Cash Complex vs chip
 

Battle Rules:

10- UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
be honest.
goodluck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 12-01-05 at 08:50 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Cash Complex has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-28-05 08:54 PM.

don't go more then 16, no one wants to read an extremely long battle.........

chip has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-29-05 03:18 PM.

how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/
this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/
raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/

even on text, this man choke like a clone of b-rabbit,
his cash complex like his rhymes; he still don't have it,
how does a poet kill a textcee in a battle or song?,
don't know, just read this, i'm hittin this herb like a bong,
and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches,
i'm a soldier, used to ride with TTI,
now just for fun, i'm makin this newbie cry,
but hold on, before i get off topic,
his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit,
here's some advice for next time, dont' go for the best first, cuz believe me
this battle's done like my breakast dog, over easy.....

^like always, don't vote if u don't get it.....

uppin (just because somebody says 'dont vote iyou dont get it' doesnt mean their punches are better or more complex than the average, usually its just a disclaimer to make it seem so; if you dont get it its the authors fault for making it that way"

^wtf......... lmao @ u playa, it's not that serious...... uppin for votes, and if u don't get a punch, don't vote, call it what u will, but i think that's common sense..........

uppin............................................. .................................................. .............

Voted For: Cash Complex

and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches

VS

raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/

Ok..I gotta go with cash complex here.He owned in creativity.
Chip's verse had a better flow,but he had far too many played lines.Like,the toilet/hot shit,breakfast/over easy,and the B-rabbit one.I also didn't like how you mentioned the TTI thing.Just didn't have any purpose here...so i guess that's just filler.

Vote-Cash Complex

Drop an honest vote in the link below
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vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

chip up it ho................................................ ......................

uppin come on chip stop bein a baby

Voted For: Cash Complex

Ok

chip:

even on text, this man choke like a clone of b-rabbit,
his cash complex like his rhymes; he still don't have it,
- This is an ok personal
how does a poet kill a textcee in a battle or song?,
don't know, just read this, i'm hittin this herb like a bong,
- No, too basic, and not a good rhyme either
and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches,
- No, plus the flow went a bit off
i'm a soldier, used to ride with TTI,
now just for fun, i'm makin this newbie cry,
- So?
but hold on, before i get off topic,
his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit,
- No...lol...your starting to kill yourself with that line
here's some advice for next time, dont' go for the best first, cuz believe me
this battle's done like my breakast dog, over easy.....
No

Flow was off at times...not a single decent punchline, rhyming was basic most of the times....

Cash Complex -


how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/
- Not really workin...bad opener
this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/
- Nice set-up, but what the hell are sexual checkers? bad...
raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
- Doesn't really make sense...
yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/
- This is ok...
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/
- No...not workin

You had no line that really stuck out to me...it flowed well, and your rhyming was good and consistant throughout with the multis at the end

Ok, both verses were not strong in fact weak in many ways....both need to improve on the quality of punchlines especially for the future

I really could have voted either way...

But for two reasons

1) 'his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit' - this line backfired...
2) Complex having better rhyming...

I am voting for Cash Complex....

Stay Up both though

Voted For: chip

Chip - iight verse, you had some good punchlines and your flow was good.

Best Line - even on text, this man choke like a clone of b-rabbit,
his cash complex like his rhymes; he still don't have it,

Worst Line - i'm a soldier, used to ride with TTI,
now just for fun, i'm makin this newbie cry,

Cash Complex - Your punches were off, your flow was decent, but thats about it.

Best Line - how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/

Worst Line - yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/

OVERALL - This was a WEAK battle. Both MC's didnt have many good punchlines. They both flowed well. I give my vote to Chip because I liked his punchlines better and his flow. Both of you need to work on creativity tho.

Vote - Chip

RTF or vote be REMOVED!
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Voted For: chip

how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/
^^^weak opener
this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/
^^^ight
raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
^^^Ight punch
yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/
^^^Weak
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/
^^^No closer was WEak

even on text, this man choke like a clone of b-rabbit,
his cash complex like his rhymes; he still don't have it,
^^^Ight oopener
how does a poet kill a textcee in a battle or song?,
don't know, just read this, i'm hittin this herb like a bong,
^^^WEak
and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches,
^^^^Good punch
i'm a soldier, used to ride with TTI,
now just for fun, i'm makin this newbie cry,
^^^WEak
but hold on, before i get off topic,
his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit,
^^^Ight
here's some advice for next time, dont' go for the best first, cuz believe me
this battle's done like my breakast dog, over easy.....
^^^Solid closer
THis was a weak battle both came wit some ight verse's nuthin to special.....cash werk oon ur punchss an personals.....chip u had some good lines an some weeak.....but u get this win cuz ur verse was more solid....V/Chip
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^^^^RTF HONESTLY......OR THIS VOTE WILL BE REMOVED

lmao @ rtf or vote will be removed! i'd love to check out everyone's shit, but as many of u know, i'm workin on my mixtape right now, and i'm not sure i can get around to everybody, that's also y i haven't been uppin, cuz i only get on once a day now.... and lmao @ the disrespect from cash complex or w/e...... wtf is ur alias...... pm it to me if ur tryin to keep it a secret........

Voted For: Cash Complex

how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/

did not like this

this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/

ok punch could be a lil better

yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/

i liked this word play it was a good punch too

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

sorry chip i wasnt really feelin any of ur stuff u had maybe one good punch though

lmao, iight logic, i respect everyone's opinion, just make sure u get to conner's house tonight, we gotta work on that song........

uppin............................................. .................................................. ..............

Voted For: Cash Complex

Punches-CC
Complexity-CC
Flow-CC
Personals-Tie
Over-All CC

Cash had better punches had a more solid flow and a all together better verse...wasnt really feeling chips that much pretty basic rhyme scheme.


Vote-CC

Voted For: Cash Complex

hmmmmm not much to say chip's verse was kinda elementery accept for the last two bars... and his structure was kinda shitty... anyway

Opener: CC
Closer: Chip
Punches: CC
Personals: Chip
Structure: CC
Complexity: CC (much better rhyme scheme)
Creativity: tie
Vocab: CC

Vote: CC

Voted For: chip

complex i wasnt feelin the first line and u rymes were harder to read cus of the rymes them self
chip u had good flow and structure and nice rymes
both were good no hate

vote chip

Voted For: chip

this was a close one but chip came a little better

This was feedback posted for Cash Complex
 

polls.............................................

Voted For: chip

even on text, this man choke like a clone of b-rabbit,
his cash complex like his rhymes; he still don't have it,
^ok
how does a poet kill a textcee in a battle or song?,
don't know, just read this, i'm hittin this herb like a bong,
^good
and best believe this clown brings no punches,
he just a actor, this just practice, i'll off him with one of my crunches,
^ok
i'm a soldier, used to ride with TTI,
now just for fun, i'm makin this newbie cry,
^nah
but hold on, before i get off topic,
his rhymes belong in a toilet, i guess u could say he bring that hot shit,
^good
here's some advice for next time, dont' go for the best first, cuz believe me
this battle's done like my breakast dog, over easy
^nice

how the fuck did u become commander-in-chief?/
i step on the flow he 'kicks' like im standin-on-sneaks/
^meh ok
this heat'll leave you missing like your textual record/
you go both ways in this game like sexual checkers/
^nah
raps not your'e match, so i'll call you a genre dyke/
dissin my sigs the only way this kid's gettin on the mic/
^nope
yall may be like "this kid Cash's conceited"/
but dont blame me, its his shitty raps that pre-concieved it/
^ok
hey, at least its still possible for you to win chip/
because all the votes you get dogg, they from your kinship/
^ok

V/Chip