Yet ANOTHA..New JOINT "close my eyes" feat. Ike
 

Yea Ike came out wit a concept....I was feeling it...an I said lets lay sum shit down..after about 3 hours of disagreeing on beats we finally foud 1 we agreed an there ya have it...a new track...holla wit sum good feed.



Title of track: close my eyes

Verse 1... Trip

Verse 2....Ike

Verse 3....Trip



Link to song:
http://www.soundclick.com/triplen


Links to previous feed left:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213578
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...03&page=2&pp=15
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213098

*listening*

hahaha nice intro.. liking the sample.. nice and smooth which are songs i like =P lol.. wow.. emotion is really good on this.. adlibs come perfectly on right time.. qualitys pretty good.. lyrics are good as usual.. wow.. im really feelin this man.. like wow.. man really loving the sample...

verse 2: nice lyrics Ike.. very nice... quality is very good too.. man really feelin it.. emotion and delivery is all there.. wow.. very nice.. everythings good on this too..

verse 3:nice lines in the begining of this verse.. I liked how you didnt sound the same at all in the 3rd verse.. man really feelin the emotion.. lyrics all there again.. very nice man..

overall: Nothing wrong with this song at all... really feelin all of it.. flow was perfect, delivery, lyrics, etc... g'd job guys..

9/10...

Word like i told you on aim deep shit son...

Am feelin tha chorus first verse was tight flow was on as always delivery was dope ike came good aswell had some nice lines flow was good same for delivery some very deep shit somethin when you ina down mood you can jus play smoke a cig an chill too *d/l's =1=...

shit is dope.......flow tyte..........beat is sick.....concept is dope.....

First MC flow is strate, on point, delivery is good, feelin da style...
Hook

2nd MC- flow is on point, delivery is good, nice lyrics.....

pz

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the beat I don't actually like to be honest, it's ok but it's not really inspiring or anything. y'all lyrics and shit was fa sha good. Ike man you did ya thang, your emotion was solid and so was ythe rhymes and all, dope shit man. trip you did good as well but as you came in to do ya verse like when you was hittin them snares it felt like it was off a bit, but still good as it gets into your verse it fits good but it just seems wierd like you didn't get it mixed right or somin. but overall dope track yall

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damn some really tight shit...u got delivery flow, emotion everythang..beat not that bad niether yo fo real not that bad of a track defitnly dope as hell like the usual..yo defitnly keep droppin this hot shit...9/10

nice sample at the beginning
verse 1- good quality, i like the effect that was used on it, gives it more emotion
still likin the sample
verse 2- also very emotional, really sounds like he's tearin himself apart, good lyrics n quality still
hook's real good, builds the emotion even more
verse 3- good multis throughout the verse, still hot
great song, lovin the emotion, the sample, the beat, everythin
10/10

Listening...

Beat: I like the sample and the melody of this

Verse One: This was nice triple...I like the effect u got on ure voice...emotion is there..ure voice gives natural presence...delivery is briliant..flow was there too..

Verse Two:...Ike my homie..again u got emotion nicely here...liked the flow too...presence and delvery also

Verse 3: I think the best verse here...lyrically throughout this song is very nice but verse 3 has dope lyrics..multis, and presence/delivery and flow still there...

WOW Im collabin with both you guys :)..im a lucky nigga..ill get yal my collabs wenesday...

beat straight i like it love the sample
triple first verse love it some really good lyrics in there loving it good flow like ya voice nice way to open the track good on the adlibs good emotion i felt ur verse
ike like ur voice too flow is on point liking the verse on love props emotion good i feel like this futur puts our future at risk but i also feel like it helps the circumstances i feel if we take this chance its probable cause for a health advancement man it should make the past vanish great emotion
loving the first 2 lines baskey ball star to drop out boxing protege to lates nock out best verse lyrically
great track my favorite track from both of you i liked the fact that u both touched on dif topics the samples brought it all together great track dont be suprised if u win an award

thanks for the feed everyone

Listening...

Beat is fucking perfect...Sample is hypnotising...very sexy :hump:

Anyway, Quality is fucking ikjagsdhuyfgruakwtgregjlj!!!! Whoever mixed this is Jesus.

Triple, Really good shit from you bro. Not used to hearing this type of shit from you, but Im really feeling it man. Emotion was perfect, lyrics were meaningful and flow...I dont even need to say anything man. Everything is just so perfect. I downloaded it earlier, and I've had the shit on repeat all day.

Ike...Wow man...As you know, I was and still am in a situation exactly like your verse is describing. You could not have got it more perfect. Flow is great, lyrics are fucking kuadsgufsarkughkrsg, and quality is outstanding. This is some really good shit.

9891436918347698/10

I actually like the song that hook is from...

beat is fine


Triple...I was feeling your verse...ur flow was on...but I felt your delivery could be more melodic to match the melodic nature of this beat...



Ike...flow is on as well...delivery fit the beat/tone better
not bad



Trip again...like the delivery better in the 2nd verse...and the flow is more fluid in this verse...good concept



and u know a verse is good when it goes by so fast you ask "That was 16?"


solid collab



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lol at the intro of the beat.hmm

listening now. waitin for the beat to kick in...

this beats on some weird mainstream shit. i dont really like it that much. but thats just my opinion. but actually it is pretty good ..umm

first verse: when it first kicked in it sounded like country. LOl i was like HUh triple switched his flow. lol but naww this verse was nice. umm nice flow. i dont like that quality though. it sounds weird. nice lyrics im feelin it

2nd verse: damn this shit was fuckin sick homie. nice quality the lyrics stand out i can hear everything. your flow is real hood famz. and i like the deep shit no doubt. this is a real nice verse. probably the best ive heard from you on these kinda tracks. damn real nice

3rd verse: jea im feelin this verse. i like ur vocab. but again the structure. but yeah this was a real nice track homie. nice shit. im feelin ur lyrics no doubt. nice shit famz..

8/10

im feelin this no doubt

I want this beat. And shit.

lol like my first response to this was WTF... cuz it was country beat and shit. but damn beat is actually pretty dope i think.

Triple first verse, dope quality as usual. lovin' the flow. good shit. good lyrics. OVerall really nice shit. Iunno what i really can say, shit is jus real tight man. good shit.

and hook of this real nice. Liked this shit. good shit....

Ike, def can tell trip mixed it. And you sound so much better wit his mixin'. props to Trip. And ike, damn yo, everytime i hear you you get better, man. shit is hot fo reel. Nice flow, your voice i ain't a big fan of, but your lyrics and delivery make up for that to me, like I find myself keep listenin' jus cuz i like some multi's you string in and good lines. But overall dope yo. Roll tide, roll.

hook again.....

trip, third verse. again dope shit. I don't know why you ain't signed yet lol. Cuz I could seriously picture hearing you on the radio and shit man. Shit was real dope again. tight lyrics and shit.

overall, this was real hot track. played it a feww times. good shit. 9.5/10

I fuckin hate the intro... I heard the original of that Close my eyes thang.. the beat itself is pretty good.

Verse 1
I like the tone in your voice, it wasn't harsh on this beat. lyrics are pretty good. Y'all on some deep stuff...

Verse 2
I feel like you can tone down your tone a bit, your voice so damn strong, Ike... but it don't sound real bad or nothin, it's just the mood of the song you gotta tone it down for. Ya flow was pretty good, lyrics pretty straight y'all two on a track sound pretty good actually.

Verse 3
Okay I like how it starts, switchin up yo flow... not bad, lyrics pretty straight. You ridin' that beat, boy...

Overall - Y'all presence is good hence I didn't comment on it. Delivery is pretty good as a whole, but Ike your voice so strong, you gotta tone it done a bit, but it wasn't bad as far as that goes. Uhm the lyrics were good amongst the both of you. I like the flow switch up in the third verse. Quality and Production was really good.. Nice collab, fellas.

Stay up,
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*I wrote this out days ago. Finally, postin it.* lol.

not really feelin the singin

1st verse
i dont like the..whisperin..
not feelin the 1st verse

2nd verse
better
ugh, I hate to say it, but I think Im becomin an Ike fan :-(
likin the 2nd verse ALOT better than the 1st
delivery was on point

3rd verse
hmm, ok, this made me wonder, you WASNT whisperin in the 1st verse, thats just how you rap, I assume.
not really feelin your voice. but your lyrics is cool.
but its like, even if you had the best lyrics in the world, if someone dont like your voice then its goin bring down their response

overall, it was an ok track. didnt like it too much, except for Ike's verse.
this feedback is for the RG.
Leave feedback on my track
diamond in the rough

yo trip

good shit man

ur pretty versitile on the mic man. u can hit with tthe heavy hood shit, theen tear up the club with a banger and also do some deep lyrical shit.

as for this track the mixing was very tight but it seem there was a lil too much treble which made the verses seem quite load on the beat but apart from that the quality was almost perfect

wasent rele feelin the singin on the hook bout verse were str8

i have never heard IKE b4 much he seem pretty tight, u got a pretty commerical type flow but its all good, u need to keep practising to find a flow thats original and suits u

Triple is basically there in my opinion. He has jus gotta keep bangin out the tracks untill he is noticed

keep it up man

lmao intro is madd funny..

1st verse-
pretty nice trip
flow is coo, your emotion and delivery is right on point
im liking the lyrics, pretty deep shit
something about this verse that sounds to "whisper-ish" to me though
maybe its the way you mixed it? or the effects added to your voice
i dont think it suit the track really, you fixed it in the 3rd verse

2nd-
ike good stuff
im def liking your flow, prolly my favorite part of the track
delivery is right there, you always kill the real deep emotional type tracks, they definetly fit your style
lyrics accompany the delivery shits deep, i liked it

3rd verse-
trip much better with the emotion/delivery here
as i said earlier i thought the 1st verse was a lil too whisper ish
i liked how this verse seem to be a lil more intense, a lil more emotion in there
your flow fell off a tad with some of your lyrics
it seemed like you tried to pack a few too many words into some lines
but other than that it was fine
lyrics was nice throughout the track

overall some solid stuff
i wasnt a fan of the beat really, but thats just me
you two work well together, good shit.

i heard this beat about a month back while searching on SC... thought about using it but i see y'all beat me to it... trip.... liking the effects ya put on ya verse... lyrics were cool but coulda went a lil deeper i think...

second verse... that's it!!! i gotta collab with this dude right here... ike been impressing me with his flow and delivery... his lyrical content is also a step above most kats on this site... i know omma get some flack cuz kats hate when you like somebody shyt*like it's a crime or sumn*...but hey... it is what it is.... shyt's dope... third verse.... honestly... i stopped after the second.... shyt was good enough for me to critique with just tose 2 verses... good 1-2 punch from these dudes... and yo trip... thanks for da tips...it's gettin' better... werdage

and oh yeah... this is for da rap game before i forget

i'm feelin this mad...man this is problay the dopest collab i heard on this site for real...man i'm really diggin this...TRIP and IKE KILLED IT by far the best Audio heads on this site that are actually posting

alright trip i'm feelin ya first verse i'm really diggin those lyrics...they are real deep and i'm feelin the way you deliverd it and the adlibs u had on some of ya end lines i'm really likin this first first........

Ike....i like ur voice lol i dont know why but u just have a dope voice i love it...ur flow killed it and the lyrics are real deep.....i felt that mad....i'm really feelin ya presense and ya delivery wow man this is real dope

Trip....the third verse most rappers cant hold it twice on a song really hot but man u really killed it...again...ur flow is legendary on this site...man "basketball star too latest drop-out" i'm feelin taht.....thats really tight...man....i dont know how it can get tighter..anyways...this was a real dope piece


Overall thsi is problay a real song i'd put on a cd and listen too it..i'm really feelin this man...wow...this is nice.....this hsould get collab of the year for real...

overall-9.5/10

lmao maaaaan...this got put in the hall of fame...so im like..uppin this..hahahahaha

haha. ima just drop on this since i wasent around toback then haha..



that sample is fuckin dope..

triple - both verse were coo. i mean the flow was cool. but i dont know if i was feelin the word choice you used. pretty simple rhyme scheme. and some times i didnt liek the words you tried to rhyme with eachother. overall i felt what you was spittin bout, but how you tried to deliver it i just want diggi to hard. real talk you know that.


iek - damn yo. this is prolly the best verse iv heard from you for real. what ever you was on when you wrote this, get back on it. the bury it again line was the highlight of song. some real shit right there. kinda sounded like a positive eminem LOL. good shit ...

lmao @ me actually replyin to this shit a year later