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Sean Gunner 11-15-05 07:46 PM

First Poster (Splash?)
 

Enygma 11-15-05 08:32 PM

To be honest, I wasn't feeling the effect at the bottom of where it was split to black and white. If you had also done the effect up at the top, it would have fit better. Also, the lighting effect seemed weird, I dunno. Maybe if it was dark on the other side too, or if the darkness came from a different angle. The Text, Pic and BG are all good....they all pretty much fit together, but the other two things I mentioned were my only gripes :D

snipes 11-15-05 08:32 PM

hm........
its kinda plain to me

New Meth0d 11-15-05 08:56 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Snipes
hm........
its kinda plain to me

lmao at that comment

Rawk James 11-15-05 08:57 PM

Its just bad

The font is bad imo.. The black coloring at the bottom looks horrible..

Sean Gunner 11-16-05 03:34 PM

The sponge tool with a brush setting.

Blay'all 11-16-05 03:39 PM

meh, really basic

Sean Gunner 11-16-05 04:03 PM

Ok, yes it's simple, but you aren't gonna see all these complicated posters on phone poles, or something else. One thing, costs a lot of money to print special effects.

Rawk James 11-16-05 05:01 PM

You wouldnt see that shit on a phone pole.. EVER.

Sean Gunner 11-16-05 06:21 PM

Wouldn't see your stuff outside of RV either, but my point is that sometimes simple is better then all these complicated effects, specially if it is gonna be printed.

Rawk James 11-16-05 06:25 PM

lmao you wanna know whats wrong with this?

1. Whys his head on a building roof top alone?
2. I hate that text.
3. The reason for the black was... Its not even a good fade from normal to black

Tips.. Scrap it, Make a bigger scope with covers more of his body witht he circle on his forehead, from a view on top of a rooftop etc, would ook 10x better.

Sean Gunner 11-17-05 06:27 PM

He's in front of the city, not on top of a building.

Rawk James 11-17-05 08:14 PM

Eminems taller then buildings?

The poitn in good cd covers/posters/splashes etc is..
They look SOMEWHAT realistic. Like he could really be there.

DUH.

Sean Gunner 11-17-05 08:25 PM

Larger than life.

Metaphors

Indeph 11-19-05 02:05 PM

I actually love this. Alot. Especially the bottom.

ksr 11-19-05 02:10 PM

lmao @ rawk
em's in front of the buildings, the citty's supposed to be a bg
it does look like he's there, it just looks like he's right in front of the camera
u shoulda used a gradient to fade the b&w tho
still looks koo :thumbup:

Rawk James 11-19-05 02:49 PM

Thats the TOP of the building not the wall of a building

ksr 11-19-05 02:52 PM

i noticed

Rawk James 11-19-05 03:19 PM

theres no perspective that will show his face and the top of a roof. Its not right

Rawk James 11-19-05 03:22 PM

And hes not ON the roof, if you look in the black area you can see the ledge.

Sean Gunner 11-19-05 03:44 PM

The metaphor is larger than life dude.

He's not spose to be on the building, against it, HE'S SPOSE TO BE BIGGER! God.

Rawk James 11-19-05 04:56 PM

THE POSTER IS KILL THE COMPETITION. Nothing to do with larger then life.

But w/e dotn take the criticism, It would look more real if he was on a street setting but fuck it nobody can take criticism

Sick. 11-19-05 08:24 PM

dont like the black and white on his mouth or the black area on the right side
its not bad but i just dont really like it.. its kinda boring :bored:

Sean Gunner 11-19-05 09:51 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Rawk James
THE POSTER IS KILL THE COMPETITION. Nothing to do with larger then life.

But w/e dotn take the criticism, It would look more real if he was on a street setting but fuck it nobody can take criticism


I can take criticism, but all you did was say it sucked period. That's not criticism. Then you finally left some, but you kept saying something that contradicted the subliminal metaphor. He's larger than life, so he kills the competition. And change your 3rd sig, the over contrast is ugly.

Rawk James 11-19-05 10:41 PM

lmao good job insulting a 3+ month old sig that I didnt try on man.

And you deffinately need to do something to make that metaphor clear is what im saying, it does not work.

Quote:
Originally Posted by invictus
dont like the black and white on his mouth or the black area on the right side
its not bad but i just dont really like it.. its kinda boring

ksr 11-19-05 10:58 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Rawk James
lmao good job insulting a 3+ month old sig that I didnt try on man.

he sed the contrast was to high n u shud change it...
people round here really cant take criticism :rolleyes:

..:Murder:.. 11-20-05 02:22 AM

im not really likin this.....looks fucked up!

Rawk James 11-20-05 09:16 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Xplosive
he sed the contrast was to high n u shud change it...
people round here really cant take criticism :rolleyes:

No he was trying to take cheap shots stupid.

Sean Gunner 11-20-05 08:18 PM

No, I was saying change it cuz it's ugly. Just like this poster.


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