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"Doc" Trin 11-14-05 05:09 PM

Doc "Trin"- What Hapened To the Love
 
This is the first audio ive posted on here... so yall kats can hear me... im 15 voice is young but it shoulnt matter..

Left feed On.

Prey For Me UNF Intermental

Per se The Gig will appear

No were liek the UK UNF

Song-

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3091063

"Doc" Trin 11-14-05 05:14 PM

spelled my own name wrong lol

"Doc" Trin 11-14-05 06:12 PM

up fags.........

"Doc" Trin 11-14-05 06:16 PM

com on..........

Jonezy© 11-14-05 06:17 PM

Like this beat..my kinda shit

you come in nice..flows pretty cool..
do fall off in a few places..but this track has a
nice vibe..you seem a little shakey on the mic
tho...but cool stuff dude

Jonezy© 11-14-05 06:19 PM

rft on my IS IT WORTH IT track dude

"Doc" Trin 11-14-05 06:43 PM

ty for feed ......

"Doc" Trin 11-14-05 08:04 PM

up......................

"Doc" Trin 11-14-05 09:23 PM

feed u gays....

Past Tense 11-14-05 09:37 PM

peepin now...

Production:The production was decent..to many beats like this these days:6/10
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Flow:ya flow was decent....it fit the beat well..aint too bad fam-7/10
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Pressense:I was feeling it all the way through you didnt have enuff change ups tho-7/10
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Quality:Ya quality was ehh alright i suppose - 7/10
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Lyrics:Ya lyrics were pretty straight...weren't too bad...-7/10
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Overall:this track was pretty tight..i'm feeling it...keep these coming.
-7/10

I Was feelin it keep um coming

"Doc" Trin 11-15-05 06:47 AM

come on for feed

B To The D 11-15-05 11:49 AM

Aight Listenin


Like The Beat


Deliverys Nice Good Shit,Your Voice Fits


Presence is nice How Long u been Rappin Audio

Hook Gets Lil Repetetive But Its Nice

Lyrics Are Good


Emotions Nice


Good Track 8/10


Stay Up

"Doc" Trin 11-15-05 03:04 PM

ive been doing audio for about 2 years.... hit me up for a colllab sum time^

"Doc" Trin 11-15-05 03:48 PM

up...................

O.V.Dose 11-15-05 04:13 PM

i like the beat. the flow wasnt bad......you sound kinda like chris brown lol. run it run it....anyways lol. you dont sound very confident on the mic....its good start but you need to work on your delivery / emotion...especially on this type of track. lyrics were aiight...you could up your vocab. im not really feelin the hook. you need something a lil more catchy. but overall it wasnt a bad track


id appreciate if you could hit this up: O.V.Dose ft. Detox - Home of the Cougars

villagepimp 11-16-05 02:13 PM

your voice and style is perfect for this track... you feel off flow a few times, but hey it happens sometimes. I'm not so surre about the St. Louis style you threw in there at one point. I liked it. DLed it. As far as how it sounded to me... It was a track I would definately play. 7/10
;)

rtf

"Doc" Trin 11-16-05 02:46 PM

well thanks fam.... peeps like u keep me in the game.

J.D 11-16-05 03:04 PM

werd i like this track actually. gr8 beat, this is that Amerie beat aint it?? your flow stays pretty consistent throughout the track. your quality wasnt the best i've hurd but it didnt affect it too much. gud track 8/10

"Doc" Trin 11-16-05 03:56 PM

yup.... why dont we fall in love beat... thanks for feed

Willa 11-20-05 06:20 PM

ok beat is ok but these beats are getting played fast lol
presense and emotion were pretty well on point u seemed kind of shaky in places but no complaints
flow was off in a few spots but overall it was pretty good
quality isnt horrible but could be improved like most
overall decent track props
ty for leaving feed on my track


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