Mimesis vs +Stealth+
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 14 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 11-01-05 at 03:49 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

+Stealth+ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-05 05:51 PM.

Just Keep Writing Ya Frees At Least They Get There Usual-Glares//
But Beating-Me.......................Is Like Def Kids Winning Musical Chairs//
Stealth Turns ya "DREAMS" Into "Nitemares" So Fear-Ya-Mattress//
Or Imma Have You "FACE-DEATH".....Like MIRRORS-IN-CASKETS!!!//(Damn)
Go Head Faggot, Use your Old Unattractive-Style...
.....................I Feel Bad I Have To Murk A HYPERACTIVE-CHILD!!!//(its true)
This Dis-Owned Ya Flo But Dont Go Stay Longer To Recieve-The-Damage//
You Might Think Your Skill Is The Best Here....But Ever1 Else Believes-Its-Average//
My "Keys" Is Savage Like Cavemen When Im Textin'....Let Me Ask Ya A Question//
How You Think Ya The Best-When Your Lines Are More STRETCHED Than FAT JOES INTESTINES?!!!//

finish this:

"Light U Up" Like A "Blunt"...I'll "Stunt On This Runt"..."Open You Up Like A Present" With My Lyrical Presence//
Cause Facin Me's Like "Dieing In Jail"..Your "Dead Before The End Of Your Sentence"//(WOW!)

ITS DAT SERIOUS

R.I.P.

Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-31-05 06:38 PM.

I'll post my verse when I get home from school. Word.

Kid, you're fucking garbage.

Seriously.. everything around is you trash.. don't you see this?
That's why we say Stealth it when we don't want to read shit
You'll feel this when my fists hit your face, you're a mess herb
I'll just follow your name and add a fucking loss to your record
I have seen you yo.. do you really think your going to own me?
Motherfucker.. everybody half decent dropped that style in '03
Ayo... I don't need colors to say you shouldn't be rappin dude
I'm leave ya redefined, Teal.. when I leave you black and blue
And looking at your sig.. I can just tell I'ma be rippin this lame
It really ain't that serious.......it's just another win to my name

Peace.

Voted For: +Stealth+

Seriously.. everything around is you trash.. don't you see this?
That's why we say Stealth it when we don't want to read shit
2/10..weak opener,poor attempt at nameplay.
You'll feel this when my fists hit your face, you're a mess herb
I'll just follow your name and add a fucking loss to your record
3/10..1st line was direct filler and punch wuz boring
I have seen you yo.. do you really think your going to own me?
Motherfucker.. everybody half decent dropped that style in '03
6/10..good punch
Ayo... I don't need colors to say you shouldn't be rappin dude
I'm leave ya redefined, Teal.. when I leave you black and blue
2/10...nope,this didn't work..kinda stupid
And looking at your sig.. I can just tell I'ma be rippin this lame
It really ain't that serious.......it's just another win to my name
0/10.....this was..................not a punch -_-

13/50(26%)
Mimesis...wtf verse was this?Has to be the worst I've seen from you in a whole.Ur punches didn't connect..esspeccially the attempted nameplays.You had direct filler in ya verse,in the 2nd bar.And your rhyme scheme was lacking.PLus...your last bar wasn't even a punch.

Just Keep Writing Ya Frees At Least They Get There Usual-Glares//
But Beating-Me.......................Is Like Def Kids Winning Musical Chairs//
3/10..punch is played
Stealth Turns ya "DREAMS" Into "Nitemares" So Fear-Ya-Mattress//
Or Imma Have You "FACE-DEATH".....Like MIRRORS-IN-CASKETS!!!//(Damn)
5/10..liked the 1st line more as mirror lines are played,ur rhyming was dope tho
Go Head Faggot, Use your Old Unattractive-Style...
.....................I Feel Bad I Have To Murk A HYPERACTIVE-CHILD!!!//(its true)
3/10..not feelin this..
This Dis-Owned Ya Flo But Dont Go Stay Longer To Recieve-The-Damage//
You Might Think Your Skill Is The Best Here....But Ever1 Else Believes-Its-Average//
4/10..ok,but a lot of people do consider him above average
My "Keys" Is Savage Like Cavemen When Im Textin'....Let Me Ask Ya A Question//
How You Think Ya The Best-When Your Lines Are More STRETCHED Than FAT JOES INTESTINES?!!!//
5/10...good.
"Light U Up" Like A "Blunt"...I'll "Stunt On This Runt"..."Open You Up Like A Present" With My Lyrical Presence//
Cause Facin Me's Like "Dieing In Jail"..Your "Dead Before The End Of Your Sentence"//(WOW!)
6/10...nice closer..

26/60(32%)
Ok,you had played lines..like the musical chairs and mirror ones.The hyper active one was kinda dumb.The fat Joe bar was decent..and your closer was nice.Best thing in your whole verse was your rhyme scheme really..

So...my HONEST opinion...

Vote-Stealth...

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

mimesis you abuser lol.............................

LMFAO. Can anybody say dr?

He had 0 punches, 0 personals.. but yet I lost? Fuck out of here and never vote on any of my battles again.

Generic wordplay = 5/10.. personal = 0/10.

Lmao. Natural Killa, you're a clown, man.

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This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

this was a weak battle....mimesis u came with sum bullshit for this battle, u can do way better....

....but you won this.....BARELY!!!

STFU mimesis ya shit was wack u aiont even know how to do punchlines! every line was basically a hard punch! yall dont even know how 2 rhyme (most of you) from what ive seen the only real good mcs are marvjay, UNF and mr multie! and im new so his vote counts how can it be dr when no1 knows me smfh dumbass!

Lmfao @ your view of real emcees.

I've ko'ed UNF, and owned Marvjay 3 times, twice with knockouts!!

Mimesis won here, but if he tried he would have royally whored you.

stfu b4 u get owned
ill battle you,

ALL YOU BROUGHT WAS GENERIC WORDPLAY, QUEERBOY.

My half ass personals > your all out verse.

And word to me having already beat UNF.. and MarvJay being trash. Mr. Multie is average at best. Fall the fuck back, homo.

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This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

pollz............................................. ......

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

Omg u had this... I probablly can't vote since you like black listed my oh well. Good verse keep up ur shit man noo beef wit me pz

This was feedback posted for +Stealth+
 

:slick:
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This was feedback posted for +Stealth+
 

so do you wanna battle or not stealth?,...........

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This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

I have seen you yo.. do you really think your going to own me?
Motherfucker.. everybody half decent dropped that style in '03

VS Nowt.

EZ mate.

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Voted For: +Stealth+

well sorry to say but i was really feelin stealths verse, n he had some good punchlines, mimesis ehh ive seen wayy better from you, i wasnt really feelin ur vers that much but good battle

im have to go wit stealth, i was feelin his punchlines, n his vocab...but once again GOOD BATTLE.....RTF, drop an honest vote on my battle against GKillaz05

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

i aint battlin gon here again coz ppl cant vote properly his verse was garbage if u came from the website i came from yall wouldnt even stand a chance for reel....

anyway whos winnin?

coz on the top of the site it says 2-0 to me!

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

checkin pollz..........................................

Just wait until the people who are good start voting.

If what you posted is considered "good" on that site.. then that site is complete garbage.

mimesis seriously u r actually complete trash! i didt even go hard! i seen ya shit b4 ure hella wack uve never been gd!

mimesis seriously u r actually complete trash! i didt even go hard! i seen ya shit b4 ure hella wack uve never been gd! wait till u see a real verse from me! thats if i even battle again after wack newbs like u run ya mouth!

Voted For: Mimesis

Mimesis got this for overall better verse and had the more wittier punches and blah... Should really have to explain. Easy win. Other kid gotta elevate.

Voted For: +Stealth+

+Stealth+ - Good spit, you had good wordplay, punches were hitten hard and it flowed well.

Best Line - "Light U Up" Like A "Blunt"...I'll "Stunt On This Runt"..."Open You Up Like A Present" With My Lyrical Presence//
Cause Facin Me's Like "Dieing In Jail"..Your "Dead Before The End Of Your Sentence"//(WOW!)

Worst Line - Stealth Turns ya "DREAMS" Into "Nitemares" So Fear-Ya-Mattress//
Or Imma Have You "FACE-DEATH".....Like MIRRORS-IN-CASKETS!!!//(Damn)

Mimesis - Your spit was decent, not your best, but great flow, and iight punches.

Best Line - I have seen you yo.. do you really think your going to own me?
Motherfucker.. everybody half decent dropped that style in '03

Worst Line - And looking at your sig.. I can just tell I'ma be rippin this lame
It really ain't that serious.......it's just another win to my name

OVERALL - This was a good battle, but I liked +Stealth+ 's verse more, he flowed well, had strong punches and personals. Mim I think you should have tried harder, you could have merked him. - No Hate.

Vote - +Stealth+

Man, shut the fuck up. You are fucking horribl.e. Everybody who's half good stopped using your wack ass style in '03. Fuck out of here with your played bullshit.

Just wait until the good people start voting, queerboy.

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man stealth, this is like ur 1st battle here.........
and u shit talking to someone who would seriously own u if u were worth it
if u want to battle #2, holla at me

This was feedback posted for Mimesis
 

yo tha outha guy a biter

i seen da other shit somewhere to but in particular....da 1st five lines are this nigga Invincible's on gworld

http://gunitworld.com/forum/index.p...pic=179197&st=0


beeeeeeeeeee ez homie, fareal

^ Thanks for the update. I'll look into it later..