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GKillaz05 vs Trey MethodZ
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Goodluck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 11-22-05 at 01:16 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
Trey MethodZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-22-05 12:58 PM.
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GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-22-05 01:06 PM.
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Ight check it....quick murda
Im infect yah chest cavitie Wit Battered Frees X-ing Out ya anatomy So ima Seize the fabric of yah roots …….And Play Capture The Flag Wit ya Family Ya Organs Split Open When i Carve An Slice, Forget Sharin Beef i Hog da Mic Cuz Trey Make Sure Ya Corpse Evaporate........Immediatly like Carbon Ice This fag bought a ford whip n’ now he's claimin that he's focused This plastic Trey is spittin’ bogus Listen stop payin yah rent ....................then maybe u'll get Noticed Mind of a lord stabbin wit a knife n a sword cuz all his Rhymes are a bore he’s more of a ‘dead weight(wait)’ ............................than Lines For The Morgue GKillaz just entered doom.....When ill contortion Strays floor ya brains, so watch me murder this act like abortioned plays |
Got Kicked outta class b-4 I could finish.
It aint a shocker, Trey MethodZ steals rhymes, I got my blocker.... He just sits outside my window wit a pen n pad, like a stocker... Tryna steal my balls like a soccer game, but the kid cant kick it... Trey's No Show like a ripped ticket, gettin no where like a cricket... Your name I know why you picked it, rhymes get served like a trey... The only method you know is to die slow like a flower bouquet... |
I said 10Lines, not 13... UPPIN..
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Overall: some will mos/def disagree with me on this one..IMO...GKillaz..edged it and took the narrow win....... Trey MethodZ..after this line - "Listen stop payin yah rent" ...u lost me......G ur verse was shorter...sort of rushed but had better flow n punches...well...Method slightly edged it... ------------------ Best Lines Method: Ya Organs Split Open When i Carve An Slice, Forget Sharin Beef i Hog da Mic Cuz Trey Make Sure Ya Corpse Evaporate........Immediatly like Carbon Ice GKillaz: It aint a shocker, Trey MethodZ steals rhymes, I got my blocker.... He just sits outside my window wit a pen n pad, like a stocker... ------------------- RTV - Honestly One Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^^lmao.....that was a wack vote upppppiiinnnnnnn....an killaz i didnt go over the limit that the way my structure is.....
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Uppin................................ Vote!
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UPPIN............lets hope he dont DQ all my votes.
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Voted For: Trey MethodZ
trey methodz got this easily, by miles. his verse was just so much more creative, and the wordplay he used was alot more advanced. Gkillaz, i can see what you were doin and you had 1 or 2 gud attempts at throwin punches, but they just weren't hittin as hard as TM's. best bars:- TM: Ya Organs Split Open When i Carve An Slice, Forget Sharin Beef i Hog da Mic Cuz Trey Make Sure Ya Corpse Evaporate........Immediatly like Carbon Ice GKillaz: Your name I know why you picked it, rhymes get served like a trey... The only method you know is to die slow like a flower bouquet... V/trey |
This was feedback posted for GKillaz05
checkin' pollz...............
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Voted For: Trey MethodZ
Ok,Trey methodz got this battle. The biggest factor in this battle was the line difference. Gkillaz did,however,have some unoriginal shit.. For example Your name I know why you picked it, rhymes get served like a trey... ^Quite posssibly,the most unoriginal nameplay you could use.. As for trey,my only advice would be to shorten your lines up,their a' little too long..but,you win this battle. Vote-Trey Methodz |
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Just so the vote doesn't get Dq'd,I'll explain more :thumbup: It aint a shocker, Trey MethodZ steals rhymes, I got my blocker.... He just sits outside my window wit a pen n pad, like a stocker... ..wtf do you mean by blocker?,and stocker?I think you mean stalker,which doesn't rhyme with blocker. Tryna steal my balls like a soccer game, but the kid cant kick it... Trey's No Show like a ripped ticket, gettin no where like a cricket... ..The steal balls,soccer wordplay was ok,tho a little gay..but the rest of the line was weak. Your name I know why you picked it, rhymes get served like a trey... The only method you know is to die slow like a flower bouquet... ..Like I said,the 1st line is as unoriginal as it gets,and punch was ok. Im infect yah chest cavitie Wit Battered Frees X-ing Out ya anatomy So ima Seize the fabric of yah roots …….And Play Capture The Flag Wit ya Family ...well,a little too technical,but ok.. Ya Organs Split Open When i Carve An Slice, Forget Sharin Beef i Hog da Mic Cuz Trey Make Sure Ya Corpse Evaporate........Immediatly like Carbon Ice ...nice rhyme,ok punch, This fag bought a ford whip n’ now he's claimin that he's focused This plastic Trey is spittin’ bogus Listen stop payin yah rent ....................then maybe u'll get Noticed ..umm,I don't get it dun. Mind of a lord stabbin wit a knife n a sword cuz all his Rhymes are a bore he’s more of a ‘dead weight(wait)’ ............................than Lines For The Morgue ...sorta played. GKillaz just entered doom.....When ill contortion Strays floor ya brains, so watch me murder this act like abortioned plays ...ok... so,yea...proper explamation :) |
Voted For: Trey MethodZ
v/Trey Thought he came harder and had wittier punches. Gkillaz had some good punches but i didn't think they matched up to the standard of trey's. Best punch trey- Mind of a lord stabbin wit a knife n a sword cuz all his Rhymes are a bore he’s more of a ‘dead weight(wait)’ ............................than Lines For The Morgue Best line gkillaz - Tryna steal my balls like a soccer game, but the kid cant kick it... Trey's No Show like a ripped ticket, gettin no where like a cricket... So i thought that trey just came harder when it came down to it. But good battle by both, props. |
Voted For: Trey MethodZ
I vote for the dude who managed to hit the 10 lines rule that was set. So, the dude who didn't follow the rules....LOSES. |
Voted For: Trey MethodZ
Trey Methodz- your verse was pretty good n all...punches were good i thought...had maybe a little weak spots ...but really they were aight...wordplay could have been better but was good...had little personals...structure was a little bad...kinda hard to read...but structures dont win battles punches do...so overall you got this with better punches... GKillaz05- verse was aight but short...had few personals n all...but i see you had a little thing that you got kicked outta class n all..that sucks...but you came weak i thought pretty much...structure was good..but overall i thought this was a one sided battle maybe...because methodz came with actually something...punches were weak...n all... |
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