok...
your so full of shit..and your prolly the worst thing ever to hit keys
I said "allah,your wack!!"..and his excuse..
Quote:
Originally Posted by Allah
^^na man. I only do quickies..

how many times has it been said, using quotes like that is FUCKIN PLAYED TO FUCK...

WoW....NK that verse was weak, ure flow was off in places, the fact that you are still forcing ya wordplay is letting you down. most of the bars seemed to be half-assed, sum with weak setups and nice punchlines, some the other way around...overall you were far too inconsistent in this battle, and in my opinion you viewed Allah as sum herb, but ya shud've listened when ppl told you how dope he is...4/10



Nigga your fucking shitty, everything ya drop’s poop
and we gonna see ‘killa band’… like camron started a rock group
wow at you sayin "poop" like a 5yr old, this bar was ok...
I really love basketball, just like some other suckers
So I never thought I‘d say this, but N B A whack mother fucker
LMFAO!! this bar killed me, funniest shit in the whole battle, OMFG!! Lmao!!...
Excuse me for half assing, but how weak can u be cunt?
I’m known for champin’ leagues, ur known for 6, 000 posts in 3 months
everyone has tried this, and it is always gay...
they says OHH when I spit, you getting wrecked kid
while people do say O’hhhh after N… but only in the alphabet bitch
concept is played, an ok flip on it...
You cant spit for shit man, don’t act like ya verse clever
Everybody’ll start rapping whack.. since natural flow is the worse ever
this kinda personal on his name was done like a week ago...

not really the best verse i've seen, i know you can come better...the flow was nice, feelin the laid back style like a few ppl use on RV...you had some played shit but on some you flipped it quite well, for me that NBA line won the battle for you cuz it was better by itself than NK's entire fuckin verse, OH SHIT!!! that bar cracked me up, Lmao...6/10



V/ - Allah

Castro... 11-01-05 02:10 PM

This was feedback posted for Allah
 
checkin pollz......................................

Zone Out 11-01-05 02:23 PM

Voted For: Allah

LMFAO
Weak battle, a few hard hittin punches
NK actually had a few nice ass punches

"I'll have u readin the truth..when I say you ain't shit in this world,
cuz while "allahcums" on AIM....he could never do it for his girl
"

^that was tight

"if life's sopposed to be an "album"..then your just living up a "skit"
Allah's "fallen" off so bad already..how'm I spposed to give him the "slip"?"

^that was tight
the only thing thats gay about ya verse is the damn "quote" marks.
the rest was blah, garbage

Allah on the other hand
had a much well rounded verse.

the N B A line was dope as hell to me.
the 6,000 posts bar was tight
the OOO'hh punch was dope
the natural flow punch was aiigh, it wasnt garbage

v/Allah, this battle was closer than what it should've been.
pZ

Past Tense 11-01-05 03:22 PM

This was feedback posted for Allah
 
damn i'm feelin this more......but i cant vote yet so count me outta this

v would be for Allah

Zone Out 11-01-05 03:55 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher
Voted For: Allah


if life's sopposed to be an "album"..then your just living up a "skit"
Allah's "fallen" off so bad already..how'm I spposed to give him the "slip"?
forced wordplay, but ok...

WoW....NK that verse was weak, ure flow was off in places, the fact that you are still forcing ya wordplay is letting you down.

how the FUCK is that forced wordplay?
do you know what forced wordplay is?

and another thing, its text, how can the flow be off?
he's not rappin to a beat, and he didnt force any wordplay NO WHERE!

I understand some of you dont like NK, but dont hate vote just to get him banned.
dont be biased and harsh for no reason.

my bad for voting twice, I just seen that if I had to comment on it.

50Cal. 11-01-05 04:33 PM

Voted For: Allah

allah had better flow and more clever punches here not to mention better vocab and name plays.n.k had a decent flow but most of his shit was filler and didnt hit hard.his personals were either corny as fuck or non existent.his vocab was decent though.so with much better punches and personals i gotta go with allah on this one.


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