Natural killa vs It.
 

Battle Rules:

8-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No d/r

3-0 KO

"Natural Killa cannot get Dq'd for having more than 5 battles open"

Don't duck this time ;)

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 11-10-05 at 01:17 PM

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Win by 3-0 KO

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 02:20 PM.

yea,so I'll spit ONE punch against ya crew just to make shit hood 'n fluid,
cuz Gkillaz is on the Legacy's roster<------so there,that should do it,
just look,stupid..the thread's cryin' cuz 'a the wackness ur' about to inject,
& outta AAALL the mods on RV....................you get the least amount 'a respect,
ya shouldn't be allowed to do text,just look at ur' songs 'n it's grovel hooks,
& your punchlines have been used as much as your name in novel books,
your games nothing but shook,making all the hoes tell ya' put ya cock back,
'n you mod the open mic forum,....but how come all the ones you drop is wack?,
ya skills stuck flat while the herbs play a game 'a tag,and all fingers point at you,
'n How can diss me...when on AIM..you begged me to join your crew?,
just admit you love and admire my skill daily..and you really want it too,
need more proof..?..well it's simple..Just look at the font you'll use,


meh...just to get the battle over with..

I did not join The Legacy BTW

It. has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 07:53 PM.

Voted For: It.

Hmm this was a pretty decent battle but to me i think my boi It. Took it by alittle..good battle though

It.
WTF? I thought you were Ip banned kid why dont you learn?
Battling some vets But even..
More newbies so how do you want respect you dont earn?
Decent opener
Repping trindad well isnt that funny?..
Cus even 'felix' knows 'trindad's career will end before it even begun.
Cus NK doesnt want a crew?But wait even if he did he still couldnt get one.
nice punch, and personal
Kid you aint a real rapper, you just plain 'shady', So leave rapverse
Like a curse,
battling real vets like me and your records soon to look even worse.!
Decent
Been here for about 4-5 months and already 6,000 + post,got no life man?
Cus like your boxer 'trinidad',
....................After losing to much, you'll just look for your retirement plan.
lol, i remember him
Blah at you coming from new york, you aint repping us good,kid just stop.
Cus Like a fat boi thinking he could do a summer sault, you'll just belly flop.
Nice meta
So please you aint coming to kill no one,just change your title its just a shame
That the only way Nk
can get noticed is if he called himself BoneCollector and changed his name
Decent closer

Overall a nice well rounded verse had nice hard hitten punchlines , and good personals good job.

Natural Killa
yea,so I'll spit ONE punch against ya crew just to make shit hood 'n fluid,
cuz Gkillaz is on the Legacy's roster<------so there,that should do it,
Weak opener
just look,stupid..the thread's cryin' cuz 'a the wackness ur' about to inject,
& outta AAALL the mods on RV....................you get the least amount 'a respect,
Nice personal
ya shouldn't be allowed to do text,just look at ur' songs 'n it's grovel hooks,
& your punchlines have been used as much as your name in novel books,
nice punch
your games nothing but shook,making all the hoes tell ya' put ya cock back,
'n you mod the open mic forum,....but how come all the ones you drop is wack?,
decent
ya skills stuck flat while the herbs play a game 'a tag,and all fingers point at you,
'n How can diss me...when on AIM..you begged me to join your crew?,
Weak
just admit you love and admire my skill daily..and you really want it too,
need more proof..?..well it's simple..Just look at the font you'll use,
Weak closer

Overall Meh verse it could have been alot better..some punchlines hit very nicely along with some personals but to me i gotta give this one to It.

Vote: It.

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Voted For: It.

Punches - It.
Personals - It. [ I like the crew one LOL ]
Metas - It.
Multies - It. [ i saw a few that i like such as

. Kid you aint a real rapper, you just plain 'shady', So leave rapverse
Like a curse,
battling real vets like me and your records soon to look even worse.! . ]

Opener - NK [ coo ]
Closer - NK [ LOL . dayum that was funny ]
Structure - NK

Overall - It.

It. had this mostly with punches and nameplay ..

Nk - had it goin on with his closers and openers n i liked his structure ..


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id vote for NK on this,I know bonecollctor woudl have my vote CQ'd.

NK wons hands down.

Voted For: It.

ok let me break this down. Fuck that bar for bar shit here

NK

the first bar was actually ok. nice set up. the second line was nice but it would of ben better if you had worded it better. the 3rd and 4th lines didnt work for me. because the 3rd was a filler. and the 4th wasnt even a realistic personal. He is respected obviously strobe wouldn't let any unknown herb be mod. the 5th and 6th were booty. weak punches. it wasn't set up nicely booo. the rest isn't good. its all played. or just plain stupid.

overall 6.7/10


It.

the first line was decent. a nice set up. then the second line was alright. nothing special. the 3rd and 4th. umm naww i wasn't feelin it that much. it was alright. ok set up but the punch was simple the next 2 were alright. weren't too bad. alot better then NK's shit. the belly flop line is played. the last line is aiight

overall: 7.4/10


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Voted For: It.

yea,so I'll spit ONE punch against ya crew just to make shit hood 'n fluid,
cuz Gkillaz is on the Legacy's roster<------so there,that should do it,
This is alright......7/10
just look,stupid..the thread's cryin' cuz 'a the wackness ur' about to inject,
& outta AAALL the mods on RV....................you get the least amount 'a respect,
inject?respect?Kindigarden words....5/10
ya shouldn't be allowed to do text,just look at ur' songs 'n it's grovel hooks,
& your punchlines have been used as much as your name in novel books,
yah i liked the second line it was cool 8/10
your games nothing but shook,making all the hoes tell ya' put ya cock back,
'n you mod the open mic forum,....but how come all the ones you drop is wack?,
This had a good filler but the rhymin words were meehhhh...6/10
ya skills stuck flat while the herbs play a game 'a tag,and all fingers point at you,
'n How can diss me...when on AIM..you begged me to join your crew?,
again decent filler but the end words aint that attracting so again 6/10
just admit you love and admire my skill daily..and you really want it too,
need more proof..?..well it's simple..Just look at the font you'll use,
?? Ok.....6/10



WTF? I thought you were Ip banned kid why dont you learn?
Battling some vets But even..
More newbies so how do you want respect you dont earn?
Repping trindad well isnt that funny?..
i like this line it aint too bad 7/10
Cus even 'felix' knows 'trindad's career will end before it even begun.
Cus NK doesnt want a crew?But wait even if he did he still couldnt get one.
LOL i liked the link reference this was cool 8/10
Kid you aint a real rapper, you just plain 'shady', So leave rapverse
Like a curse,
battling real vets like me and your records soon to look even worse.!
yeah this was kinda played but its cool 6/10
Been here for about 4-5 months and already 6,000 + post,got no life man?
Cus like your boxer 'trinidad',
....................After losing to much, you'll just look for your retirement plan.
i like the word play here....good stuff 8/10
Blah at you coming from new york, you aint repping us good,kid just stop.
Cus Like a fat boi thinking he could do a summer sault, you'll just belly flop.
i like the meta here but meeh its just decent...6/10
So please you aint coming to kill no one,just change your title its just a shame
That the only way Nk
can get noticed is if he called himself BoneCollector and changed his name
thats str8 6/10

Overall in this battle i think that It. just came a lil harder most of his lines outdid NK's in my opinion NK is just really overatted....but anyways.....my vote is going towards IT. i was feelin his drop more...his vocab was better too it wasn't as basic...so good stuff on that.....


v/It.

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Voted For: It.

yea,so I'll spit ONE punch against ya crew just to make shit hood 'n fluid,
cuz Gkillaz is on the Legacy's roster<------so there,that should do it,
^not a good opener.. sort of didnt make alot of sense and isnt solid
just look,stupid..the thread's cryin' cuz 'a the wackness ur' about to inject,
& outta AAALL the mods on RV....................you get the least amount 'a respect
^
Again forced punch didnt make a whole lot of sense


ya shouldn't be allowed to do text,just look at ur' songs 'n it's grovel hooks,
& your punchlines have been used as much as your name in novel books,

^ This is good. finnaly seeing some good punches

your games nothing but shook,making all the hoes tell ya' put ya cock back,
'n you mod the open mic forum,....but how come all the ones you drop is wack?,

^
This is played.. ok personal.. but nothing too solid here

ya skills stuck flat while the herbs play a game 'a tag,and all fingers point at you,
'n How can diss me...when on AIM..you begged me to join your crew?,

^ this is ok.. but we cant tell if its tru or not. so it could be a fake personal.


just admit you love and admire my skill daily..and you really want it too,
need more proof..?..well it's simple..Just look at the font you'll use,
^ nope.. bad colser.. didnt hit at all.


IT. your verse has more solid punches... better vocab and allround dropped stronge than natural killer.


WTF? I thought you were Ip banned kid why dont you learn?
Battling some vets But even..
More newbies so how do you want respect you dont earn?

^good personal. known fact that he was spose to be ip banned

Repping trindad well isnt that funny?..
Cus even 'felix' knows 'trindad's career will end before it even begun.
Cus NK doesnt want a crew?But wait even if he did he still couldnt get one.

^ not the best seen as the link has peopel asking to him to join there crew.. so punch didnt really work.. but they might of posted after you wrote this.. Ok punch


Kid you aint a real rapper, you just plain 'shady', So leave rapverse
Like a curse,
battling real vets like me and your records soon to look even worse.!

LOL this is a good punch

Been here for about 4-5 months and already 6,000 + post,got no life man?
Cus like your boxer 'trinidad',
....................After losing to much, you'll just look for your retirement plan.
Solid punch here.. personal and witty nice.

Blah at you coming from new york, you aint repping us good,kid just stop.
Cus Like a fat boi thinking he could do a summer sault, you'll just belly flop.

^ another solid punch here

So please you aint coming to kill no one,just change your title its just a shame
That the only way Nk
can get noticed is if he called himself BoneCollector and changed his name

^ weak closer, but the rest held it togther for you

Alright i guess i won 3-0 ko

Watch Nk try to get my votes Dq'd

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