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Mimesis vs one mic
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6 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 11-10-05 at 03:05 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. Closed - expired battle win |
one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 02:30 PM.
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Why don’t you just back down?, spectators watch while I slay this fool
Its funny, 'cause your crew name is a phrase people often say to you How many times I gotta tell you?? You aint from the hood son! How you the head of the punchline tournament?, when you cant write a good one! Aint no need for introductions, you know my flowin is big This guys a ruthless jerk, just look at the quote in his sig! You get loaded with clips, if you try messin with me Watch me humiliate this guy like queers gettin' head in the streets Cant test ‘cause you weak, on rap verse, you just lookin for fame Dumb fuck, you got 11,000 posts and still don’t know anyone's name* You feelin my game???, if not, then why??? Man, your flow is hollow Think you nice, but the only dope head reppin’ Arizona’s “Apollo” *=look at his member title If you want more explanations, pm me……. |
no hate man, gl...................................
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Yeah, good luck to you too. I'll probably post a verse later tonight.
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Mimesis has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 05:36 PM.
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Yeah.
What the fuck are you doing?.. Stepped up to me.. but why loser? Cause I'll still boot mic.. without loading any cables to my computer Your gonna cry sooner.. your custom title? you're just posting ass One Mic, One Love? Who the fuck enjoys constantly posting trash I'm owning you in every aspect, who cares what you're left with And .007 ain't just your avatar.. it's your fucking win percentage 3-9? Wow.. you're a fucking joke, and now what crew let you in? Cause what kind of God of War loses three times more then he wins But I saw your Open Mic.. now I know the clock is going tick tock Cause that the dude you collab with ain't the only time you Hitchcock Ya shits rocked.. you ain't going anywhere.. you'll be toyed forever When this mic blows up.. it just means he's been destroyed for ever |
Voted For: one mic
What the fuck are you doing?.. Stepped up to me.. but why loser? Cause I'll still boot mic.. without loading any cables to my computer stretched...but ok punch Your gonna cry sooner.. your custom title? you're just posting ass One Mic, One Love? Who the fuck enjoys constantly posting trash um...not really hittin in every aspect, who cares what you're left with And .007 ain't just your avatar.. it's your fucking win percentage haha ok i see ya...flow was not there 3-9? Wow.. you're a fucking joke, and now what crew let you in? Cause what kind of God of War loses three times more then he wins ok math.... But I saw your Open Mic.. now I know the clock is going tick tock Cause that the dude you collab with ain't the only time you Hitchcock ummmm Ya shits rocked.. you ain't going anywhere.. you'll be toyed forever When this mic blows up.. it just means he's been destroyed for ever not really breakdown-verse was below average...punches were thrown but not landed...flow was just terrible.... 4/10 Why don’t you just back down?, spectators watch while I slay this fool Its funny, 'cause your crew name is a phrase people often say to you ok...i see ya How many times I gotta tell you?? You aint from the hood son! How you the head of the punchline tournament?, when you cant write a good one! ok...i guess Aint no need for introductions, you know my flowin is big This guys a ruthless jerk, just look at the quote in his sig! ok You get loaded with clips, if you try messin with me Watch me humiliate this guy like queers gettin' head in the streets woah there sparky...had me rollin for hours Cant test ‘cause you weak, on rap verse, you just lookin for fame Dumb fuck, you got 11,000 posts and still don’t know anyone's name* ok personal You feelin my game???, if not, then why??? Man, your flow is hollow Think you nice, but the only dope head reppin’ Arizona’s “Apollo” nice ender breakdown-punches thrown and landed smothly...pretty much a one way battle....flow was aight...and your personals were aight...weren't the best that i have seen in my life but they were there... 7/10 |
woah, thanx for votin man, i appreciate it alot. i honestly dont think mimesis verse was that bad (probly better than mine lol), but thats just my opinion. uppin for more votes........
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Haha. I can always expect to have votes against me in Front Lines.. even when I know I win. Whatever. G-Hood is garbo. Let's get votes from good people and shit.
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Voted For: Mimesis
Mimesis - Flow was really good, had some hott personals and dope punches. Best Line - I'm owning you in every aspect, who cares what you're left with And .007 ain't just your avatar.. it's your fucking win percentage Worst Line - What the fuck are you doing?.. Stepped up to me.. but why loser? Cause I'll still boot mic.. without loading any cables to my computer one mic - You came hard for once, had a good flow, and some iight punches. Best Line - Cant test ‘cause you weak, on rap verse, you just lookin for fame Dumb fuck, you got 11,000 posts and still don’t know anyone's name* Worst Line - Aint no need for introductions, you know my flowin is big This guys a ruthless jerk, just look at the quote in his sig! OVERALL - This battle goes to Mim. He had the better punchlines, personals, and wordplay. He flowed better as well. One you should have used this verse VS some shitty, then you would have won. Vote - Mim RTF in Sig. |
werd i know lol thanx for votin newayz. uppin for more votes.................
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This was feedback posted for Mimesis
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seem like you got yo panties in a bunch....calm down...and if you better then me then lets battle....it ain't even bout beef...it is about the fact of me bein better then you...so what you say bout that challenge?
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Voted For: Mimesis
Why don’t you just back down?, spectators watch while I slay this fool Its funny, 'cause your crew name is a phrase people often say to you ^^good punch;1st line was a 'lil too long and irrelevant. How many times I gotta tell you?? You aint from the hood son! How you the head of the punchline tournament?, when you cant write a good one! ^^nice Aint no need for introductions, you know my flowin is big This guys a ruthless jerk, just look at the quote in his sig! ^^No,I'm not gonna look at his sig.Word your punches in a way that we don't have to. You get loaded with clips, if you try messin with me Watch me humiliate this guy like queers gettin' head in the streets ^^Nope,the punch ain't connect.The set-up was good.Nice bar-to-bar transition with multi.Made me think you were gonna drop a bomb on him,but..you didn't do it. Cant test ‘cause you weak, on rap verse, you just lookin for fame Dumb fuck, you got 11,000 posts and still don’t know anyone's name* ^^nah,you still needed explanation,so..this was weak.word your shit so we don't have to. You feelin my game???, if not, then why??? Man, your flow is hollow Think you nice, but the only dope head reppin’ Arizona’s “Apollo ^^good. What the fuck are you doing?.. Stepped up to me.. but why loser? Cause I'll still boot mic.. without loading any cables to my computer ^^good Your gonna cry sooner.. your custom title? you're just posting ass One Mic, One Love? Who the fuck enjoys constantly posting trash ^^decent. I'm owning you in every aspect, who cares what you're left with And .007 ain't just your avatar.. it's your fucking win percentage ^^decent 3-9? Wow.. you're a fucking joke, and now what crew let you in? Cause what kind of God of War loses three times more then he wins ^^Dope But I saw your Open Mic.. now I know the clock is going tick tock Cause that the dude you collab with ain't the only time you Hitchcock ^^Good personal Ya shits rocked.. you ain't going anywhere.. you'll be toyed forever When this mic blows up.. it just means he's been destroyed for ever ^^No,weak Wow..this battle was closer than I expected. One Mic.. Verse was good.Your rhyming was better them mimesis.I also notice the bar-to-bar transistion..Something that I also do :).So that was dope.You had some nice punches,like the Apollo/arizona..P.L.L..and crew name one.But I felt the punches on sig and avy..and a couple of dumb set-ups weakened your verse.But,still an overall good verse.Exceeded my expectations. Mimesis.. Well..another good verse.All the punches,aside from the closer,was good.Felt your punches on his avy hit better,cause your wording allowed us to understand the line without looking at the shit..SO,yea..I think you won. Vote-Mimesis.. Drop an honest vote in the link below plz.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214022 |
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LMFAO. I've been in the Contendership Match at RM. I'm one of the best text battlers here. I've won over 200 battles. I have respect everywhere that I try at. Now who the fuck are you? |
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Voted For: Mimesis
One Mic Why don’t you just back down?, spectators watch while I slay this fool Its funny, 'cause your crew name is a phrase people often say to you played concept and wack weak opener How many times I gotta tell you?? You aint from the hood son! How you the head of the punchline tournament?, when you cant write a good one! meh. it was iight but stretched.. Aint no need for introductions, you know my flowin is big This guys a ruthless jerk, just look at the quote in his sig! was that supposed to be a personal? You get loaded with clips, if you try messin with me Watch me humiliate this guy like queers gettin' head in the streets heh. this was really basic Cant test ‘cause you weak, on rap verse, you just lookin for fame Dumb fuck, you got 11,000 posts and still don’t know anyone's name* meh. it as witty. good line You feelin my game???, if not, then why??? Man, your flow is hollow Think you nice, but the only dope head reppin’ Arizona’s “Apollo” hmph. not that witty. kinda weak hmm. iight one mic you came decent but you lack wordplay and structure. hmmm. up you wordplay. and punches dawg. I only saw one really decent line. so up your whole game. cuz you came basic Mimesis What the fuck are you doing?.. Stepped up to me.. but why loser? Cause I'll still boot mic.. without loading any cables to my computer heh funny. but could be better Your gonna cry sooner.. your custom title? you're just posting ass One Mic, One Love? Who the fuck enjoys constantly posting trash heh. I know what you mean I'm owning you in every aspect, who cares what you're left with And .007 ain't just your avatar.. it's your fucking win percentage witty. heh. somewhat of a personal. 3-9? Wow.. you're a fucking joke, and now what crew let you in? Cause what kind of God of War loses three times more then he wins decent. witty personal yet again But I saw your Open Mic.. now I know the clock is going tick tock Cause that the dude you collab with ain't the only time you Hitchcock yup. not that decent but good Ya shits rocked.. you ain't going anywhere.. you'll be toyed forever When this mic blows up.. it just means he's been destroyed for ever meh. kinda weak. lol.... but good. over all. Mimesis had this the whole way. uhm. Vote// Mimesis. |
yeah make sure you rtf in my sig. mayn. fa real .get at me..... with a vote,.
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Voted For: Mimesis
What the fuck are you doing?.. Stepped up to me.. but why loser? Cause I'll still boot mic.. without loading any cables to my computer ^^nice nameplay n opener Your gonna cry sooner.. your custom title? you're just posting ass One Mic, One Love? Who the fuck enjoys constantly posting trash ^^good wording, semi played `concept I'm owning you in every aspect, who cares what you're left with And .007 ain't just your avatar.. it's your fucking win percentage ^^nice personal/punch 3-9? Wow.. you're a fucking joke, and now what crew let you in? Cause what kind of God of War loses three times more then he wins ^^damn, hitting hard But I saw your Open Mic.. now I know the clock is going tick tock Cause that the dude you collab with ain't the only time you Hitchcock ^^decent Ya shits rocked.. you ain't going anywhere.. you'll be toyed forever When this mic blows up.. it just means he's been destroyed for ever ^^lol,nice shit, good closer witty flip . . solid verse w/alot of nice personal nameplays n well worded bars, i only found the "posting trash" line was a bit played, but other then that i thought it was dope.... . . . . Why don’t you just back down?, spectators watch while I slay this fool Its funny, 'cause your crew name is a phrase people often say to you ^^decent opener How many times I gotta tell you?? You aint from the hood son! How you the head of the punchline tournament?, when you cant write a good one! ^^not feelin this much Aint no need for introductions, you know my flowin is big This guys a ruthless jerk, just look at the quote in his sig! ^^set up wasnt good(self glory)n the punch:i dont see how callin him a ruthless gerk is a punch, even with the sig backin it up... You get loaded with clips, if you try messin with me Watch me humiliate this guy like queers gettin' head in the streets ^^was'nt feelin this Cant test ‘cause you weak, on rap verse, you just lookin for fame Dumb fuck, you got 11,000 posts and still don’t know anyone's name* ^^ok,.. not hard hitting thou You feelin my game???, if not, then why??? Man, your flow is hollow Think you nice, but the only dope head reppin’ Arizona’s “Apollo” ^^eh, ok closer . . i feel you had a couple good concepts but didnt deliver them right or you had consistent bad wording in your punches, not a bad verse just not up to par with what mim dropped.. . . overall i gotta give this to mim, he connected with all but one of his punches imo....... . MIM, RETURN THE FAVOUR ON MY NK BATTLE...plse & thx |
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