rexless vs Technique
 

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Check in by: 11-26-05 at 04:04 PM

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rexless has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-05 10:51 AM.

let me know if you gonna get BRAVE
so i can use the BAT to knock ya BALL-CAP off ya WAVES 1
nigga like me dont waste time we get straight to the point
with the mac and straight smoke ya like a joint 2
keep talking out ya grill, and get ya jaw wire and fitted
plus all ya writtens is ass like i whip my shit with it 3
tech dropped a lot, cuz you’re ugly and has bad manners
If You’re Puerto Rican, then moving there is your only chance to w’rap bananas 4
I’m not a God but you still shouldn’t confront me
cuz I could smoke a harder cat n’ just eat you for munchies 5
I peeped ya previous pieces, they’re a joke, it’s absurd
another newb at RV provin’ that I’m always smokin’ herbs 6
and about your ego trip, sorry the plane has crashed
with text so primitive it’s like you tryin’ to change the past 7
you’s a lame ass, my flames change your frame to ash
so let me clear things up like removin’ stains from glass 8
thats 16 lines i could of kept on going!!

hints:
hes downw ith GOD of WAR
i drop feed back on hes open mic drop

Technique has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-26-05 12:47 PM.

this dumbass is past i'll leave ya strung
your life is pathetic u might aswell be hung
look at your avy i see your a big fan of xmen
the dumbest thing about u is that u call urself rexless
nobody takes you serious cuz your straight wack
u ain't into rapping your more into music like take that
you sent me a pm and didn't even know how to battle
I'm owning you bitch even though it isn't much of a hassle
You get lyrically scared my verses leave you for dead
your not dissing nobody cuz all u are is a stupid dick head
this guy better run cuz i know that he's scared
but bitch ur just embaressing yaself cuz u wern't prepaired
your fucking wackson and you lack attraction
I just run over ur punchlines and watch em get smacked son
your like michel jackson you have a softer voice though
im sorry to beat you but it was your damn choice hoe

This was feedback posted for rexless
 

I Liek Rexless style all he gotta do is post them correctly


I bet Rexless wins

thanks for the props but why do it gotta be 50 charcters inorder to post well uppin for votes

Voted For: rexless

rexless - First RapBattle on this site, you did very well... good wordplay, flowed well and good punches.

Best Line - you’s a lame ass, my flames change your frame to ash
so let me clear things up like removin’ stains from glass

Worst Line - nigga like me dont waste time we get straight to the point
with the mac and straight smoke ya like a joint 2

Technique - You had a good flow, some played punches, no wordplay.

Best Line - your fucking wackson and you lack attraction
I just run over ur punchlines and watch em get smacked son

Worst Line - You get lyrically scared my verses leave you for dead
your not dissing nobody cuz all u are is a stupid dick head

OVERALL - This was a close battle, I give probs to Rex on his first battle, he had a good flow, and his punches were hitten hard. Even had some wordplay in there. Tec you didnt really have any wordplay, and your punches wernt all that great.

Vote - rexless

thanks for the vote
upp'in for more people to see this

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Voted For: Technique

both verses are good but in different ways. rexless' has got a lot more metaphors and wordplay -a lot more but it doesnt mean all the punches are hitting as hard and you need to concentrate on that or your battle verses will get weaker. Try a few more obvious personals or something. Your verse was good tho, but wouldnt even touch a better man. It almost seemed like you were just throwing wild punches around and putting in metaphors just for the sake of it and it didnt really fit too well.

Tech your verse was good, nice punches at times but it wasnt evolved enough. No metaphors or wordplays that i saw but most of the punches were on target. Like i said tho this was very close in different ways. You need to use some more clever lines in that tech or you'll get beat by a anyone more elevated

stay up both ya'll and if any of you wanna battle hit me up on a PM or sommet

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Voted For: Technique

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Gods Of War! Mother Fucka'z

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stop being lazy plez and drop a vote..............
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why isnt there anybody voting? i will return the favor just leave a link one!

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Voted For: rexless

Vote - Rexless

here's why...in categories, kidz...

Both had flow, I didn't prefer one over the other...each had slightly different rhyme schemes...so flow was a tie...Rexless took punches, though they weren't very hard...both Rexless and Technique had no metaz with very few similies and no personals, and, consequently, both had some lack luster punches...There was no attempt at wordplay from either dude...These are things that enhance your bars and compliment punches...just somethin' to think about...Rexless had more creative punches, so he took that. Multis were about even, but Rexless had some more complex multis from about his 4th bar on....so Rexless took multis.

So, Rexless had some stronger punches, and got a lil' more complex wit his multis, so he was able to edge past technique.

Vote - Rexless

Voted For: Technique

MAN U SHYT WAS HOT WAY HARDER PUNCHES AND BETTA PERSONALZ IGHT MY VOTE//TECHNIQUE

Voted For: rexless

hmmm this was closer than I thought it would be... Both need to work on their structure... Rexless had the better flow, and a few aight multis... Overall I just felt Rex's punches a lil bit more... but the multis is what really gave em the edge imo....

Opener: Rex
Closer: Tech
Punches: Rex
Personals: Tech
Multis: Rex
Structure: Tech
Enjoyment: Rex

Vote: Rex

upp'in for more votes.............................

can we get some more votes in here plez????????????

Voted For: rexless

rexless just had the better punchlines, better wording of his shit, yo technique, qhy you got so many losses homie......but yea, he had a better verse and just didn't come as played but you still need to work on some things

Voted For: rexless

technique had some pretty whack lines yet rexless had some ill lines, imma give this to rexless