~stylez~ vs - Menace -
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-12-05 at 02:08 PM

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~stylez~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 02:15 PM.

- Menace - has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 02:17 PM.

ima drop the same shit i did last time man...................

Your minds polluted with fakeness,you make mythological tracks
Lyrically your JUST a joke,.....without the comical acts.
service-man.. read the chronicle-facts, ya cant excape-me...
ya brains dialated like the vagina of a mutilated rapee
so go-ahead use your rap-style to try n foKuss,
- Menace -was born dumb, so his uni-brow had to show him where his nose-is
Face it- you not ill......enough you’re way too basic
You couldn’t even evolve to be as phat as me if you could shapeshift
Am I Serious Nah, I'll Take him as a Joke, like a Humorous Kidnappin'
Break you Down to the Simplest Form just like Reducin' Fractions
he got dick-jokes, the truth-is-exposed, FOOLS raps CANT-diss,
your rap credits like yer flow, cause we all know.. IT-DONT-EXIST!!!
im aka bebe cuz i get the PUSSY all the time.....
u SHOULD be AKA'd charmain cuz ur soft wit ya rhymes.
i know you wont stutter cuz u a pro @ DONT CHOKE
like monica Lewinsky when it cam to DEEP THROAT.
Are you DUMB OR INSANE? Ya NOT SICK...u aint droppin FLAMES,
drop'n ya I.D. in a stopped up toilet is the only time HOT SHIT'S UNDER YA NAME
Like bronchitis-inflicted, you can't even breathe the air that I breath.
Sick fo' real. The name's ~StyleZ~. Your schemes are just ill-concieved.



this was honestly rushed..........hahahaha


MENACE you have the advantage cuz you saw my verse.......

LISTEN

...Ill bust your HEAD-INTO-PARTS, and like drawing valentines cards with pencil ill take the LEAD TO YOUR HEART
I’m always AHEAD IN THE CHARTS, in this battle your verse was like a miscarriage cause it was DEAD FROM THE START
...Check it I’m EXPOSIN TYRANTS n LOADIN IRON. Just like Tennesse I 'Roll Wit TITANS
You better duck when I come wit "Punches" cuz I’ll take "Shots At Ya Face" like PHOTO LICENCES
...I Aint A 'Crack Head' But I'll SMOKE-YA-LINES!! Nd CHOKE-YA-SPINE!!!... I 'Dont Care For You' But You'd Swear I Did Cuz When 'Gunz Come Out' I'mma LEAVE WITH AN OPEN MIND!!!
...I'll Have Styles Fucked, Please Believe Your Bars Suck… When I Have ‘Bolts Of Lightning Strike You’ To “Jar Your Mind's Eye Into Thinkin' It's Seein' Famous People” - Just To Leave This “Star Struck”…
...Actually ITHROW-BITCHES, Smackin ya with NO-WITNESSES – Cuz Menace can catch a “shot to throat” and watch as Style leave while Coffin Up Blood like ‘[b]DRACULA WIT COLD SYMPTOMS


I had Fun

aight homes this was a good battle............people have to vote on this.............


if your GON DR people then get out..............cuz ill have your VOTE DQ'D...........


now uppin this HOT BATTLE!

nice drop homes.

uppin this shit c'mon...................................

Voted For: - Menace -

This was a pretty cool battle but menace took this one easily

~STYLEZ~
Your minds polluted with fakeness,you make mythological tracks
Lyrically your JUST a joke,.....without the comical acts.
Naw weak opener
service-man.. read the chronicle-facts, ya cant excape-me...
ya brains dialated like the vagina of a mutilated rapee
Nope
so go-ahead use your rap-style to try n foKuss,
- Menace -was born dumb, so his uni-brow had to show him where his nose-is
Nope
Face it- you not ill......enough you’re way too basic
You couldn’t even evolve to be as phat as me if you could shapeshift
Wtf?
Am I Serious Nah, I'll Take him as a Joke, like a Humorous Kidnappin'
Break you Down to the Simplest Form just like Reducin' Fractions
Okay?
he got dick-jokes, the truth-is-exposed, FOOLS raps CANT-diss,
your rap credits like yer flow, cause we all know.. IT-DONT-EXIST!!!
Decent
im aka bebe cuz i get the PUSSY all the time.....
u SHOULD be AKA'd charmain cuz ur soft wit ya rhymes.
i know you wont stutter cuz u a pro @ DONT CHOKE
like monica Lewinsky when it cam to DEEP THROAT.
Okay
Are you DUMB OR INSANE? Ya NOT SICK...u aint droppin FLAMES,
drop'n ya I.D. in a stopped up toilet is the only time HOT SHIT'S UNDER YA NAME
Like bronchitis-inflicted, you can't even breathe the air that I breath.
Sick fo' real. The name's ~StyleZ~. Your schemes are just ill-concieved
Decent couple barz, and closer

Overall this verse could have been alot better..not very hard hitten punchlines , and not very hard hitten personals elevate.

-Menace-
...Ill bust your HEAD-INTO-PARTS, and like drawing valentines cards with pencil ill take the LEAD TO YOUR HEART
I’m always AHEAD IN THE CHARTS, in this battle your verse was like a miscarriage cause it was DEAD FROM THE START
Woo..nice opener
...Check it I’m EXPOSIN TYRANTS n LOADIN IRON. Just like Tennesse I 'Roll Wit TITANS
You better duck when I come wit "Punches" cuz I’ll take "Shots At Ya Face" like PHOTO LICENCES
Ha nice punchline
...I Aint A 'Crack Head' But I'll SMOKE-YA-LINES!! Nd CHOKE-YA-SPINE!!!... I 'Dont Care For You' But You'd Swear I Did Cuz When 'Gunz Come Out' I'mma LEAVE WITH AN OPEN MIND!!!
Damn[/n]
...I'll Have Styles Fucked, Please Believe Your Bars Suck… When I Have ‘Bolts Of Lightning Strike You’ To “Jar Your Mind's Eye Into Thinkin' It's Seein' Famous People” - Just To Leave This “Star Struck”…
[b]hAHA NICE
...Actually ITHROW-BITCHES, Smackin ya with NO-WITNESSES – Cuz Menace can catch a “shot to throat” and watch as Style leave while Coffin Up Blood like ‘DRACULA WIT COLD SYMPTOMS
[b]Decent closer

Overall pretty easy battle to vote winner: -Menace-

Voted For: - Menace -

no JOKE CLOSE BATTLE....real nice battle..i can't vote...aight i will though




stylez-verse was fiya...had some nice punches and personals in there...flow was there too....had me gone wit a couple of those lines....Gone=laughin....but it seemed like you feel off a lil bit at the end wit the monica lewinsky line...but you had that shit line to cover up a lil bit for that....but nice verse overall


8/10




Menace-every single one of your bars hit...didn't really see that many personals but you punches are what grabbed my attention...i see that you put a lil bit of thought in your lines and it made em real nice...dracula line i shit myself and that lightnin line i almost gave up on readn the other guys verse...and all those other punches are nice too....so nice verse

9.7/10

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Voted For: ~stylez~

I Voted 4 ~stylez~

~stylez~
Best Lines:

Your minds polluted with fakeness,you make mythological tracks
Lyrically your JUST a joke,.....without the comical acts.
service-man.. read the chronicle-facts, ya cant excape-me...
ya brains dialated like the vagina of a mutilated rapee



Gotti Nuffguns
BEst Lines:

Check it I’m EXPOSIN TYRANTS n LOADIN IRON. Just like Tennesse I 'Roll Wit TITANS
You better duck when I come wit "Punches" cuz I’ll take "Shots At Ya Face" like PHOTO LICENCES

Overall: stylez had better flow and stucture, rushed and all

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Voted For: ~stylez~

Ok,pretty good battle here.
But I got to go with styles.
Gotti had too many gore and self glory,and not enuff raw,str8 up dissing.
Stylez had some played shit,like he was talking about "phat"..which is really old,like 2003 old.But..he still got it for having real punches.
Both of you need to relax on multis.seems like y'all are trying too hard with them,and your lines are turning out weird.So..yea..

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Voted For: - Menace -

Gotti Nuffguns - Your spit flowed well, you had good personals, good wordplay, and hard hitten punches.

Best Line - ...Ill bust your HEAD-INTO-PARTS, and like drawing valentines cards with pencil ill take the LEAD TO YOUR HEART
I’m always AHEAD IN THE CHARTS, in this battle your verse was like a miscarriage cause it was DEAD FROM THE START

Worst Line - ...I'll Have Styles Fucked, Please Believe Your Bars Suck… When I Have ‘Bolts Of Lightning Strike You’ To “Jar Your Mind's Eye Into Thinkin' It's Seein' Famous People” - Just To Leave This “Star Struck”…

~stylez~ You had a good flow, your punches where hitten pretty hard.

Best Line - Your minds polluted with fakeness,you make mythological tracks
Lyrically your JUST a joke,.....without the comical acts.

Worst Line - so go-ahead use your rap-style to try n foKuss,
- Menace -was born dumb, so his uni-brow had to show him where his nose-is

OVERALL - This battle was good, both came with hard hitten punches, and a solid flow. I give my vote to guns tho, for the better personals, and wordplay. Styles your punches wernt hitten all that hard, and you didnt really use any wordplay.

Vote - Gotti Nuffguns

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