~Souljah~ vs fraud
 

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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

DONT DUCK YOU BITCH!!! :cussing:

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Expired battle win - close

~Souljah~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-05 06:02 PM.

fraud has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-02-05 07:48 PM.

~Souljah~ I chose to attack you, some would call it beef
but if you asked ‘any body’ they’ll call it comic relief I’m eager to beef, I’ve never been taught to be cautious
got ya fakeness exposed like porn stars walkin’ topless
u carry a tune? nah you’ll carry a tomb, listen g’s
you aint ‘sick’ you’ve just got immune deficiencies plus I’ve got time to stop you like freezers full of clocks
then blow your brain circuits to pieces, an leave you full of shock
maybe he likes the taste of chrome? I doubt that
so to make his body feel at ‘home’ I dumped him ‘outback’
and if you think about it?, ya skills aint worth being split apart
cuz ~souljah~ ya Rawflowz hard to read in the |||DRKMAN|||

~souljah
rawflowz
|||DRKMAN|||
are all hes alias names....

dark-man / drkman you should get it.....

i forgot to hit enter so the strcture is kinda fucked up

this calls for a round of applause......you actually showed up.....you just fulla surprises aint ya lil guy?

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CHEA!!!
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where the votes at CHEA!!!!

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where the votes at CHEA!!!!

lemme up this ish one time for real

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Can We Get Some Fucking Votes In This Bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!

vote for fucks sakeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee e

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Voted For: ~Souljah~

~Souljah~ I chose to attack you, some would call it beef
but if you asked ‘any body’ they’ll call it comic relief I’m eager to beef,
nothing special really
I’ve never been taught to be cautious
got ya fakeness exposed like porn stars walkin’ topless
ok line but a played concept
u carry a tune? nah you’ll carry a tomb, listen g’s
you aint ‘sick’ you’ve just got immune deficiencies
wack line
plus I’ve got time to stop you like freezers full of clocks
then blow your brain circuits to pieces, an leave you full of shock
this line wa sprobably my favotire out of all of them
maybe he likes the taste of chrome? I doubt that
so to make his body feel at ‘home’ I dumped him ‘outback’
ok line ur coming played though
and if you think about it?, ya skills aint worth being split apart
cuz ~souljah~ ya Rawflowz hard to read in the |||DRKMAN|||
your best line but it doesnt flow but my favorite line by far

OVERALL YOU NEED TO ELEVATE RHYME SCHEME IS WEAK LAST LINE DIDNT FLOW STRUCTURE IS HORRIBLE AND THERE WERE ONLY WEAK PERSONALS ELEVATE

You're as sick as what?......don't try feed me these lies
Tryna hide the fact that you "don't make the grade" like a "D"-sguise
PRETTY COOL LINE
Me duck???that's like the pot calling the fucking kettle black
Your flow's absurd like a fat chick under the rainbow like "where's my skittles at?"
LOL I LIKED THIS LINE NICE
The title of wack stick's to you like metal curves to horse hooves
Wack at everything, you ain't even top of your game at false truths*OK LINE NOTHING SPECIAL
I could strap a boulder to my leg and drown, you'd still be far below
Your rhymes scheme's a joke at your expense like the bar below
OK LINE
Question time: what goes quack, snap and bends over at will
Answer: hoe show breakin his back to duck, through minus skill
COOL CLOSER MY FAVORITE LINE BY FAR PROPS
OK OVERALL YOU FLOW IS BETTER BUT UR STRUCTURE WAS FUCKED IN PARTS TOO I WAS DISSAPOINTED IN THE LACK OF PERSONALS BUT U HAD COOL WORDPLAY SO PROPS

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Voted For: ~Souljah~

You're as sick as what?......don't try feed me these lies
Tryna hide the fact that you "don't make the grade" like a "D"-sguise
^^decent opener
Me duck???that's like the pot calling the fucking kettle black
Your flow's absurd like a fat chick under the rainbow like "where's my skittles at?"
^^lmao, koo, funny but not hard hitting
The title of wack stick's to you like metal curves to horse hooves
Wack at everything, you ain't even top of your game at false truths*
^^ok,.....
I could strap a boulder to my leg and drown, you'd still be far below
Your rhymes scheme's a joke at your expense like the bar below
^^decent
Question time: what goes quack, snap and bends over at will
Answer: hoe show breakin his back to duck, through minus skill
^^original,...very different
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Souljah~ I chose to attack you, some would call it beef
but if you asked ‘any body’ they’ll call it comic relief
^^eh,not feelin it
I’m eager to beef, I’ve never been taught to be cautious
got ya fakeness exposed like porn stars walkin’ topless
^^played concept
u carry a tune? nah you’ll carry a tomb, listen g’s
you aint ‘sick’ you’ve just got immune deficiencies
^^weak
plus I’ve got time to stop you like freezers full of clocks
then blow your brain circuits to pieces, an leave you full of shock
^^nah
maybe he likes the taste of chrome? I doubt that
so to make his body feel at ‘home’ I dumped him ‘outback’
^^lol,....
and if you think about it?, ya skills aint worth being split apart
cuz ~souljah~ ya Rawflowz hard to read in the |||DRKMAN|||
^^wasnt feelin the closer
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overall im gonna go with souljah, he seemed to have slightly more complex punches n they connected well...
both came simular in this battle...close match i suppose..

Voted For: ~Souljah~

~Souljah~ I chose to attack you, some would call it beef
but if you asked ‘any body’ they’ll call it comic relief I’m eager to beef, I’ve never been taught to be cautious
....weak,too much filler.
got ya fakeness exposed like porn stars walkin’ topless
u carry a tune? nah you’ll carry a tomb, listen g’s
..weak punch,and in the 1st line,porn lines are played
you aint ‘sick’ you’ve just got immune deficiencies plus I’ve got time to stop you like freezers full of clocks
...you forced it too much.
then blow your brain circuits to pieces, an leave you full of shock
maybe he likes the taste of chrome? I doubt that
..No rhyme,and weak punch..your trying too hard
so to make his body feel at ‘home’ I dumped him ‘outback’
and if you think about it?, ya skills aint worth being split apart
....ehh,weak.
cuz ~souljah~ ya Rawflowz hard to read in the |||DRKMAN|||
....ok.

You're as sick as what?......don't try feed me these lies
Tryna hide the fact that you "don't make the grade" like a "D"-sguise
...OK.
Me duck???that's like the pot calling the fucking kettle black
Your flow's absurd like a fat chick under the rainbow like "where's my skittles at?"
...Corny
The title of wack stick's to you like metal curves to horse hooves
Wack at everything, you ain't even top of your game at false truths*
...Ok,decent
I could strap a boulder to my leg and drown, you'd still be far below
Your rhymes scheme's a joke at your expense like the bar below
...Liked the 1st line,
Question time: what goes quack, snap and bends over at will
Answer: hoe show breakin his back to duck, through minus skill
....blah,ok

Well,Kinda weak here..
But souljah got it,for having a few decent bars in it.
Fraud,with the except of his last bar..came with bassically nothing..And not to mention,he had a porn star line,which is really played..
So,yea..

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Voted For: fraud

DP: I wasn't really feelin yo verse. The only thing i can give you is that you had better structure. I mean you did have a couple of iight lines but little shit was holdin yo verse back. Like tryna to make "hoovs" and "truths" rhyme.

Fraud: Your verse was iight. You had a punch or two in there and there was some decent word play also. But you need to work on your structure. You need to make it easier to see where one line ends and another begins. After a line you should hit enter or have some type of punctuation.

aite thas cool

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