invictus vs Tie-D
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-22-05 at 10:29 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.


Expired battle close - win

Tie-D has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-05 10:37 AM.

invictus has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-21-05 11:03 AM.

first text in like a year...... youll be my first victim
this 'lone soldier' couldnt win with his whole army with him
first mistake was thinking you could win... im just laughin
cuz when you get ya '3rd loss'.. youll be like what happend?!?!
this kid tryna say hes 'Tie-D'... must be retarded
...cuz i seen 'cleaner shit' come out my 'ass' when i 'farted'
its time to 'wrap this up'... cuz i dont need 'aids'
but you could use all the help you can get...
..... thats why ya gave ya self two days

- i aint battled text in almost a year
- lone soldier in his sig
- hes got 2 losses.. this will be his 3rd :)
- his names Tie-D (as in clean)
- aids (the deseace) and aids (people that help)
- he set it up with 1 day to check and 1 to drop

Invictus steps up, the poet of mighty C.S
Mighty? About as much as American idol rejects
CS used to have power and respect from peeps
Now wat do I see, they are lead by a ….she
Willa, no offence but the laughs start here
Did u let this guy in? situation must be severe
Is CS that desperate for members, they let in this gimp?
I’ve read his work, GUILTY of CHRYME’s to ink!
I said 6 to 10 lines, so il use it all up
I would say now lay down but hes so dumb he’ll fall up!

my opinion is you've got a really good verse there. Full of good punches and some nice metaphors.

If you take the win i know the one thing i can do is use more metaphors.

thanks for the battle bro. Once again good luck

and just so you know you made a huuuge mistake.... :nono:

IM NOT ATTICUS NOR AM I IN CS

lol sorry just thought you should know..

i never thought you were..??

why would you think that?

This was feedback posted for invictus
 

Lmao @ all the explanations..

Dude, we have more intellegence than you think..

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well i aint done text in a while thought id explain it thourougly lol
and i assumed youd think i was atty cuz you dissed crhyme sindicte but im not in CS.... im in Living Legends

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This was feedback posted for invictus
 

pollz fam, you should have this easily...good looks

This was feedback posted for invictus
 

I am just checking out the polls here.

..yeup, just the polls.

This was feedback posted for invictus
 

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if one more person checks polls... im gonna have to give them an angry face!! lol

Voted For: Tie-D

first text in like a year...... youll be my first victim
this 'lone soldier' couldnt win with his whole army with him
first mistake was thinking you could win... im just laughin
cuz when you get ya '3rd loss'.. youll be like what happend?!?!
this kid tryna say hes 'Tie-D'... must be retarded
...cuz i seen 'cleaner shit' come out my 'ass' when i 'farted'
its time to 'wrap this up'... cuz i dont need 'aids'
but you could use all the help you can get...
..... thats why ya gave ya self two days

straight verse rhymes was cool you had a personal in there about lone soldier cool punches i felt you really aint hit like i mean noting really stood out or made me say wow but flow good



Invictus steps up, the poet of mighty C.S
Mighty? About as much as American idol rejects
CS used to have power and respect from peeps
Now wat do I see, they are lead by a ….she
Willa, no offence but the laughs start here
Did u let this guy in? situation must be severe
Is CS that desperate for members, they let in this gimp?
I’ve read his work, GUILTY of CHRYME’s to ink!
I said 6 to 10 lines, so il use it all up
I would say now lay down but hes so dumb he’ll fall up!

i think that you started alot better and that was the best line in this battle ya 1st bar so that help you had a person in there you talk about hes crew and stuff that was aight the ending was kinda funny not a bad verse and i think he had the better verse

so my vote is for tie-d

This was feedback posted for invictus
 

good battle props lol yall dropped fast cool battle

Voted For: invictus

invictus - You had a good flow, you had ok wordplay, some iight punches.

Best Line - this kid tryna say hes 'Tie-D'... must be retarded
...cuz i seen 'cleaner shit' come out my 'ass' when i 'farted'

Worst Line - NONE

Tie-D - You had played one lines, it flowed well thats about it.

Best Line - NONE

Worst Line - I said 6 to 10 lines, so il use it all up
I would say now lay down but hes so dumb he’ll fall up!

OVERALL - This was a one sided battle wit Inv takin' the win. Tie-D you just came weak. You should have came with harder punches and wordplay.

Vote - invictus

RTF in SIG!

uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for invictus
 

pollzs.................................. but tie-d need to do a background check brfore he talks...

bumpin this ..................................................

Voted For: invictus

lmfao at some of the lines in this battle, made me laught like this one:
first text in like a year...... youll be my first victim
this 'lone soldier' couldnt win with his whole army with him

haha that was really good, this battle was so close but i had to go with Sick. for better punchs and funnyer lol, Tie-D's struture was better tho, props to that, and some of your lines was dope, but my vote goes to Sick.

peace

Voted For: invictus

first text in like a year...... youll be my first victim
this 'lone soldier' couldnt win with his whole army with him
...Didn't see why you explained the 1st line;2nd line was an ok punch.
first mistake was thinking you could win... im just laughin
cuz when you get ya '3rd loss'.. youll be like what happend?!?!
...good
this kid tryna say hes 'Tie-D'... must be retarded
...cuz i seen 'cleaner shit' come out my 'ass' when i 'farted'
...Really played
its time to 'wrap this up'... cuz i dont need 'aids'
but you could use all the help you can get...
..... thats why ya gave ya self two days
....Decent

Invictus steps up, the poet of mighty C.S
Mighty? About as much as American idol rejects
...Played
CS used to have power and respect from peeps
Now wat do I see, they are lead by a ….she
...Umm,so what?;Doesn't diss,nothing's wrong with them being lead by a girl.
Willa, no offence but the laughs start here
Did u let this guy in? situation must be severe
....decent
Is CS that desperate for members, they let in this gimp?
I’ve read his work, GUILTY of CHRYME’s to ink!
....Good
I said 6 to 10 lines, so il use it all up
I would say now lay down but hes so dumb he’ll fall up!
....Weak

Well,pretty decent battle here..
But I think Sick./Invictus got it..
Tie-d came a little played,and pointless at times.Like,the american idol line,that's played...and the Cs/lead by a she line..doesn't diss.I personally find nothing wrong with them being lead by a girl..and even you yourself said no offence to willa..so,yea..
Invictus..next time,don't explain your lines so much.

Vote-Invictus/Sick.

Drop an honest vote in the link below.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=213623

iight thanks man.. idk why i explained so much either lol

hey tie d can i get this closeed or what?.......