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GKillaz05 vs Blackmage
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12-16 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Goodluck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 11-13-05 at 09:40 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-08-05 01:35 PM.
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Blackmage what a whack fag with his dopeless skill...
Could pre-write for a month verse be hopeless still... I checked out his soundclick, all I found was shit... Rebuilding from the ground up but you stay grounded... Blacks on my next stop to get played like an X-Box... Tried joinin a crew but hes hard to pick like a lock... Lyrical Assassin?.. nah, kid got KO'd by a DaCument... Its imposible for black to flow like blocked vent... Dick must be in a knot, cuz his flow is all crooked... Name is a title cuz punches get read like a book did... Brains fried like an egg, I start flippin' the script... Only time you spit hard on the mic is when grippin' it... Kids skills slippin' like we were rappin' in a 'arena'... Mage's career is fake, like he's the black John Cena... I got him sapinaed to court because he "murdered rap"... No hard punches and weak flow I know you heard of that... |
Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-05 12:18 AM.
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You Herb, would someone make my bud wiser..? sry i asked em
His Core's light, Gkilla? Right you're the son of sam....adams I'm notorious for handlin my B.I.,G Killa's hatin all you killin's my expectations and your reputation speculation? Nah 47 wins. are we talkin? No! cause besides my name in your sig you have nothing to show and about you there's even less to know, you're due to die your no killa, you couldn't be an accessory to suicide who am I? ask around bout my legacy if yoyu doubtful you got as much of a chance as your crew vs. the council I'll help you, punch my self wit my mad reacher I'm comin out of the closet.... ....but wouldn't that make you the fag preacher? You ain't LL to be A legend most have to die I guess then you're on your period, funny i beat you with 6 questions here's your lesson, my verse, but you must be killin it again cause everytime you battle someone they're born again .................................................. ................with a win Done Bud=herb Budweiser/coor's light/samuel adams=beer you don't get it, pm me or don't vote Good Luck dog |
good spit man, went over the line limit tho, so I will have to DQ you.. lol, jokes..
UPPIN for Votes.... |
thanks and nah that's a compact line bro i'm pretty sure it count as one
but nah really respect man good luck and good drop. peace |
Voted For: Blackmage
nice job man your multies, flow and rhyming skills where 10 times betta than this biting piece of shit, g killaz werk on ya skills your verses are too short and not sweet enough Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Can we get some votes on this battle please......uppin
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Voted For: Blackmage
You Herb, would someone make my bud wiser..? sry i asked em His Core's light, Gkilla? Right you're the son of sam....adams >okay, wording is a lil off, but decent I'm notorious for handlin my B.I.,G Killa's hatin all you killin's my expectations and your reputation >too basic speculation? Nah 47 wins. are we talkin? No! cause besides my name in your sig you have nothing to show >again, basic and about you there's even less to know, you're due to die your no killa, you couldn't be an accessory to suicide >decent who am I? ask around bout my legacy if yoyu doubtful you got as much of a chance as your crew vs. the council >meh I'll help you, punch my self wit my mad reacher I'm comin out of the closet.... ....but wouldn't that make you the fag preacher? >meh You ain't LL to be A legend most have to die I guess then you're on your period, funny i beat you with 6 questions >meh here's your lesson, my verse, but you must be killin it again cause everytime you battle someone they're born again .................................................. ................with a win >aight decent verse, nothing really spectacular, probly sound pretty decent audio, just nothing too special, basic mostly, but still decent, word Blackmage what a whack fag with his dopeless skill... Could pre-write for a month verse be hopeless still... >boring I checked out his soundclick, all I found was shit... Rebuilding from the ground up but you stay grounded... >nothing Blacks on my next stop to get played like an X-Box... Tried joinin a crew but hes hard to pick like a lock... >basic Lyrical Assassin?.. nah, kid got KO'd by a DaCument... Its imposible for black to flow like blocked vent... >basic, and it just sounds gay Dick must be in a knot, cuz his flow is all crooked... Name is a title cuz punches get read like a book did... >yes, punches are read Brains fried like an egg, I start flippin' the script... Only time you spit hard on the mic is when grippin' it... >okay? Kids skills slippin' like we were rappin' in a 'arena'... Mage's career is fake, like he's the black John Cena... >stupid I got him sapinaed to court because he "murdered rap"... No hard punches and weak flow I know you heard of that... >yes, i heard of it, and actually read it in your verse waaaay too basic, and not creative at all...both need to try harder, but v/black mage for consistency in punches, and having a couple effective ones, word |
Uppin to take this one home with me... so yea umm..uppin, to the stars
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uppin past the stars...lookin for jesus to drop a vote too
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upp9in, uppin uppn uppin till i get 50 characters.
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uppin...............though i already know nobody's gonna vote, i'm just gonna pm strobe and have him vote...
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Voted For: Blackmage
v/blackmage gkillaz, your stuff was played, not really creative, and lacked enjoyment, because basically you just try and focus on rhyming, and that's only cool in audio, text, you need to be more creative, if you try and elevate, you could be dope at punchlines, but you focus too much on basic shit, like i said, it might be better audio, but not text....blackmage, not bad, it was kinda weak, just basically poiting out obvious shit and saying it, not really personals, nothing special anyways, opener was cool, but you can still elevate, keep up, this woulda probly been cool audio too rtf on this with an explained vote please http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=219121 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Blackmage
i have to say blackmage took this, his punches were nice and he did have wordplay, although some was forced and that sam adams think was pointless. but i did think his shit was funnier.... |
Rtf on both when i get off work...................................
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Voted For: Blackmage
Honestly this wasn't as good a battle as I expected given how much shit talking I've seen from both of you voting in other threads... with that being said Gkillahz had the superior structure, resulting flow, and cadance... but he didn't throw too many hard punches... And very lil was actually directed at Mage... now Mage's opener was creative, but didn't land a punch... who cares if G is a son of sam adams? Mage didn't throw any good punches till "your no killa, you couldn't be an accessory to suicide" still when he did throw punches they were more original that Killahz... "Blackmage what a whack fag with his dopeless skill... Could pre-write for a month verse be hopeless still... I checked out his soundclick, all I found was shit.." every concept in that is played... "Its imposible for black to flow like blocked vent... Dick must be in a knot, cuz his flow is all crooked... ^ that's more played concepts *smh @ the book line* that would hit hard in an audio battle... but this is a text battle... so the punch just doesn't land... "Brains fried like an egg, I start flippin' the script... Only time you spit hard on the mic is when grippin' it..." These are all played concepts as well, with no new twists... Opener: Killahz (may be played but at least he threw a punch) Closer: Mage's last line got a lil chuckle outta me Punches: Mage (you both coulda came harder but Mage wasn't nearly as played) Personals: Mage just talked about Killah more... killahz only real personal was the Document line which coulda been thrown much harder) Structure: GKillahz Creativity: Mage (once again G's concepts were played) Enjoyment: Mage Vote: Mage Vote: Mage |
Voted For: GKillaz05
gkilla u came out harder and u got the victory for it ur lines were better and ur flow was tight personals u won too black u didnt seem like u came out hard but u did have some good rymes there ill give u that but gkilla won it easy no hate rtf to one of my battles |
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Voted For: Blackmage
Ok this was a very tight battle but this explains my vote Flow (Structure): .......................... The flow of both was perfect, there is a bar on blackmage's verse that jus seems a lil strange but nothing outta normal Punchlines (Hits): ........................... very matched punches but by reading both verses several times I noticed that blackmage hitted him harder on more like personal punchlines, which they helped him get my vote Wordplay (vocab): ............................ GKilla had this, a better wordplay and better vocab... It seems like he been here a long time to remember Dacument (I loved that line)... or is he back?? hmmmm don't hate plz.... am jus votin |
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Voted For: Blackmage
Eh, this shit was close. G had more punches that were actually close to ok, but black was more umm, consistent. Black, you first punch was forced like a motha fucka, don't ever stretch that hard just for one hit, cuz it's never that strong anyways. The name in your sig line was pretty good though. G, you gotta flip your shit a little more when you punch. I noticed that you had concepts, but they weren't flipped well and were just kind of ......there instead of contributing to the punch. For example: Lyrical Assassin?.. nah, kid got KO'd by a DaCument... Its imposible for black to flow like blocked vent.. It's like, "Yeah, ok, he can't flow, like a blocked vent, and?". Ojnce you learn how to flip shit better, you'll be better. Until then... V - Blackmage |
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