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Paranoid vs B.Daniel
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 12-01-05 at 11:46 AM Must drop verse in 9000 minutes after check in. |
B.Daniel has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-05 11:47 AM.
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www.soundclick.com/unf
Lyrics: Welcome To The Show,Crime Sindicate Boiiiiiii,Yeah,Yall Know Who i Be Paranoid Bitch,Stress Ya Pen To Hold It Steady, I Murk You In A Instant So Dont Say Your Ready Kid Thinks Hes Better,I Got Him Laid Out N Bitching Sure You Elevated.....Now Your In The Sitting Position Your Whack Dawg,Like Jesus Dissin God,Repent Plus Your More Played Out Than 15 50 Cents Your Here For An Instant,Then Your Gone With Grief Cause Ima Rest Your Case Like Puttin Folders To Sleep Talking: Ha Ha Bitch Now Whos Gonna Be Cut,Fuck You Yeaah Crime Sindicate Chea Yo Dawg I'll Shit On You And Im Serious At That You Homo Ass Trick,Your Just Seriously Whack* Your Audio's Crap Only Good For Text So Come Get Owned,Matter Of Fact Dont Even Check And You Say Im Whack? Dawg Look At Ya Shit Your Worse Than B2k When They On Weed So Quit Ready To Take A D/r Loss To This Kid Even Take His Side...I Put A Saw To His Ribs Jeah Your Finsihed Its Over your Careers Done,So Quit While Your Ahead Haha Rapverse |
Oh And If You Win You Stay In CS If You Lose You Get Cut
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your cut willa said look: supersrapwoman (9:28:03 PM): OK supersrapwoman (9:28:04 PM): LOL Paranoid1106 (9:28:14 PM): I mean like Paranoid1106 (9:28:15 PM): I won't fuck with him supersrapwoman (9:28:17 PM): WAIT supersrapwoman (9:28:21 PM): YOU KNOW WAHT supersrapwoman (9:28:24 PM): JSUT ABTTLE HIM IF YOU WANT supersrapwoman (9:28:30 PM): CAUSE HES NOT IN CS ANYMORE NOW supersrapwoman (9:28:39 PM): AND U CAN BEAT HIM OBVIOUSLY fag and Ima merk you herb! |
AIght Try It Bitch.....Stupid Fuck........................
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Paranoid has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-30-05 07:37 PM.
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www.soundclick.com/Paranoid05
"UNF Abuse" LYRICS: Yo.... Only thing you burnin is the basics of your lies You’re mediocre voice comes up midget sized The uk even said he bites dizzy rascal But he mumbled each line sayin he had too This “B” is the one lost in deniel (denial) He cant rhyme, so I say did you lose ya file? Your horrible, what! You don’t understand? What!? you don't get what the word means man This youngin is to premature to handle himself But your still nothin, kid you lied to yourself A CS you couldn't possibly commit too So what can a immature toddler see through? Your a stealth glider, your invisible at most Ima burn you, your nothin but 50's toast.... Your mission is impossible thanks to cruise Catch a tight grip, slip than your not smooth O by the way, I heard your verse before foo Your wacker then 50, so he's better then you So your order is off, what was that route? O ok you wear gap, so your gay and proud? Now i'm coming up to my conclusion on wack UNF fits all the letters; meanings he's that |
This was feedback posted for B.Daniel
pollz dawg..... you should get this...you actually threw punches
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Ok Para Im Jus Gonna Humour You...:thumbup:
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Voted For: B.Daniel
listenin...i LOVE THIS BEAT..funny news intro...adlibs arent good cos they go over ure word...flow is ok...dont like the echo on this..presence is pretty nice..delivery is koo...lyrics are pretty nice...a bit played like gay and proud...it was ok,..6/10... listenin..beat is dope...comin more raw...lyrics are better...SITTIN POSITION..ahhaa thas nice...flow is pretty much on beat...like the chipmunk...feelin the flow...presence and delivery is hot...and paranoid rlly shud be dq'ed for feedin on ure verse.... UNF got this eazy..1 Crew vote removed |
This was feedback posted for B.Daniel
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Intermental your vote is good but you obviously dont get my lyrics either. but its cool anyway your vote doesnt count it's gettin dq'd
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This was feedback posted for Paranoid
ok like ive told you i didnt like either verse
flow was close voice i liked paranoids punches didnt like either lol emotion prob unf quality close lol ium undecided lol |
Lmfao@U Dq'ing Votes..............................
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This was feedback posted for B.Daniel
checkin the polls on this biiiiotch............................
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Voted For: Paranoid
yo son, your verse had that illy shit, crazy beat and all that, I was dayyyyyyyyyyyuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuumm, I was like, hot beat, wow, and stuff, and the lyrics was all like, pow! Not a gun pow, but like a little kid with an imaginary gun pow! And shit, the punches were like, cheese on a lobster, they went so well with the verse and stuff. Multi's, well you had none. But your verse was more hip then Ophra Winfrey son, and more gangster then Bill Clinton with a cap on backwards, props sonny. Uh, UNF, UNLOSE, hahahahahhaha, mad wordplay sons, and daughter, word, why do people say son? Ima say duaghter from now on, shit is more ill, anyways daughter, uh, your punches were cool and stuff, but quality was, meh, and that wasn't cool, so werd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: B.Daniel
explatnation.... para = garbage...wack lyrics..WAYY MONATONE all the way through..NO emotion BADDD adlibs..was to loud n lame..lyrics was decent at best.....and u got BALLS to try to spit on that beat.... UNF had pritty nice lyrics and his flow was on..emotion was good...he jus wanted this way more..and it shows blatently Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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ROFL...wtf..u gota b joking man...not that u voted for him but HOW u word ur shit...and how could u think he that nice?? u know thats one of his boys...or maby his moma behing that wack ass S/N LOLOL |
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Voted For: B.Daniel
Goes to B in my opinion... Paranoid: bad beat choice, for battle you gotta get something grimey, something gully. If you choose a beat like this one, you gotta have damn strong presence to pull it off but that wasn't the case with you. I even got the feeling like you were bored with the entire thing. I didn't feel any anger or any desire to win and rip. Your presence on the mic didn't correspond to your lyrics which were good, nice punches but your delivery didn't support those lyrics. UNF: flow was kinda off here and there but not on a lot of spots though. Just like in some places, syllables didn't come out nicely but I only noticed that the second time I listened so no biggie whatsoever. Good beat choice and nice delivery, I can sense your eager to win and rip him apart. Lyrics could be turned up a notch here and there but your mic presence made up for that. |
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Voted For: Paranoid
A'ight... This was a good battle. Both of you are pretty even with the flow and whatnot...but I really wont get into that. This is about punches... Paranoid...he came with some witty punches...good shit. UNF...Came with some good ones, but other ones were lame...sorry but you lost this... My vote goes to Paranoid, but this was a good battle. Keep it up, both of you. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: B.Daniel
v/B/daniel I think he ran away with this battle. Cuz he actually had some punches his flow was on point and presence was well felt. Paranoid could ahve potenially won the battle but he just needed to include some punches unless i didnt hear them, but still theink that my vote should go to B.daniel. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: B.Daniel
vote...b daniel b daniel-flow was koo,fell off a few times,delivery was nice seemed a lil forced once or twice,emotion was better than p's but punches were average in yours paranoid-flow was not good,all choppy and shit,delivery wasnt good,didnt like the beat as it didnt seem like a battle beat,the punches were better than b.dan's but i think he got you as he had better flow,delivery and emotion Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ROFL@Para Being A Pussy And Dqing Votes ...........................
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Voted For: Paranoid
UNF I turned your diss on and all i got for a image on your diss was that you like it when he sits in the sitting position, like man half of your rhymes didn't make sense. no logic wordplay and the voice kill it, it sounds fake but ima give you prosp for havin decent quality and a beat. but that means nothin without having a great diss. your voice is just young. vs Paranoid not bad I like your quality beat was gross but the disses were better not like great or anything but you had more logic wordplay and personals. the ecko is dope with the headphones man. flow and delivery is pretty good for you, better then unf but really you have improved with that and shit. so overall ima vote you for coming harder with the diss. v/Para |
Voted For: Paranoid
Para i HATE this beat You sound liek kool col-b, who also rapped over this identical beat. Your flow is WAY off, even 'texty' and your adlibs shouldn't be the same volume as your verse since it distracts from it tremendously. The punches were ehh ok. Nothing that had me like "oh shit son!" and this is coming from someone that already dissed UNF. You gotta start writing over a beat, because I can tell form a far distance that this wasn't written to a beat just by the way the lines end. realistically though, if it were written dead on to this beat it'd feel exactly liek the track colby made. As a diss, it's not that strong as far as the delivery seeing thta the flow was off, but your cadence is in all the right places and the punches were mild. Ditch the one sylable rhyme scheme because that shit went out in 1989. Lets see what UNF brought. Oh BTW, you had way too much echo on your vocals for a track liek this. UNF, the beat's bretty nice. Got a big-beats, stompy feel to it, which makes your horrible ass mic/EQing sound even worse. I personally hate your voice since it soudns so high pitched, and your adlibs are too loud. they shoudl be quieter than your vocals since you're usually shouting or some shit liek that. Spekaing of high pitched, that high-pitched voice you used half way is straight outta 2003. People stopped that a long time ago. But you needed to add WAY more lines to this because the punches didn't hit like I'd expect em to or that they should for a beat like this. You didn't really diss him except for that 50¢ line which in it self wasn't strong enough to tilt this your way. Vote: Paranoid. |
holy shit apexx I totally agree with you man. though you really critized me and shit thanks, ima keep that ecko and shit in mind. the one syllable rhyme yea I can do multiples:)
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Voted For: Paranoid
This battle wasnt the best I've heard. But it was ok for both of you. Sentence Structure - Yall both lacked in this area. Paranoid fell off a few times, and so did UNF. Yall both need to work on preparing your lines to fit your flow, or it wont sound right at all. Delivery - Paranoid one this. His was more simple but effective, and did not sound like he strained to get his lines out. UNF struggled on riding the beat more than paranoid, which lead to a very inconsistent drop. Punchlines - This goes back to both of your sentence structure. Paranoid got this because he delievered in almost everyline, which made up for a few that didnt hit hard. UNF, your punchlines didnt have any power behind them at all. It seemed that you was searching for something to rhyme instead of going after your opponent. Paranoid gets my vote. His drop was more consistent. Also, both of yall need to work on emotion and quality, cause it was hard to understand some of what yall were saying. |
Voted For: Paranoid
Ok this was a pretty weak battle on both sides B.Daniel....a BIG minus for u was that if u hadn't posted ya lyrics I woulda never known without reading them...ya pronouciation is a big minus son...if u aint fully pronouncing ya words no matter how ill ya punches is...I wont know cuz I cant understand u....ya flow was choppy...an delivery lacked emotion...an ya punches was weak man...u really need to up those..this was a weak drop man...no hate I am jus being totally real Paranoid....dun get ya hopes up, u wasn't much better..ya pronounciation was koo but ya had ya addlibs too loud so u would phase out the last few words of ya line wit those loudass addlibs....ya flow was basic an ya delivery was horrid..no emotion at all....u had weak punches as well but they were a lil less weaker...had sum borderline wittiness there...but still a subpar effort...so u get this by a hair Nice attempts by both keep battlign an elevating both u got great potential |
Unf what you got on me, I got some votes from rv's veteran audio heads.
so that shows how much better iam then you.. |
Wow......Its The Internet Fool
Get over It Lmao Only Reason Im Losin Is Cause my Pronunciation which I Have Now Cleared Up |
you still suck.
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Sure I Do....Your Whack..
My Shits Better THan Yours Jus Fuck Off.... |
you just think you are cuz of your record, you lil noob battler....I might as well consider you as a noob.
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Wow I have A Record?
Who.... Gives... A...... Fuck....?? Did I Say Shit About my Rec?NO So Dont Even Try That One On Me People These Days Fuckin Hell |
stop trying to act mature man, your pathetic and fake.
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This was feedback posted for B.Daniel
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