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"Get HOE'D!!!" aka "why beg to get dissed?"
http://doom2.dmusic.com. top track.
A diss to one of many recent bitches who just love to hear me shit on em. Lucky for me, everyone else loves to hear it too! http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2541511 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2541522 |
I wish you'd die and go to hell.
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AAAAAHAHAHAHHAHA. So I take it you liked the disses? LMAO. This is too easy, lol. |
listening.......
damn u coming in with the nice multies on this....good flow...some nice punches... delivery is nice only complaint is its too short lol....... overall it was pretty solid....i liked the kinda fast paced flow....never really heard that that much from you..... atleast you can put a punch together...unlike Q lol.... not bad though.... |
"im just surrounded by ass, like Q's HIV"
*Dies* |
Lmao comin wit nice flow son delivery is good punches im feelin aswell def worth tha d/l like ike only complaint is that it was to short keep droppin =1=...
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^^thanks mang. def appreciate it. Oh BTW, I wrote 6 and recorded 5 tracks today alone so you'll definitely be hearing more hot molten shit splattering on MC's THIS WEEK. bwahahaaha...
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I like your adaption to the chorus, good energy. Flow was sick, multis were on point, and disses hit. My favorite lines were:
"10 years from now, you'll still be a has-been" "Best thing to do with the mic is turning it off, you sound like kermit the frog" "I'm surrounded by ass like Q's H.I.V." (that line alone kilt this track) Sick...What, this the third time you kilt Q on a track? lol. Good shit |
This wasn't that bad of a track, but you mumbled a lot of those faster parts. It was really hard to hear what the hell you were saying. You had the flow down, but you were mumbling it. The best thing to do is overexagerate the Gs....it helps split the words up....I don't know how else to explain it.....
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Chron, yeah, it's the third or fourth I think. Thanks for listening.
Enyg, ok, thnaks for the feedback. |
word..gully...will leave more feed later my niggar
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yeah, after hearing the quality on ya joint i definitely need to square my shyt away... flow was def on point... like da the speed ups... more and more kats on RV are going that direction.... hook?...*shakes my head*.... it was what it was... straight gut shot... wow
nice lil diss track |
I.G. word, thanks a ton fam. That hook's a haymaker, lol. I almost wish I put more effort in this, but most my tracks dedicated for the net or dudes that don't really matter like this guy, I won't put 100% into - it lures in more suckers! >: D
hahaa, but thanks again fam. |
lol...wait til ya hear my rap game shyt for Round 2..lol... niggaz ain't ready... (wish my quality was clearer though)...i'll holla
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hmmm...lets see where you're gonna go with this. shit, you almost make it sound like I wouldn't have listened to it otherwise. Clarity's in the mixing, and at the level we're at, everyting can get better. |
"what's wrong your verse or your mic?"
"best thing you do on a mic you turn it off, soundin like kermit like a frog" "look at this nigga wit this wack beat choices, old school rhymes, dont forget the wack beat voices..." "10 years from now, you'll still be a has-been" "wanna battle me cuz you can't get wit me" "I'm surrounded by ass like Q's H.I.V." BWhahaha Lmfao *hee hee* Lol. not bad.... hah now I REALLY can't go to sleep. |
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AHAHHAH yeah, word to the mis-quoted quotables, lol. Making this track was a blast, lol. |
dope drop for a diss track.........nice multis flow is nice.....delivery is there......the only thing i can say bout this is mentioned above that it's too short.....nice drop.....
pz ~1~ |
god damn this track was so good it made me feel like dissing some one lol my favorite line was the kermit the frog one LOL.... You did some true sonning on this shit man. Fire.
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Black Drag, good looks man. Def appreciate the feed haha.
Doc: lmao, word to that man, thanks a lot. Next time you see some bitch ass mofo man, tell that clown to set-up a battle and GET HOE'D!!!! |
voice is good...quality is good..
nice flow....good production....lyrics are good....like the flow switch ups adding more speed thru out.... nice hook... good overall track.... |
Good lookin out man, glad you liked it. Not too bad for a track written in about 15 mins huh?
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yup..would be pointless spenind anymore time on a track for the net.....and especially about a fag...
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^^lmao, pretty much summed it up. Speakin of up, UP!
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nice diss .... :thumbup: :thumbup: |
had to return to RV just to comment on this..lol..nah but really..pretty solid...that Kermit the frog line was nice and you had that fast paced flow that i like...i like the hook...it was pretty catchy even for a diss track which i liked...basically it was An average Dooms/Apexx piece...had those nice lyrics and flow...better than most....
overally - 8/10.. - Sense |
aight peepin now....
Production:Of course this beat is real bad....i'm feelin it...of course lil jon trick daddy:9/10 Flow:ya flow was tight all ya switch ups were pretty coo i'm feelin dat:8.5/10 Pressense:You rode the beat real good and all the way through it was good:8/10 Emotion:ya emotion was alright not your reg. but it wasn't bad....7.8/10 Lyrics:The hook was cool.....ya dissin was decent the kermit the frog line was good:7.5/10 Overall:this was a pretty hot song....and i enjoyed listenin too Q gettin hoed:8.8/10 Keep droppin these you gottum hot... ~1 |
sense, haha word man, thanks for the feed-bizzle. That hook was a must.
Past Tense, thanks champ. When it comes to holdin it down, you know how I do it. :D  |
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Done deal. |
alrighty quality is good
flow is on point like usual nice multis ur emotion is great punches alot of quotables no question lol the kermit the frog andhiv lines are like permanetly in my head lol props on thi nice trac wheres the other 3?? |
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thank you thank you. What other three? One's the mad Dog shit, this, the one with CWalk that I'm still waiting on, and this clown Precise or some bullshit. |
lol..i hhate this beat
great quality..nice flow..kermit the frog lol good emotion...lyircs is nice too man.. lol..overall good shit man flow is kinda like twista RTF plz http://community.rapverse.com/showt...668#post2545668 |
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Word thanks for the feedback, chief. |
yeh the beat i dont like that much but its koo,the multis straight,the flow is nice the fast pacei dont dig but its coo.everything is good quality is at best and nice drop man no joke thats real talk RTF on my
"Not A Place To Be"(ghost) ~1` |
^^Good lookin out fam. When a beat is a type that someone generally dosen't like the style of, and the lyrics are fast paced - a style you're not wild about either, and you STILL ended up liking the track, that's saying a lot imo. thanks again for the compliment man.
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