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Wicked One vs Snipes
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6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/R No Hate and etc............... 3-ko Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-15-05 at 01:34 AM Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in. |
Snipes has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 07:51 PM.
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Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-14-05 10:56 PM.
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mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite
i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights i'm gon give shots to da head and have ya c'n stripes after dat merkn up wit a pipe people gone have ta call da albulance to save ya life cause ya only 1min to live dem right if u survive i'm gon b batman fuck ya up in da night cause darkness is where i lurk "out of sight" if u 4get who did dis to ya da name is Snipes and if u cant rememba u betta try wit all ya "might" cause if ya cant rememba ma name next life time i aint gon be so nice// Wicked One G/L Btw i havent battled in a minute |
My punches break spines and the next phase is to rape minds...
But you can’t keep up with this vets pace so take five... Or I’ll cut your body in half at the waist line... And you’re probly on the jake’s side so fuck your fake rhymes... I’ve almost made this place mine... Moderating emcees cuz I’ve slain at least a hundred... And it ain’t no thang to leave you sonned, kid... Actually, that’s what I just done did... |
nice drop man and now upping dis shit...................
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damn ma lines are to long..............................
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Voted For: Snipes
snipes has a more solid verse..it acctually seems like he put effort into his... while wicked ones verse seems mor like "i dont give a fuck" drop........ punches are nearly even..but snipes just edged ahead flow is again even but snipes verse seems to connect better thru out.. multis go to wicked one...snipes is simple rhymed. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^Lol............Anyways uppin...for some honest votes .........RTF....
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This was feedback posted for Snipes
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Voted For: Wicked One
Ok..this battle was filled up with too much "gore".Not enough disses in my opinion. Both of you had a nice flow,But at times..snipes would stretch his lines.Like the ambulance/batman bar..that was stretched out.Wicked One kept his lines shorter,which made for a better flow. As for punches,well,like I said..too many gore lines.But Wicked one still had this aspect.He still said Snipes is one the jakes side and is fake,which is a diss. I didn't see one diss in Snipes verse..it was all him talking about himself. Vote-Wicked One Drop an honest vote in the link below http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214831 |
Upppinnn...for me votes....WTF..........................
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Not be a prick or anything................but can I get a RTF?
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Voted For: Wicked One
mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights ^^^no weak opener... i'm gon give shots to da head and have ya c'n stripes after dat merkn up wit a pipe people gone have ta call da albulance to save ya life cause ya only 1min to live dem right ^^^No punch weak if u survive i'm gon b batman fuck ya up in da night cause darkness is where i lurk "out of sight" if u 4get who did dis to ya da name is Snipes and if u cant rememba u betta try wit all ya "might" ^^^no.....sorry cause if ya cant rememba ma name next life time i aint gon be so nice// ^^^weak closer My punches break spines and the next phase is to rape minds... But you can’t keep up with this vets pace so take five... ^^^Ight opener Or I’ll cut your body in half at the waist line... And you’re probly on the jake’s side so fuck your fake rhymes... ^^^Weak I’ve almost made this place mine... Moderating emcees cuz I’ve slain at least a hundred... ^^^??? And it ain’t no thang to leave you sonned, kid... Actually, that’s what I just done did... ^^ight closer This was a weak battle both came wit weak verse's yah need to elavate.....snipes ur verse had no punchs or anything good no personal or wordplay....werk on all of it....wicked i thought u were better u had a weak verse wit little diss's....but it was better than snipes.....u get my vote....RTF OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Snipes
this was terrrible...both verses were real bad lacking intesity.....but if i gotta vote on one of em..id say...Snipes, ur punches were better, and flow was much more fluid then Wicked One. ---------------------------- Snipes Best Lines: mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights -------------------- Wicked One Best Lines: My punches break spines and the next phase is to rape minds... But you can’t keep up with this vets pace so take five... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin man fo mo votes....................................
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Upppppppiiiiinnnnnn......(Oh yeah Snipes Iam up 2-0 not 2-2 dont lie in ur sig man)...
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it would be 2-2 but u got ma votes moved
when urs exactly da same |
uppin i'm losing dawg aight
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Voted For: Wicked One
mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights i'm gon give shots to da head and have ya c'n stripes after dat merkn up wit a pipe people gone have ta call da albulance to save ya life cause ya only 1min to live dem right if u survive i'm gon b batman fuck ya up in da night cause darkness is where i lurk "out of sight" if u 4get who did dis to ya da name is Snipes and if u cant rememba u betta try wit all ya "might" cause if ya cant rememba ma name next life time i aint gon be so nice// i think you got a flow but you need to focus more when you write dont keep flowin the same words on a basic level you know add a twist or come more complex say people would say these are basic rhymes but still decent rhymes its not like you rhyme about noting you had a focus but get a little more complex then that aight and u'll be straight My punches break spines and the next phase is to rape minds... But you can’t keep up with this vets pace so take five... Or I’ll cut your body in half at the waist line... And you’re probly on the jake’s side so fuck your fake rhymes... I’ve almost made this place mine... Moderating emcees cuz I’ve slain at least a hundred... And it ain’t no thang to leave you sonned, kid... Actually, that’s what I just done did... i feel like you got more straight ot the point with good rhymes and nice punches more focus flow and keep hiting more consistent and i felt like you took this one my vote: one |
This was feedback posted for Wicked One
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Voted For: Wicked One
Both was garbage but wicked one cus he had better punches, you both of you tied in pretty much everything else... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for Snipes
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Voted For: Wicked One
Wicked One - Good verse, you flowed well had some good punches and it was overall good. Best Line - And it ain’t no thang to leave you sonned, kid... Actually, that’s what I just done did... Worst Line - Or I’ll cut your body in half at the waist line... And you’re probly on the jake’s side so fuck your fake rhymes... Snipes - Your flow was bad, your punches where not that good, overall weak verse. Best Line - mothafucka dis is not like ridin a bike cause once i'm done wit ya, ya never be rite i come to ma battles ready fight and 9 out of 10 i'm knockin out ya lights Worst Line - i'm gon give shots to da head and have ya c'n stripes after dat merkn up wit a pipe people gone have ta call da albulance to save ya life cause ya only 1min to live dem right OVERALL - This battle was a one-sided battle, wicked one gets the win. He had the better flow, punches, and multi's. Snipes you need to work on your flow, and you need to be more creative with your punches. Vote - Wicked One RTF or Vote Be REMOVED! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=215277 |
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Voted For: Wicked One
personally i think this is a bit of a weak battle. heres the breadkdown: W.O: your opener was ok, half decent punch, on target but not massively impressive. Closer: was ok, good punch small but effective. overall: the punches were ok but i saw a lack of creativity with metaphors and wordplay, or even amusing lines. Im sure you can and have done a lot better in the past but for now it was easily enough to take the win. Snipes: you give us "new" peeps hope, your verse was not great, the lines were stretched -badly and the structure and flow of the verse was made really difficult because of this. The punches were incredibly weak and the rhyming and vocab was very basic. Sorry to be a killjoy but i would be very surprised if you get a single vote in this battle |
rtf pls on one of my battles or il remove the vote
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Done...Anyways...upppinnn......................... .
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