Past Tense vs B.Daniel
 

Battle Rules
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1:30-3:00
No Biting
No Cheating
No Crew Votes
No Hate Votes
etc.,etc.,etc.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 11-23-05 at 06:43 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

Past Tense has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-20-05 06:47 PM.

LISTEN TOO THE WHOLE THING INCLUDING AFTER THE BEAT FADES AND STOPS

www.soundclick.com/jroy

B.Daniel has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-05 11:56 AM.

we may finally do our battle now exams this week but i promise i will drop :)

aight man i got my drop down..so got head and drop whenever u got the time

finished writin recordin now............................

Aight Track Called "Fat Boy No Slim"(Battle Vs Past Tense)


www.soundclick.com/unf

Lyrics If You Need Them Are:


I See You In A Few Years And Picture Your Future
After Im Done Your "Past" Lookin "Tense"On Your Computer
Fat Boy Punk,You Look Like Mr.Blobby
An I Would Cross The Street,Cause You Look Like You'd Squash Me
Ya Careers Like Your User,Your Way In The Past
Wouldnt Be Suprised ,Use Old Personals Fast
Your Whack Dawg Quit With The Cristian Rap
Your So Dumb Even God Would Turn His Damn Back
This Dudes Damb Fat,Needs to Shrink His Cheeks
No Not Them On His Face But The Others They Reek
You Look Like Rikishi Only Difference Is Colour
Dont Talk Bout Women Cause Theres No Way You'd Pull Em'
Im Evil Dawg,Kinda Like Your Damb Mom's
Out Ya Ass Only Way U Droppin Them Bombs
I Rip Cats Up,Like A Balloon Ima Pop You
So Much Shit Like Ya Verse Cant Follow Through

Dont Turn Off Yet

See I Aint A Easy Win Punk..I Dont Even Need To Curse In A Damb Track To Beat You
Beat Your Fat Ass

I Jus Talkin To Make Up The Time Limit Haha Punk

Thas All Its Done Its Over...Wait I Got One More Thing For Your Fat Ass


I battle weak newbs, and I’m an arrogant jerk?
Guess My Impersonation Of Past Tense Worked!

Lol @That Voice THing In The End Of Yours Yo The Lyrics Aint like i Mean It So Dont Take Offence Good Battle Dude:tumbup:

Upp For Votes

This was feedback posted for B.Daniel
 

Listenen to J Roy...u C Walk?...LOL at harry potter before u hit purberty..flow is hot..pretty funny diss here...didnt know u were J Roy..the white black dude...first 55 seconds pretty good..lyrics are pretty nice..but missin a factor..so maybe comin later on..like the work magic beat...ITS TAKKIN TOO LONG..aiite comin...LOL at the UK accent...i think..prety nice..Lol at the harry potter shit...based on the diss id give u 8/10

now UNF

another white soundin black dude lol...came more gangsta..wieth the beat is hot..pretty short..verse is hot...flow didnt rlly fall off dawg...was hot..stayed on...rikishi line is crazy..was pretty funny dawg...lol at the hahah at the end i wonder who chose that ;)...the lyrics etc. were better here..more personal and direct punches..when J u kinda came wit harry potter post of the time..this was close id have to give it to UNF..8.5/10..but I cant vote cos im crew..soo...imma jus leave feed...u can say its D/R...watever but it aint why wud i take this long to analyse it?

Thx :) And For The Gun Sound N Ha Ha Idea.................

Lol@my Battle Being 1:31............................

lol good diss but clariys bad keep droppin


uppin for some more votes peeps..

Lol Thanks :) Uppppppppppppp.......................

Voted For: Past Tense

I would vote, but J Roy's battle track is missing from his soundclick.

Removed

I pressed vote on accident.......................................... ............. sorry.

Fuck...Why The Song Gone:(...............................

lol my stuff got messed up i put it on there again tho..dont drip

lol koo.............................................up pppppppppppp

This was feedback posted for B.Daniel
 

I can't vote on this because Past Tense is a fuckin lunatic in training and flipped on my ass for no purpose...However, I would suggest you Black Liste Apexx dawg cuz that's Past Tense's mentor, or so it appears. = D/R vote

Voted For: B.Daniel

well tihs was really one sided man.

Your lyrics and flow was by far better.
Jroy man you had good clarity and had good flow...fell off a bit but your lyrics didnt have much effect on ur opponent..your only punch was the harry potter one. others were just filling up time.

B.Daniel your verse was pretty good...you need to work on your clarity a bit more..your flow and lyrics was iight had punches through out ur verse taking this victory easy .

v/B.Daniel


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Thx.......Uppp..Oh I Dont Think Im In A Crew Anymore Past Cause


supersrapwoman (9:28:03 PM): OK
supersrapwoman (9:28:04 PM): LOL
Paranoid1106 (9:28:14 PM): I mean like
Paranoid1106 (9:28:15 PM): I won't fuck with him
supersrapwoman (9:28:17 PM): WAIT
supersrapwoman (9:28:21 PM): YOU KNOW WAHT
supersrapwoman (9:28:24 PM): JSUT ABTTLE HIM IF YOU WANT
supersrapwoman (9:28:30 PM): CAUSE HES NOT IN CS ANYMORE NOW
supersrapwoman (9:28:39 PM): AND U CAN BEAT HIM OBVIOUSLY

So Meh It Aint A Crew Vote

alright its watever


aight lets get some more votes poppin and mystic you gotta remember this isnt' a text battle so lyircs aren't a big play in it

Uppin This Ish Lets Get Some Votes Up In The John Llllllol

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This was feedback posted for B.Daniel
 

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.................................Fuck You Sleepers :cuss:

BLARRRRHHHHGGG.............Fuckers
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This was feedback posted for Past Tense
 

damn its sooo obvious....past tense won thie ;) lol i'm just playin i'm upipn for myself tho

Rofl @ Your Sig..................................


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Voted For: Past Tense

UNF
man like I couldn't listen to that whole song...you use to many filler punches. they just aint finished and like fi you didn't post your lrycis I wouldn't ahve unserstood what you were sayin. your voice isn't clear you rush your voice to much. your voice sounds to fake and wannabe soundin gangsta. be yourself on the mic man. learn how to finish punchlines.

Past Tense
not bad man, only thing you could have done was finish the rest of the beat you had like 40 secs almost left. then the closer came up. and lmfao @ the closer its funny...ron weisly or w/e hahaha....hilarious just make that verse longer and well your punchlines and shit was way ebtter more personals and it sounded like you actually dissed him.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=216818

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thx for the vote


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word up thanks for the vote i'mma hit that battle up right now..

~1

This was feedback posted for B.Daniel
 

pollz.............................................