Poetics vs phive
 

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6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-12-05 at 12:28 AM

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Poetics has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 12:29 AM.

No respect, come test, yeah u Phives wit a hollow chest
Ur worse off then the apprentice that just got fired
Or the glass jaw Vitali Klitschko who just retired
I suggest u do the same, or battle me u know my name
Quick to speak, drop the heat n defeat Ur weak technique
So learn when to speak when grown folks is talking
U like Sean Pen in his flick Dead Man’s Walking
While u sit there prick still thinkin ill spark my Izm
So please kid try to acquire some soulful wisdom
I’m bout to explode with these poetic scribes…
so voters come feel my vibe
Phives so nervous to reply he’s bout to break out in hives .. ....

phive has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 08:34 PM.

You write rhymes and rap schemes to cover up ya set,

this guy probably writes poetic scriptures, like romeo and juliet

now ya feel tha threat, vomit risin through ya neck,

feelin tha heat, dont have to resort to my teck,

I show no respect for fake ass emcees, so wipe ya chin off,

and get off ya knees, Nigga please, suicidal is the only way

you be gettin out, slittin ya wrists, no one cares if ya talk,

yell, scream or shout, no doubt, you gonna be my next victim,

ya mom and ya sista imma have ta stick my dick in,


you done kid, i spit my disses, you can throw all ya punches,

but all youll get is misses, fuckin pussy,

ill take on any bitch ass niggas,

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uppin fo some votes playas ill return the favour aight

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Voted For: Poetics

Poetics won this, betta punch-lines, actually rhymed, and all that good shit, a nice flow too, I thought he was garbage, cus in the battle wit technique he was horrible, but damn poetics killed this guy.

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Voted For: Poetics

damn yo that was so hot u gotta battle me sum time yuor flow was so great is was the best your punches where good and so was every thing else im on dro right now lol but it go the best flow

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Voted For: Poetics

Well..this was an ite battle..
But I think Poetics edged it out,by a little.

Obviously,Poetics had a better flow.He had nice internals in his verse,which helped flow a lot.Phive,your started off with a nice flow,but then later on..the shit fell off.Just Look at your last 3 lines,the shit doesn't rhyme.

As for punches..it was really close.But Phive had some childish,bland ones.Like the one about his sister and mom.It just seems like it's been done a lot already.Upp on originality..

So..in a pretty close battle...I vote for Poetics.

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Wanna close this one off yall...

RTV -

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Voted For: Poetics

lovinit

best line-So learn when to speak when grown folks is talking
U like Sean Pen in his flick Dead Man’s Walking

worst line-Or the glass jaw Vitali Klitschko who just retired
I suggest u do the same, or battle me u know my name

overall- amazin verses man lovin the punches

vote-Poetics

Voted For: Poetics

Vote - Poetics

Poetics:

Flow - It was pretty tight

Vocab - Sick

Referrals - Amazing...Vitale Klitschko

Phive:

Flow - kinda weak

Vocab - weak

Referrals - Almost none

Overal: Poetics had better punches...and was mnore aggresive with his vocab
Vote - Poetics