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"The West" Feat. Speats...Dope Collab...
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Word...just threw this together tonight. It's actually a pretty good collab...word, peep and we'll return favors. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214374 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=214296 |
listening...damn u dropping tracks like hell....lol
beat is pretty good..kinda got an old western feel to it... speats comes in... seems like your rushing a couple of your words...one part on your over dubs...its too loud..and makes a bad noise..or it could just be my computer.... the hiss on the hook is kinda bad...i cant really understand what your saying that much...id try to clear that up a lil... like i said in my other feed...kinda seems hesitant in the flow...but this one isnt as bad...its a lot more smooth...but u still gotta work on that..some of your overdubs are off....try to get them on...they can make the track that much better.... overall.....not a bad track....keep it up....and please rtf on mine and black magiks songs called Gotta Keep Ya Head Up thanks |
dopeee its my first time listenin lol, pretty good, now open
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LOL AT U USING THIS BEAT I USED...
Ok Checkin Speats u come in Lyrics are nice Emotion-Could Be Upped A Lil Delivery-Its Koo..... Presence-Is Good Seem To Be Confident Hook: Nice A Lil Loud I Think V2:Word Lyrics Are Nice Emotion-Is Good Delivery-Dope Presence-Good Just Lower Your Vocals A lIl Overall-8/10 Keep It Up :thumbup: Lol @ U Using The Beat Me N Inter Used Like 3 Days Ago Though Word Its A Dope Beat Nice Song |
Speats the beat's nyce dude ya verse and quality were nyce too...flow needs work but not the worst I've heard L.E. ya quality is booty, heard every motion of your tongue damn near lol...verse was aiight but your emotion didn't fit, should've been more laid back on this beat duke... i.e. you really shouldn't be wasting money on a VIP account, get a mic :) |
uppiinnnn......
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werrddd, im feelin this. this is a devize beat aint it, its pretty hot. speats you spit a gud verse here flow seemed to stay on, maybe a bit too loud at times, but overall a decent verse. LE, i was really likin' your verse, really creative wit ya rhymes, your voice kinda sounded like louis logic in this dunno y lol. decent track overall 8.5/10
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doppeee thanks uppin
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da break down first guy you need way more emotion sounds like you readin the shit just up you delivery and make it flow better kinda seems like it was hard for you to rap it chorus... hisss sux my ass l.e. good shit you need to work on delivery thelyrics where dope but the way they were put together just didnt stand out to me |
iight thanks man
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word shits madd loud, lol.
but word beats kidna coo, it do have a western spanish feel, which i like. i take it speats spit first actually first i heard from you... lyrically you pretty decent, you need to work on flow though theres a few times you fall off, you could easily fix those.... delivery aint bad, emotion isnt either...they could be upped a tad not too shabby though LE you pretty decent too your vocals is MADDDD loud though, hurt my ears dude, lmao. but uhh lyrically you pretty coo, i liked some of those lines a lot flow wise you avergae, dont see nuttin to set you aside from the pack but that aint a bad thing really.. emotion/delivery you real solid.. overall you pretty solid, id just work on flow a tad bit, try and make it a lil more creative i unno.. hook is ehh LE you got some weird ass effect on the lyrics that makes me not understand tha shit at all id take that off and it might be coo but work track is aight, yall both pretty decent. word hit me back yo |
¸thanks tizzy:)
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emotion needs to be upped... quality is ok..flow is off at some points but ok thru out other parts.
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AAAHAHAHHAHHHHHAHAHAHAHAHahahaahaahahahh.......... ahahahahahahh.......ahhhh....fuck.
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what the fuck^^?
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dont worry bout him thts jus the noise he makes wen his ass is getting tapped
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alrite ind of like the beat its pretty cool
speats emotion was cool fitted the track flow was rushed in a few parts but overall pretty good a few2 parts were pretty loud lyrics were cool my favorite song of urs by far chorus is ok a little bit too loud and i hear alot of hisses le i just listened to a dif track and ur quality was decent and then i listened to this lol : / idk better mixing prob its not that bad but its hard to listen to lol emotion was dope again but damn ur shit is loud lol re record this :/ overall cool track would like to hear le's shit re recorded buts its straight http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2546163 please rtf |
thanks willa,..
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aight i'm peepin now....
Production:This is a classic ass devize beat i was def. feelin the beat fortify right?:9/10 Flow:for speats ya flow has gotten better most def. you had decent change ups and what not but you could up that a lil but it was cool:6.5/10,Limited ya Flow was pretty good you rode the beat pretty well.....it sounded cool:7.3/10 Lyrics:Speats you had cool lyrics good rhyme scheme fit beat aight:7.5/10,Limited i liked the diaper line lol that was funny....real cool:8/10 Quality:this is what ya'll both need too up just go up and pick up a new mic and shit...and i know that ya'll both could save and get at least a dynamic mic from radio shack but its aight for the internet:6.5/10 Emotion:Speats you need too up this here thsi is ur weakness so you should up this a lil bit but it was aight:6.5/10,Limited ya emotion was alright you have got better wit it tho so yours was a lil bit better then speats on this:7.5/10 Pressesne:Neither one of you had that great of pressense on the track the intro and outro weren't turned up loud enough but it was alright...... OVerall:This song was ehh alright...nothing i'd download or put on my cd player but it was cool ya'll are starting too come up mad tho soo keep it up :6.5/10 Keep droppin um fams |
thanks alot man really appreciate that
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