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Kid Ca$h vs phive
Battle Rules:
5 bars - 10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-08-05 at 09:13 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Kid Ca$h has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-05 09:14 PM.
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phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-05-05 09:15 PM.
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On the microphone I let off like a time bomb,
ya lyrics are shit, and ya rhyme wrong// ya gay ass bitch, comin at me with ya weak ass shit, you probably suckin on the mic like a meat stick// I leave you open mouthed like steven hawking, You just a rookie with a g-unit shirt you be rocking// wit 15 posts and a 0-0 record you be little, imma have ten servings of you like the golden griddle// you wanna battle, i leave muthafuckas in crisis, cant fuck wit me my rhymestyles priceless// |
yo these gone be the last phive bars this kat gone ever see
check it ya style is childish....pull ya pants up/ cuzz them bullshit stanza's dont stand up to what im doin....man up/~1 im speakin real shit everything you say is made up/ you need some make-up/~2 displayin female-trick characteristics/ might as well throw on some Lee nails fake hair and some lipstick/~3 im the motha-fuckin king of this district/ mu fasa you not a factor son you like simba/~4 who can stop this bastard/ my tounge is a instrument of thunder when im under tension no longer a youngin fin-ta 21 in december/~5 *if you dont understand it dont vote |
yo these gone be the last phive bars this kat gone ever see
check it ya style is childish....pull ya pants up/ cuzz them bullshit stanza's dont stand up to what im doin....man up/~1 im speakin real shit everything you say is made up/ you need some make-up/~2 displayin female-trick characteristics/ might as well throw on some Lee nails fake hair and some lipstick/~3 im the motha-fuckin king of this district/ mu fasa you not a factor son you like simba/~4 who can stop this bastard/ my tounge is a instrument of thunder when im under tension no longer a youngin fin-ta be 21 in december/~5 *if you dont understand it dont vote |
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Voted For: Kid Ca$h
Kid Ca$h - iight spit, it flowed ok, lacked in strong punches. Best Line - displayin female-trick characteristics/ might as well throw on some Lee nails fake hair and some lipstick/~3 Worst Line - ya style is childish....pull ya pants up/ cuzz them bullshit stanza's dont stand up to what im doin....man up/~1 phive - MEH. Best Line - NONE Worst Line - On the microphone I let off like a time bomb, ya lyrics are shit, and ya rhyme wrong// (ONLY THING TRUE YOU SAID, WAS "ON THE MIC, I LET OFF) OVERALL - weak battle, 5 you didnt use any good punches. Kid wins beacuse he atleast tried to come up wit a punch. Vote - Kid Ca$h |
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fuck you man vote some bullshit i think
uppin fo some votes |
Voted For: phive
yea i give this one to phive just because he a time bomb, and g-unit part is probably tru |
Voted For: Kid Ca$h
On the microphone I let off like a time bomb, ya lyrics are shit, and ya rhyme wrong// ok ya gay ass bitch, comin at me with ya weak ass shit, you probably suckin on the mic like a meat stick// weak as fuck I leave you open mouthed like steven hawking, You just a rookie with a g-unit shirt you be rocking// funny wit 15 posts and a 0-0 record you be little, imma have ten servings of you like the golden griddle// noooo you wanna battle, i leave muthafuckas in crisis, cant fuck wit me my rhymestyles priceless// weak ending... ya style is childish....pull ya pants up/ cuzz them bullshit stanza's dont stand up to what im doin....man up/~1 flowin... im speakin real shit everything you say is made up/ you need some make-up/~2 weak displayin female-trick characteristics/ might as well throw on some Lee nails fake hair and some lipstick/~3 im the motha-fuckin king of this district/ mu fasa you not a factor son you like simba/~4 aight but streched who can stop this bastard/ my tounge is a instrument of thunder when im under tension no longer a youngin fin-ta be 21 in december/~5 weak ending you had less wackness so i voted you |
uppin fo some good votes people come on honestly
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uppin fo some votesssssssssss playassssssssssssssssssssss
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uppin fo some votes people some non hater ones aight
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Voted For: Kid Ca$h
ummm garbage battle for real...i have seen better punches from drunk hobos....both need elevation...but kid cash got it easily because his flow was nice...and he had some punches that werent from elementary school |
suck my dick nigga set up a battle and ill show ya some fucking schooling
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uppin fo some mutha fucking votes people
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uppin fo some real voterssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Voted For: Kid Ca$h
Kid Ca$h - This spit was iight, your punches were ok, and your flow was iight. Best Lines - displayin female-trick characteristics/ might as well throw on some Lee nails fake hair and some lipstick/~3 Phive, you need work man, your punches were not connecting and the flow was off. Best Lines: NONE Vote KID |
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This was feedback posted for phive
checkin polls.....................................
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Voted For: phive
overall: Kid, ur flow didnt match up to ur cockiness..especialy by saying ...and these are ur words..."if you dont understand it dont vote"...first off..ill decide..as a voter what i want to understand....2nd..even though kid's punches were better then phives...kid ...did not have better flow..Phive did.....both drops lacked strong personals with phive having slightly better ones....opener...shit..i gotta say..KID u out played and beat urself with ur opener...whats up with using UP like 5 times.....just didnt flow right...structure was wack....phive has a better closer..... ------------------------ Phives Best Lines: you wanna battle, i leave muthafuckas in crisis, cant fuck wit me my rhymestyles priceless// ---------------------------------- Kids best lines: displayin female-trick characteristics/ might as well throw on some Lee nails fake hair and some lipstick/~3 im the motha-fuckin king of this district/ ----------------------------- |
Voted For: phive
my vote goes to phive for better punch's, better structure, and atleas i had a smile readin it lol On the microphone I let off like a time bomb, ya lyrics are shit, and ya rhyme wrong// NO WAY ya gay ass bitch, comin at me with ya weak ass shit, you probably suckin on the mic like a meat stick// TO EASY TO DO I leave you open mouthed like steven hawking, You just a rookie with a g-unit shirt you be rocking// THAT WAS YOUR BEST BAR, SHIT MADE ME LAUGHT LOL wit 15 posts and a 0-0 record you be little, imma have ten servings of you like the golden griddle// NO you wanna battle, i leave muthafuckas in crisis, cant fuck wit me my rhymestyles priceless// NEVER EVER VENT YOURSELF IN A BATTLE KidCash your verse was just bad, not even one good punch, flow was really really off, that make up line didnt make sens it was just really bad, no hate but its true, if your not happy, just battle me:D |
Voted For: phive
.......... Kid Ca$h ya style is childish....pull ya pants up/ cuzz them bullshit stanza's dont stand up to what im doin....man up/~1 - man up.....? No and bad opener im speakin real shit everything you say is made up/ you need some make-up/~2 - What? Another no... displayin female-trick characteristics/ might as well throw on some Lee nails fake hair and some lipstick/~3 - How is this clever....or even good advice im the motha-fuckin king of this district/ mu fasa you not a factor son you like simba/~4 - Yet another NO....where are the punchlines? who can stop this bastard/ my tounge is a instrument of thunder when im under tension no longer a youngin fin-ta be 21 in december/~5 - No.... Flow was very bad at times, your verse has no real structure and was not even dissing the opponenet, if anything yourself....missing the punchlines, you need to be creative and attack the opponent with something that makes sense and is witty...I get the idea your new, in which case you have a lot of time to improve - just read other people's work (good textcees) and see what they do good and how you can take that and put it into your own writing... phive IP: On the microphone I let off like a time bomb, ya lyrics are shit, and ya rhyme wrong// - WHAT? NO.......bad opener, what were you thinkin? ya gay ass bitch, comin at me with ya weak ass shit, you probably suckin on the mic like a meat stick// - Ok.......no I leave you open mouthed like steven hawking, You just a rookie with a g-unit shirt you be rocking// - Stating, I presume 'made up facts'...where are the punchlines? wit 15 posts and a 0-0 record you be little, imma have ten servings of you like the golden griddle// - What, you wanna eat him? you wanna battle, i leave muthafuckas in crisis, cant fuck wit me my rhymestyles priceless// - Attack the opponenet instead of praising yourself.... A lot of what I said to Kid can be applied to you....you need to attack the opponenet, and go for real personals....you need to use punchlines, be funny with your lines.... Overall, this was not a strong battle - it has to differenciate the two of you, because you both had the same weaknesses basically...you both need to improve much Difficult to vote either way, but I will vote for Phive because his rhyming was a bit better, as well as flow and his verse had a better structure.... Stay Up Both |
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uppin homies lets close this thread
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This was feedback posted for Kid Ca$h
nice flow keep it up..............................
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uppin fo some votes gangstas
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This was feedback posted for Kid Ca$h
you both suck welcome to RV stay inactive
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uppin to end this shit man please vote homies
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Voted For: phive
ok ur both reallllllllllllllllly wack and should leave the site u both came mad played vocab was very basic only thing that wasnt the same is ur structure which was alot better so i vote for you |
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