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Gangsta Kim vs NotoriousM
Battle Rules:
6 - 8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 11-29-05 at 02:17 PM Must drop verse in 7200 minutes after check in. |
NotoriousM has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-05 01:20 PM.
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Gangsta Kim has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-05 01:52 PM.
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yo i may not be able to post my rapin time i dont have the internet eccept in class and i got kicked out ill try thou .......
holla back..........gk |
The only "NotoriousM" I C B da mirror glancin back at me
Its like I got u pussy whipped the way u givin me da win u tried to push me tripped, raps fell right into da trashbin With justa couple of digits left i'll finish u off NotoriousM u make me sick, go on thinkin u not soft Its like u got da diarehia, all your raps there shit..... Listenin to your rhymes its like your an out-wit |
is this where i post my verse? This is my first time so i dont know.............
holla back . GK |
I mad a mistake .............
The only "NotoriousM" I C B da mirror glancin back at me........... that is to be two lines not one ....srry messed up in the post |
You say you Gangsta, You ain;t got nothin on me, I'ma Drop you...
Your a lil' Bitch, a pussy, GKillaz shoulda Shot you... I got this battle on lock to, you got no skillZ, really pitiful... You shoulda neva signed up fo' this site B, your lyrics are dispicable... But theres one thing thats admittable, You'll neva last in this rap game... I'll be like Eminem, your Benzino, It's gon' turn out the same... But theres only one to blame, and thats your dumb bitch mom, for havin' you... Shoulda slapped her when you came out, shoulda known no one could fathom you... |
Voted For: Gangsta Kim
Gangsta Kim: The only "NotoriousM" I C B da mirror glancin back at me 2/10 - Not Good. Its like I got u pussy whipped the way u givin me da win u tried to push me tripped, raps fell right into da trashbin 4/10 - ok punch. With justa couple of digits left i'll finish u off NotoriousM u make me sick, go on thinkin u not soft 3/10 - MEH. Its like u got da diarehia, all your raps there shit..... Listenin to your rhymes its like your an out-wit 2/10 - Dont get it 11/40 Its was ok for your first battle, work on your wordplay and punchlines. NotoriousM: You say you Gangsta, You ain;t got nothin on me, I'ma Drop you... Your a lil' Bitch, a pussy, GKillaz shoulda Shot you... 2/10 - Why? I got this battle on lock to, you got no skillZ, really pitiful... You shoulda neva signed up fo' this site B, your lyrics are dispicable... 2/10 - No Punch. But theres one thing thats admittable, You'll neva last in this rap game... I'll be like Eminem, your Benzino, It's gon' turn out the same... 4/10 - Good Punch. But theres only one to blame, and thats your dumb bitch mom, for havin' you... Shoulda slapped her when you came out, shoulda known no one could fathom you... 1/10 - HuH? 9/40 You had one good line, the rest was BLAH. You also need to work on punches and wordplay. Vote - Gangsta Kim |
yo t-dot ur a fucken punk...get them fucken hate votes outta here....u know i got this
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This was feedback posted for Gangsta Kim
Good Battle - Im Not Voting!
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get over your self man let ppl post how they wanna vote for who they wanna its not hate ..... you just mad cuz u ant got a vote yet .. Proude its my first battle, it sux but its better then yours. lol
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Voted For: NotoriousM
You say you Gangsta, You ain;t got nothin on me, I'ma Drop you... Your a lil' Bitch, a pussy, GKillaz shoulda Shot you... ...pretty weak;Shouldn't have brought up Gkillaz I got this battle on lock to, you got no skillZ, really pitiful... You shoulda neva signed up fo' this site B, your lyrics are dispicable... ...Ok But theres one thing thats admittable, You'll neva last in this rap game... I'll be like Eminem, your Benzino, It's gon' turn out the same... ...Uhh,1st line was ok,2nd was a little cheesy But theres only one to blame, and thats your dumb bitch mom, for havin' you... Shoulda slapped her when you came out, shoulda known no one could fathom you... ...decent The only "NotoriousM" I C B da mirror glancin back at me ^weak,pointless. Its like I got u pussy whipped the way u givin me da win u tried to push me tripped, raps fell right into da trashbin ...wtf,even worse. With justa couple of digits left i'll finish u off NotoriousM u make me sick, go on thinkin u not soft ...weak,weak,weak,weak!! Its like u got da diarehia, all your raps there shit..... Listenin to your rhymes its like your an out-wit ..WTF IS THIS!?!,WEAK! Well,easy call here.. Gangsta Kim,you bassically had nothing.Not one good line in that verse.Like,your last bar,an out-wit?WTF is that?Ur concept for a punch,is that he's an out-wit? Weak verse.. NotoriousM came with some decent lines,so I'll give him the win. Vote-NotoriousM Drop an honest vote in the link below http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212726 |
Voted For: NotoriousM
Break Down-This Battle Was Weak From Both Sides.....Especially Kim's Side. The Punches Were Weak And The Personals Were Barely Even Noticable. The Structure Was Ok But The Flow Fell Off On Both Verses. Overall Notorious M Came Harder Tham Kim. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Wtf Happend To No Crew Votes That Ant Fair Man > That Vote Should Be Deteated.............
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u dumb shit...i aint even in a crew...what the hell r u on?..
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Uppin............................................. ............
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Voted For: NotoriousM
Flow – Notorious M, the structure was the same for both competitors but Notorious M flowed much better Punches – Notorious M, nobody really had a punch lines, but I felt that Notorious M’s third and fourth line was nice because it flowed perfectly Personals – tied, No hate but both had extremely poor personals…probably because this was a short battle. I suggest that both have more personals albeit they are tough to have when you battle over the net Multies – Notorious M, on the sheer fact that he had A multie whereas Gangsta Kim really didn’t. Again, the multie was your third and fourth line which was the only bar I really liked in this battle Vocab – I am not a believer in vocabulary but cogency and clarity are vital. Note for Notorious M: the word admittable doesn’t exist. So for making a minor mistake like this, I have to give this to Gangsta Kim Originality – no real originality in both verses Winner: Notorious M Keep working hard AND good luck. No hate. Please return the favor with an honest vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=217849 |
Voted For: Gangsta Kim
Kim won this cus her punches were better, even thow notorious had mo hers came down harder, weak battle from both of you, notorious btw your punch lines were overused and the rest were basic, both were basic. |
This was feedback posted for Gangsta Kim
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yo mike get ur hatein ass outta he with that shit...everybody knows i got this...so fuck off u pussy punk bitch
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stop hating every time somone votes for me seems like u jelous u diss enyone who votes for me if anyone should be bitchin its me .u got ur crew to vote ,,,,BITCH..... take it like a man and stop bitchin
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Voted For: NotoriousM
Hes gets this because hes bars actually rhymed, I don't really need to explain anymore. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Kim u stupid retard, i aint even in his crew, im not in anycrew otherwise it wood be rocked in my sig, and im bitchin' cuz everyone knows i had this battle, its just bullshit
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This was feedback posted for Gangsta Kim
Weak battle,Gangsta Kim, elevate alot...Notorius,elevate but you dont need as much elevation as Kim...Notorius won this easily...word...1
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^^Yo thats bullshit,Kims shit was weak and didnt even rhyme, her verse was pathetic, notorius killed her...Notorius you should have that vote DQ'ed cuz thatz fuckin bullshit...Can you say DICKRIDIN!!...word...1 |
Obviosly not everyone knows you won this battle so ha............ get over it bitch ....... and but the way u cant gat a vote DQ'ed just because u think u should win dumb ass no matter how much a battle sux u cant just dq votes because u think u better BITCH
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what the fuck do u think u have been doing, u got Ill Techniques ote DQ'd becuz apparently im in his crew, even tho im not, and some wuth the other dudes,next time and admin reads this i want mike macs vote deleted becuz it didnt explain anything more then OneStepBeyond's vote
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Voted For: Gangsta Kim
notorious m lost because he's a queer, plus his punches, aren't punches, which is a big thing, OH, and, saying someone else shoulda shot you, isn't a punch v/gangsta kim |
This was feedback posted for NotoriousM
He wins for rhyming, GK you was shit here. .
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I want Mike macs vote and sabres vote deleted...not enuff to go on for a vote, inadequate feedback, plus sabre is just hatin' cuz i voted for GKillaz in their battle
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Voted For: NotoriousM
Vote - Notorious M Flow was even, but Notorious took everything else...his punches were harder, there were no personals or wordplay, and he took multis....both of yall need to throw some harder punches though. Good battle. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Nicce battle record Antic....................... Keep it up man................
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yo admins, u get that vote delete for inadequate feedback, maybe u should take a look at the 2 out of 3 otes the Gangsta Kim has, open your fucken eyes assholes
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Voted For: NotoriousM
u won with just that last punch u both wer equal in everything else rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=219800 |
Voted For: NotoriousM
hmmm both of these verse were weak... but at least you both threw punches more than just wasting bars bragging about yourselves... (for teh most part anyway)... Opener: NotoriousM Closer: NotoriousM Punches: NotoriousM was just more harsh Personals: ehhh nothing to speak of Structure: Niether Creativity: None Multis: NotoriousM Vote: NotoriousM |
Voted For: NotoriousM
a yo way harder punches an betta flow overall vote ///notorious |
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