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Natural killa vs Street Disciple

Battle Rules:

10-16 Bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
Blind Spit

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 11-12-05 at 10:03 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Expired battle close - win

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-05 09:33 AM.

Street Disciple has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-12-05 09:33 AM.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Street Disciple

I wanna battle someone, but nobody replies in Font Lines, so I can't get a new battle, and that pussy got scared once he read my verse and didn't check in

You got your head up ya' ass,cuz none respond to ou..?..fuck,this newb's sad,
Cuz kid, It's not that their scared..it's just that they know you suck really bad
You musta had..someone tell you that you should lighten up at least,dude,
Cuz it's nutin with front lines,it's just people don't reply to wackness like you
It's hurts,but it's truth,your the worst,get it through..ya head,fore' I board-em',
But don't think you special or nutin..cuz I'm only battling you outta boredom
So go sort 'em..out,you know..them pre-writtens ya' got stacked,from the other day,
But your ARE a bonafide Disciple..but that's cuz you only follow what other's say
On a regular base-..is,being wack your niche'?..cuz you won't win in this by a mile,
& I see you put the street in ya' name..but there's none in ya' lifestyle
I don't even think this is worthwhile..cuz from your side,I ain't heard shit,
Ya' Put 100 posts to vote in this this..but why?..cause YOU sure ain't worth it
Ya'll End up murdered,your qoute's the worst in my verse..cuz dude,ya making sick
& Your only badtalking the pussy in that dude cause you wanted the dick,
Your a bitch..straight up,for real..just not close a man..so get raided by this shotty,
Cuz to me,this whole verse........................is just 16 lines wasted on a nobody

His shit ain't all that, only thing he can spit is a buncha wack ass verses
Sounds just like 50 Cent, just a bunch-uh-bullshit rhymed over curses
Check it, this nigga should've known I'm like smoke, I'm the only Natural Killa
Verses I drop are so graphic, he thought he was havin flash backs of the thrilla
All of his shit is free, but at most none of them got any style
Just like the bums on the street, you'll find his played out punch lines piled
In all of his rhymes, and the shitty small verses that you'll see him drop
Claimin he hood but got as much credit there as the racist cops
He got no skills at all, to beat his bitch ass all I had to do was cough
Cus BG's company fits description of nk's dick, rap style and length perfectly, microsoft
He rocks the username, but he's just another e-thug wannabe shady
And his raps make as much sense as babble comin from a newborn baby
This nigga thought I was a no-sho but my shit gon keep him surpised
He's garbage at life and rappin, in ten years he'll be makin me fries
This nigga couldn't rhyme himself outta a fuckin basket
So I put this bitch to rest, textal assult left him in an open casket

Voted For: Street Disciple

VOTED 4: Street Desciple

Overall:
Street Disciple's shit was tighter,
if we voted based on weight, then shit, Killa's shit was lighter
i aint just tryin to rep cuz he bumped mine
but lyrically his lines were like hard crimes doing mad time
...........mad harder

...Killa, ur shit was still good...for real...u packed a good punch..can u get ur font to get bigga when u drop a verse...shit ima need to get glasses if i keep voting ur shit

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Disciples Best Lines:
In all of his rhymes, and the shitty small verses that you'll see him drop
Claimin he hood but got as much credit there as the racist cops

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Killa's Best Lines:
On a regular base-..is,being wack your niche'?..cuz you won't win in this by a mile,
& I see you put the street in ya' name..but there's none in ya' lifestyle

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...peep mine

Poetics

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This was feedback posted for Natural killa

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Voted For: Street Disciple

Both were pretty tight ass, but im gonna have to go with street desciple his lines were perfectly arranged, and this was a really hard decision killas rhymes were ill as hell but im going with desciple

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Voted For: Street Disciple

Street Disciple - Best I have seen from you, you had good punches and it flowed well.

Best Line - He rocks the username, but he's just another e-thug wannabe shady
And his raps make as much sense as babble comin from a newborn baby

Worst Line - NONE

Natural Killa - You didnt come as hard as you could have, flow was good some decent punches.

Best Line - Your a bitch..straight up,for real..just not close a man..so get raided by this shotty,
Cuz to me,this whole verse........................is just 16 lines wasted on a nobody

Worst Line -You got your head up ya' ass,cuz none respond to ou..?..fuck,this newb's sad,
Cuz kid, It's not that their scared..it's just that they know you suck really bad

OVERALL - This was a close battle, but I think that Street took this just because he had more punches, that hit. NK you should have came with strong punches, not decent punches.

Vote - Street

Voted For: Natural killa

ONE SIDED
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Punches - NK
Flow - NK
Structure - Street
Personal - NK
Multies - Didnt Like Any.
Metas - NK

Best Punch Here:
Natural Killa
You got your head up ya' ass,cuz none respond to ou..?..fuck,this newb's sad,
Cuz kid, It's not that their scared..it's just that they know you suck really bad

Street Disciple .. Was Okay .. Natural Killa Took This With Eeezee ..
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Vote On My Battle. .. Battle In Sig

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You got your head up ya' ass,cuz none respond to ou..?..fuck,this newb's sad,
Cuz kid, It's not that their scared..it's just that they know you suck really bad
So go sort 'em..out,you know..them pre-writtens ya' got stacked,from the other day,
But your ARE a bonafide Disciple..but that's cuz you only follow what other's say
On a regular base-..is,being wack your niche'?..cuz you won't win in this by a mile,
& I see you put the street in ya' name..but there's none in ya' lifestyle

stretched but decent personals.

VS
In all of his rhymes, and the shitty small verses that you'll see him drop
Claimin he hood but got as much credit there as the racist cops
He got no skills at all, to beat his bitch ass all I had to do was cough
Cus BG's company fits description of nk's dick, rap style and length perfectly, microsoft

They were borderline, the microsoft bar would be heavy if you worded it better.

NO HATE,

BUT NK CLEARLY TOOK THIS.

RTF?

Get strobe to make it a vote, he agreed in post 9.

Vote added

Voted For: Natural killa

His shit ain't all that, only thing he can spit is a buncha wack ass verses
Sounds just like 50 Cent, just a bunch-uh-bullshit rhymed over curses
^^^no weak opener
Check it, this nigga should've known I'm like smoke, I'm the only Natural Killa
Verses I drop are so graphic, he thought he was havin flash backs of the thrilla
^^^weak punch
All of his shit is free, but at most none of them got any style
Just like the bums on the street, you'll find his played out punch lines piled
^^^Ight
In all of his rhymes, and the shitty small verses that you'll see him drop
Claimin he hood but got as much credit there as the racist cops
^^^Good line
He got no skills at all, to beat his bitch ass all I had to do was cough
Cus BG's company fits description of nk's dick, rap style and length perfectly, microsoft
^^^ight werded wrong
He rocks the username, but he's just another e-thug wannabe shady
And his raps make as much sense as babble comin from a newborn baby
^^^No weak
This nigga thought I was a no-sho but my shit gon keep him surpised
He's garbage at life and rappin, in ten years he'll be makin me fries
^^^Ight
This nigga couldn't rhyme himself outta a fuckin basket
So I put this bitch to rest, textal assult left him in an open casket
^^^Naw weak closer

You got your head up ya' ass,cuz none respond to ou..?..fuck,this newb's sad,
Cuz kid, It's not that their scared..it's just that they know you suck really bad
^^^Ight opener nuthin special
You musta had..someone tell you that you should lighten up at least,dude,
Cuz it's nutin with front lines,it's just people don't reply to wackness like you
^^^Weak
It's hurts,but it's truth,your the worst,get it through..ya head,fore' I board-em',
But don't think you special or nutin..cuz I'm only battling you outta boredom
^^^Ight punch
So go sort 'em..out,you know..them pre-writtens ya' got stacked,from the other day,
But your ARE a bonafide Disciple..but that's cuz you only follow what other's say
^^^Nice punch mixed wit the personal
On a regular base-..is,being wack your niche'?..cuz you won't win in this by a mile,
& I see you put the street in ya' name..but there's none in ya' lifestyle
^^^Nice.....
I don't even think this is worthwhile..cuz from your side,I ain't heard shit,
Ya' Put 100 posts to vote in this this..but why?..cause YOU sure ain't worth it
^^^Weak....line
Ya'll End up murdered,your qoute's the worst in my verse..cuz dude,ya making sick
& Your only badtalking the pussy in that dude cause you wanted the dick,
^^^lol good punch
Your a bitch..straight up,for real..just not close a man..so get raided by this shotty,
Cuz to me,this whole verse........................is just 16 lines wasted on a nobody
^^^Weak closer

Over all this was a weak battle.....street u had a lot of played lines that were weak an not consistently diss'in him wit personals.....werk on that....natural...u came wit a half assed verse but u stiill get tthe win cuz it was still more solid wit ur punchs an personals that hitt harder than his....so u get my vote...V/Natural Killa
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^^^RTF HONESTLY......or this will be removed...1

ite...thx for the vote trey,I'll hit ya' battle up now.