RapVerse.com Community

RapVerse.com Community (http://community.rapverse.com/index.php)
-   Front Lines Battles (http://community.rapverse.com/forumdisplay.php?f=63)
-   -   one mic vs Natural killa (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=215673)

noname 11-27-05 05:46 PM

one mic vs Natural killa
 
Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No d/r

3-0 KO

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 11-27-05 at 06:16 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.

System 11-27-05 06:02 PM

Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-05 06:02 PM.

noname 11-27-05 06:02 PM

You gonna check in or what?
,

System 11-27-05 06:12 PM

one mic has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-27-05 06:12 PM.

noname 11-27-05 06:13 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by one mic
gud effort legend, that wasnt that bad of a punch. its gonna be hard to beat NK though, cuz hes like a vet lol


All I see is threats,when readin a one mic verse,it's clear he's a mess
'n as me dissing?,..why bother,when the oppenent considers me a vet
Don't want to make him upset,and own him,cuz he'd make a lousy son
Got shades of 9/11 in his sig,but it fits..cuz his rhymes are 2001
Strenght you got,is none,so why use a fist to have u cracked up and sore?
Cuz all I need is one mic to beat you up and fracture ur jaw
Why bother to go anymore..cuz this dude's punches ain't felt
One Mic,One love..?..yea,cuz the one person loving u......is urself


his user title is one mic,one love.

J.D 11-27-05 06:32 PM

“Fuck the crews...I run by myself”, woah! your wack, but confident
‘cause when I say you rhyme like my grandma, for you that’s a compliment
Im bombin this, RV is an intellectual site, but you’re the only dumb one
“Trinidad”?? haha, this guy don’t even rep the place he come from!
Claim you already won your battles, but you only winnin one, your so arrogant
Whilst my shits gold, like the star wars trilogy boxset packaging
“You comin’ to kill us all”? well, maybe a lot of people but not me!
You try to be nice but you spin “outta control” like mobb deep

Mike Macs 11-27-05 10:35 PM

Voted For: Natural killa

Close battle but I liked nks punches mo but I'd have to say you guys tied in everything else, the 2001 thing was tight also lol...

noname 11-27-05 10:40 PM

^that's unexplained dawg..........................

J.D 11-28-05 12:48 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mike Macs
Voted For: Natural killa

Close battle but I liked nks punches mo but I'd have to say you guys tied in everything else, the 2001 thing was tight also lol...

yer man, that is unexplained

noname 11-28-05 02:03 PM

yup..uppin for explained votes now................

J.D 11-29-05 03:29 PM

................................uppin............. .....................

J.D 11-30-05 11:41 AM

.................................................. ...

Cash Complex 12-01-05 05:58 PM

Voted For: Natural killa

Don't want to make him upset,and own him,cuz he'd make a lousy son
Got shades of 9/11 in his sig,but it fits..cuz his rhymes are 2001
THIS GUY ONE BECAUSE HE HAD MORE MULTIE AND HIS FLOW WAS MORE CONSISTANT, BUT I DID LIKE ONE MIC'S OPENER

noname 12-01-05 07:04 PM

c'mon man,that's another one unexplained..........

J.D 12-02-05 02:00 PM

yerr, lets get sum explained votes on this......................

J.D 12-04-05 05:50 AM

................................uppin............. ...........

SlicKnife 12-04-05 04:40 PM

Voted For: Natural killa

Ok

Natural Killa

All I see is threats,when readin a one mic verse,it's clear he's a mess
'n as me dissing?,..why bother,when the oppenent considers me a vet
- Nice opener...straight to him
Don't want to make him upset,and own him,cuz he'd make a lousy son
Got shades of 9/11 in his sig,but it fits..cuz his rhymes are 2001
- Ok, fairly good
Strenght you got,is none,so why use a fist to have u cracked up and sore?
Cuz all I need is one mic to beat you up and fracture ur jaw
- This did not connect really
Why bother to go anymore..cuz this dude's punches ain't felt
One Mic,One love..?..yea,cuz the one person loving u......is urself
- No

Rhyming was fine, flow was for the most part good - some decent lines there...good opener


one mic

“Fuck the crews...I run by myself”, woah! your wack, but confident
‘cause when I say you rhyme like my grandma, for you that’s a compliment
- Good first line, but didn't like the second line
Im bombin this, RV is an intellectual site, but you’re the only dumb one
“Trinidad”?? haha, this guy don’t even rep the place he come from!
- Decent personal
Claim you already won your battles, but you only winnin one, your so arrogant
Whilst my shits gold, like the star wars trilogy boxset packaging
- No....plus you shouldn't be praising yourself in the second line of a bar, especially in an 8-line battle
“You comin’ to kill us all”? well, maybe a lot of people but not me!
You try to be nice but you spin “outta control” like mobb deep
- Not really workin but ok

This was a close battle, a short battle so even harder to judge who the winner is....both had a nice flow, good rhyming too....but I think Natural Killa just took this

Stay Up both

SlicKnife 12-04-05 04:41 PM

Forgot to put the link for my battle down:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...138#post2563138

noname 12-04-05 04:49 PM

Ite..thx for the vote...I'll hit ya' battle up now.

J.D 12-05-05 11:04 AM

uppin.............................................

Poetics 12-07-05 11:44 AM

Voted For: Natural killa

Overall:
NK...had better structure...flow..punches... opener..and personals..one mic,,,i gotta say had the best last two(closing) lines...but I gave this to NK

-------------------

NK Best Lines:
Don't want to make him upset,and own him,cuz he'd make a lousy son
Got shades of 9/11 in his sig,but it fits..cuz his rhymes are 2001

----------------------------------

One Mic Best Lines:
You comin’ to kill us all”? well, maybe a lot of people but not me!
You try to be nice but you spin “outta control” like mobb deep

-----------------------------------------

Poetics 12-07-05 11:48 AM

oooh ya..drop a vote y'all...........

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=214112

J.D 12-07-05 06:14 PM

.................................................. .......

Stanza. 12-07-05 07:27 PM

Voted For: Natural killa

NK
All I see is threats,when readin a one mic verse,it's clear he's a mess
'n as me dissing?,..why bother,when the oppenent considers me a vet
....Weak...
Don't want to make him upset,and own him,cuz he'd make a lousy son
Got shades of 9/11 in his sig,but it fits..cuz his rhymes are 2001
.....aii..
Strenght you got,is none,so why use a fist to have u cracked up and sore?
Cuz all I need is one mic to beat you up and fracture ur jaw
......Weak.....
Why bother to go anymore..cuz this dude's punches ain't felt
One Mic,One love..?..yea,cuz the one person loving u......is urself
.....Better But Still Weak....

Hey Your Verse was pretty elementary comin from you anyway it was aii nuttin spectacular couldve been setup way better But you did ok

One mic
Fuck the crews...I run by myself”, woah! your wack, but confident
‘cause when I say you rhyme like my grandma, for you that’s a compliment
.....Weak....
Im bombin this, RV is an intellectual site, but you’re the only dumb one
“Trinidad”?? haha, this guy don’t even rep the place he come from!
.....Played personal on him dog...
Claim you already won your battles, but you only winnin one, your so arrogant
Whilst my shits gold, like the star wars trilogy boxset packaging
......bad rhyming and weakk.........
“You comin’ to kill us all”? well, maybe a lot of people but not me!
You try to be nice but you spin “outta control” like mobb deep
.............Better yet still weak....

overall I think That you did ok wasnt nuttin good you couldve focised more on punchez on NK than general punchez toward the end get what im sayin?.......anyway man I dont think that you toke this battle sorry nuttin personal just voting round

Please RTf in the battle link in my sig in 24 hrs or less or this vote will be removed.....thanxed


All times are GMT -4. The time now is 05:43 PM.