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Poetics 11-09-05 05:36 PM

Poetics vs Technique
 
Battle Rules:

6-12 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

u kno the deal

:thumbup:
Battle Rules:

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-12-05 at 05:36 PM

Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in.

System 11-09-05 05:37 PM

Poetics has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 05:37 PM.

System 11-09-05 06:32 PM

Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-09-05 06:32 PM.

technique 11-09-05 06:44 PM

this faggot wanted me to battle so it had to be accepted
Now watch this fool get dicected and leave the battle rejected
Fuck your not respected cuz ya lame disses are like kinder garden
Your to off guarded and only wanna battle me 2 get a hard on
I took a look at your diss which was like a child had wrote it
Your punchlines are played n gay just sit back and choke kid
While I smack you viciously that'll put your ass in differen't dimentions
Pay attention to me go fuck yourself take this beating as a lesson
dunno why the fuck your here cuz your not elevated
This bitch is hated even girls hate to date him
If you ask me I think you should dissapear
cuz your a phony emcee that nobody wanna hear

Poetics 11-09-05 07:18 PM

Technique be meek cuz I said it b4
Ur weak skills give no thrills
Ill lock u up in Ur minds methodical drawer
Ur speech freakish not sleek enough to feel this
So let’s settle the score
Im calling u out bout to let it loose
Up against a chump like U they say “Poetics - what’s the use”
Buts it’s the battle I chose, one u know Ur gonna lose
Comin up against me…meng ur a fool
Ill keep this short cuz u ain’t even @ my level
One luv 4 da real Cat’s that read this & imagine the bass N treble

technique 11-09-05 08:16 PM

upping for votes here..................................

Poetics 11-09-05 08:24 PM

serious - common y'all..drop some vote's.................

technique 11-10-05 10:16 AM

upping............................................ ...

GKillaz05 11-10-05 12:21 PM

Voted For: Technique

Technique - Good spit, it had a hard flow, and your punches were hitten well.

Best Line - this faggot wanted me to battle so it had to be accepted
Now watch this fool get dicected and leave the battle rejected

Worst Line - Fuck your not respected cuz ya lame disses are like kinder garden
Your to off guarded and only wanna battle me 2 get a hard on

Poetics - Your flow was off, you didnt have many good punches or wordplay.

Best Line - Up against a chump like U they say “Poetics - what’s the use”
Buts it’s the battle I chose, one u know Ur gonna lose

Worst Line - Technique be meek cuz I said it b4
Ur weak skills give no thrills
Ill lock u up in Ur minds methodical drawer

OVERALL - This battle was one sided with Tec takin' the W. He used stronger punches and he flowed better. The other dude needs to flow a decent line then work on comin' up wit a punch.

Vote - Tec

RTF in Sig of Vote be REMOVED!

Poetics 11-10-05 01:32 PM

upping .................................................

Magic5 11-10-05 05:01 PM

This was feedback posted for Technique
 
I just want to check the polls. Technique probably won, but I just need to check something.

Both of you should sign up for the Punchline League. It's a great way to elevate without messing up your record.

Pzykotik~Mindz 11-10-05 06:38 PM

This was feedback posted for Technique
 
Checkin Fuckin Pollz..............................

technique 11-10-05 07:21 PM

alrite cool thanks for the vote and upping for more votes...

technique 11-11-05 01:00 PM

upping............................................

technique 11-11-05 06:22 PM

upping for more votes plz.........................

Street Disciple 11-11-05 06:42 PM

Voted For: Technique

Technique won this shit, everybody could tell that, Poetics shit was to basic and the punch-lines were nothin, most of all not elevated.

Poetics 11-11-05 10:29 PM

upppiinggg........................................ ..................drop a vote,,,tks...

C-Hood 11-12-05 08:14 AM

Voted For: Technique

Technique be meek cuz I said it b4
Ur weak skills give no thrills
Ill lock u up in Ur minds methodical drawer
Ur speech freakish not sleek enough to feel this
So let’s settle the score
this stucture is horrible...not a very good punch either
Im calling u out bout to let it loose
Up against a chump like U they say “Poetics - what’s the use”
hell naw
Buts it’s the battle I chose, one u know Ur gonna lose
Comin up against me…meng ur a fool
hell naw
Ill keep this short cuz u ain’t even @ my level
One luv 4 da real Cat’s that read this & imagine the bass N treble
what the fuck?!?!


breakdown-well young man i see that you are extremly new to the rap tip...in battles you must incorporate punches and personals...you had NONE of these so there fore your verse sucked more than 2 dolla hoes...and your structure i don't even want to touch on that...but i will....what the hell were you thinkin? i couldn't really read it...flow was off like a motherfucka...this shit was just fucked up....take my advice and sit back and watch some of these other cats on here and learn!!
overal- -5/10






Technique
this faggot wanted me to battle so it had to be accepted
Now watch this fool get dicected and leave the battle rejected
ok
Fuck your not respected cuz ya lame disses are like kinder garden
Your to off guarded and only wanna battle me 2 get a hard on
can't see the rhyme
I took a look at your diss which was like a child had wrote it
Your punchlines are played n gay just sit back and choke kid
ok
While I smack you viciously that'll put your ass in differen't dimentions
Pay attention to me go fuck yourself take this beating as a lesson
ok
dunno why the fuck your here cuz your not elevated
This bitch is hated even girls hate to date him
If you ask me I think you should dissapear
cuz your a phony emcee that nobody wanna hear
ok


breakdown-your verse wasn't all that good either but trust me it was enough to herb this guy...you need to just work on your punches and personals...i hope that you was just takin it light cuz you already seen what this guy can do or somethin...but aight that's it


Vote-Technique

technique 11-12-05 10:17 AM

excellent keep on voting plz thanks...............

technique 11-12-05 03:15 PM

upping............................................

technique 11-12-05 08:14 PM

upping for some votes plz......................... poetic shut your mouth your shit was garbage.

technique 11-13-05 07:16 AM

upping............................................ ........

Poetics 11-13-05 12:44 PM

hey y'all ...Technique has a new Name....it's Tec-Weak ......lol
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Technique
upping for some votes plz......................... poetic shut your mouth your shit was garbage.



its Poetics, biatch...............................

ohhh ya!!! ..............hey Tec-Weak...............E.A.D (Eat A Dick)

technique 11-13-05 02:08 PM

upping for votes please to close this battle............

technique 11-13-05 06:59 PM

upping this battle.................................

technique 11-14-05 02:33 PM

upping this shit..................................

technique 11-14-05 06:58 PM

upping weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.........

technique 11-15-05 05:15 PM

upping............................................ ....

technique 11-15-05 08:27 PM

upping this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

technique 11-16-05 06:28 PM

plz upping for some votes..........................

technique 11-17-05 06:26 AM

upping............................................ ..........

%%%% 11-19-05 10:11 AM

Voted For: Technique

This was a weak battle here,honestly.
But technique got it easy.
Poetics..wtf was that?You had lines that didn't rhyme,diss,or do anything at all.And your last line,where you were talking about real cats,for w/e reason..was stretched.And in ya 6th bar..what you mean your calling him out?YOUR BATTLING HIM.So obviously..you've done called him out.Your lines were dumb,stupid,and wack.

Technique got it.

Vote-Technique

Drop an honest vote in the link below
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214286

technique 11-19-05 03:10 PM

upping for 1 more vote...............................

technique 11-23-05 10:26 AM

upping............................................ ..

technique 11-23-05 04:55 PM

upping for one more vote. good battle poetics...........

technique 11-24-05 01:23 PM

upping for this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

technique 12-04-05 08:10 AM

upping............................................ ....

technique 12-22-05 11:25 AM

upping for 1 more vote..................................

technique 12-23-05 07:40 PM

upping to close this..................................

technique 12-26-05 12:50 PM

upping............................................ ..............


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