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Poetics vs Defined
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 11-13-05 at 02:22 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Poetics has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-05 02:23 PM.
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Defined has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-10-05 03:28 PM.
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dont understand wordplay or personals dont vote
disregard a herb, whatever you drop, dont take Charge you have such bad Credit.... ........that after this verse you drop, itll put me at large your scared, leatherface couldnt compare, your bliss you Poetic?..text?..you thought it would be Jus-diss let this be my last bar, ill do 6 and you do much more youll still lose...like T.O.s chance back wit phily...whore |
I never get concerned about who’s in the lead, I puff Weed
I take on MC’s by the Three’s Weed out the fake ones that spit from the G’s Cuz battling Defined is somewhat Disturbin I’ll beat this fool hella-crunked mad Herbin U lack the fire that most rap-battles Require I know u aspire, bur ur entire flow so weak u should Retire U so nervous Defined we all see u Perspire U need skoolin son on how 2 use Words with Verbs Peep my Adjectives, so natural with no Additives I gotta say ur presence makes me a little Paranoid Cuz U so but-ugly Ur looks break Polaroid’s U words so weak cant get strength taking Steroids If pain is weakness leaving the Body Then explain this, why Ur own man passed me the Shoty I suggest after this one u stop Attemptin Cuz ur verses are a waste of space, RV is mad Trippin Look at ur stupid pic, who the fuck do u think ur Reppin 2 young 2 be on here Defined needs parental Discretion 2 top it off his queer-ass needs manly Affection Im making fun of u cuz I ain’t so Nice So scratch Ur head like lice, I know Ur Confused Watch the 6 O’clock News, Ur T.T Crew just left Abused Life ain’t fair, u so broke and no one could care So take off that avatar that says Chamillionare You couldn’t even make a dollar out of 15 Cents Especially off Ur raps cuz they make no Sense No one can question that or come 2 ur Defense That’s why Defined, why you’ll always be Behind Look at Ur own Sig, U once copied mine Look at ur profile; smokin, rappin, Fuckin Ur rap occupation amounts to Nuttin Battling me! Now hey kid, u may be Somthin U blocking my light with ur fat ass it's evident I ain’t just the client, I’m the RV president g'yaaaaaaaa (check out Defined's profile to see why i dissed it..and his TT Crew..and faggoty ass descriptions, not to mention his pic) |
LMAOOO^^^^....wow i still beat you with only 6 lines....your sorry....uppin for votes
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I havnt even started, what u takling bout...
i got more to say, more disses to throw ur way... should i open us up another battle...............? :gfy:
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LMAOOOO....up for some eazy votes pls.............
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eazy fo-sheazy....i stomped on yo ass wit dis 1....upinggggg............ drop a vote, as an honest one shall be returned....... |
LMAO...uppin for more votes please.................
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up again for some votes pls......will rtf honestly
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upppinngg for some vote's please//...tks.....................
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Voted For: Defined
I never get concerned about who’s in the lead, I puff Weed I take on MC’s by the Three’s Weed out the fake ones that spit from the G’s ^^^WEak opener Cuz battling Defined is somewhat Disturbin I’ll beat this fool hella-crunked mad Herbin ^^^No......punch U lack the fire that most rap-battles Require I know u aspire, bur ur entire flow so weak u should Retire U so nervous Defined we all see u Perspire ^^^No....weak this was jus a run on punch U need skoolin son on how 2 use Words with Verbs Peep my Adjectives, so natural with no Additives ^^^WEak I gotta say ur presence makes me a little Paranoid Cuz U so but-ugly Ur looks break Polaroid’s U words so weak cant get strength taking Steroids ^^^IGht....nuthin special If pain is weakness leaving the Body Then explain this, why Ur own man passed me the Shoty ^^^No this shit wwas weak I suggest after this one u stop Attemptin Cuz ur verses are a waste of space, RV is mad Trippin Look at ur stupid pic, who the fuck do u think ur Reppin ^^^Weak 2 young 2 be on here Defined needs parental Discretion 2 top it off his queer-ass needs manly Affection ^^^Ight Im making fun of u cuz I ain’t so Nice So scratch Ur head like lice, I know Ur Confused Watch the 6 O’clock News, Ur T.T Crew just left Abused ^^^^Would of been better if u werded it right Life ain’t fair, u so broke and no one could care So take off that avatar that says Chamillionare ^^^ight personal....not really a diss You couldn’t even make a dollar out of 15 Cents Especially off Ur raps cuz they make no Sense No one can question that or come 2 ur Defense ^^^weak punch That’s why Defined, why you’ll always be Behind Look at Ur own Sig, U once copied mine ^^^No.....this was wack Look at ur profile; smokin, rappin, Fuckin Ur rap occupation amounts to Nuttin Battling me! Now hey kid, u may be Somthin ^^^Ight U blocking my light with ur fat ass it's evident I ain’t just the client, I’m the RV president ^^^Wow.....U must like biggie right lol weak closer Disregard a herb, whatever you drop, dont take Charge you have such bad Credit.... ........that after this verse you drop, itll put me at large ^^^Good opener your scared, leatherface couldnt compare, your bliss you Poetic?..text?..you thought it would be Jus-diss ^^^IGht nuthin to special let this be my last bar, ill do 6 and you do much more youll still lose...like T.O.s chance back wit phily...whore ^^^good closer V/Defined.....Poetics u need to elavate foreal ur Whole verse was weak no punchs or good diss's jus run on shit...get some punchs an personals up...werd...def u came wit a solid verse it wasnt the best but good enough to get the win..... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=215277 ^^^RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED |
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uppingg for some real votez....plz....hook it up..i return honest votes...ONE
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upping............................................ ..........drop a vote
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up for some more votes please.....................
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Voted For: Poetics
Poetics - He had good punchlines, his multi's where good, and it flowed pretty well. Best Line - U lack the fire that most rap-battles Require I know u aspire, bur ur entire flow so weak u should Retire U so nervous Defined we all see u Perspire Worst Line - U need skoolin son on how 2 use Words with Verbs Peep my Adjectives, so natural with no Additives Defined - You flowed really well, but your punches wernt good, and no multi's. Best Line - disregard a herb, whatever you drop, dont take Charge you have such bad Credit.... ........that after this verse you drop, itll put me at large Worst Line - let this be my last bar, ill do 6 and you do much more youll still lose...like T.O.s chance back wit phily...whore OVERALL - This was a close battle but poet gets it for more multi's, and more punches. Defined, you could have beat him if you tried harder, your lines where pretty weak, and poet just had alot more. Vote - Poet RTF IN SIG! |
Voted For: Defined
*smh* D actually predicted that Poetics would be long winded and weak... that's that personal, is the best punch in the battle hands down... Opener: D Closer: D Punches: D Personals: D Creativity: D Complexity: D Enjoyment: None Vote: D |
Voted For: Poetics
i voted for poe cus he had better punches and wordplay and personals and that was good def. u had ok rymes but ur wordplay coulda been used better no hate thou rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=221364 |
lmao at those who voted for him becuze of length lol....anyway uppin for real votes please thanks
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i voted for poe he had better flow and his lines were a little better at parts
def. u had some nice stuff just he dropped harder no hate rtf poe. to one of my battles |
Voted For: Defined
Defined-Some good punches, short, sweet and to the point Poetics-Some lines felt stretched, felt like you made the verse to long cus it didn't really keep me intrested, had some basics like perspire retire etc... |
thanks for the real vote lol...upin for more real votes please
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This was feedback posted for Defined
v/ defined
his concepts were btter worded and more original/fresher cool verses tho, to both |
up for more real votes pls.....i will rtf honestly thanks
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Voted For: Poetics
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WTF nigga??.....you didnt even give a reason why u picked his sorry ass....^^will be removed....up for real explained votes please
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Voted For: Defined
Both dropped very weak Defined actually had slight punches in his drop, other guy was sorta rambling with fake disses and didnt hit at all. Vote-Defined |
thanks....uppin for last vote please..............
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up again for this old battle to be done please....
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damn up again for last vote pls.........letrs get this old battle closed
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uppin for last vote pls....will rtf honestly....pls vote on this old battle
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Voted For: Defined
LOL, Short 'n sweet Defined, decent verse, man. You killed it, for real... lol, the closer had me laughin'... Poetics your verse wasnt that dope, man... alot of pointless bars, and useless rambling, if you focus your disses on your oppenent, and not some random punchlines, you'd be alot better, yo....you did have some personals and shit, but nothin really caught my eye. just elevate your wordplay and usin better personals Defined took this tho for a better verse, simple as. Peace out... |
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