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La Cosa Nostra 12-01-05 10:22 PM

170 bars.
 
Made a post about this in some other thread, but fuck that bullshit...

I jus recorded the practice version of this song.

Qualitys a bit shotty, no dubs, no intro or outro yet, but I'm def looking for some opinions and constructive critasism on this before I do the final version.

There is only msn on this comp (it aint mine). metal_gear20@hotmail.com

Hit that shit up and I'll send you the approx 7.5mb mp3.

Past Tense 12-01-05 10:29 PM

upload it www.putfile.com

La Cosa Nostra 12-01-05 10:31 PM

Nah... I aint putting it out for cats to download..

Not untill its on its final version.

Past Tense 12-01-05 10:35 PM

ahh alright cuz i aint got msn :(

Mentalz 12-01-05 10:35 PM

Im at the house without speakers ya Fuck. haha. cant wait to peep it bro. What did you end up doing with the first verse?

Mentalz 12-01-05 10:36 PM

Oh, and the reformat worked. Thanks alot ;)

La Cosa Nostra 12-01-05 10:37 PM

Just changed a few bars...

You can see one of the changes in my sig -_-

The other one is just the first 2 bars I didnt like... So I changed them..

Might even change em again..

La Cosa Nostra 12-01-05 10:59 PM

Word. Thanks to speats for havin a listen.

Anyone else?

Blay'all 12-01-05 11:00 PM

word, im bout to take a peep

Mentalz 12-02-05 12:06 AM

Hit' you up tomarrow bro.

Phenom-in-all 12-02-05 04:45 AM

Just peeped this. Yea man... I ain't partial to that Aussie accent, but you straight killed this. All I gotta say is turn the 6th & 7th beats down (so I can hear it all lol) and you got some lyrical fire. Can't wait to hear the final track. word.

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Germ 12-02-05 04:46 AM

yeah, i like it....(and im wasted s othis is hard to type out). but yeah, wor,d you got some fire lyrics

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 12:30 AM

Yo this shit is so easy now..
I nail it every time without trouble...

I might drop the final version on a sounclick tonight... As a preview for my cd.

Spektikul 12-03-05 12:37 AM

Nos is a God, that is why his 170 bars be illin...

...*changes his countries name to Nostrailia* :thumbup:

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^ There ya go, have a quote for that sig of yours.

Ps. Them shits really are ill man, props. ;)

TeamOne 12-03-05 01:14 AM

do it now........ either that or email me at FuxJustAWord@yahoo.com

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 01:20 AM

Ok, now I'm definatly dropping this in a few hours...

Just gotta do dubs and an outro... Then boom...

Mentalz 12-03-05 01:46 AM

Fuck a wack computer without speakers. Gdamn I wanted to hear it. ;)

Oh well. Early tomarrow, like noon when I wake up i'll be able too.

Ysdat 12-03-05 01:49 AM

if it gets to soundclick let me know, wouldnt mind checking it.

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 01:59 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Ysdat
if it gets to soundclick let me know, wouldnt mind checking it.

You will be able to in around an hour...

Thats when it'll be uploaded and I'll make a thread in the songs forum.

Ysdat 12-03-05 02:05 AM

ok, proberly check it tomorrow. Being saturday night and all

Germ 12-03-05 03:13 AM

i'll probly listen to it right now

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 05:43 AM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216103

Done..
Everybody go listen and drop feed yo :)

Tha Q. 12-03-05 05:45 AM

^NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cuz u never drop feed on my shit



Mr. Sanctity!

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 05:46 AM

You never ask...

Fool.

Tha Q. 12-03-05 05:56 AM

There....I listened to ur whole track MOFO


long ass shit


*and ur track is pretty LONG too*


HAHA


mudick!

Adam 12-03-05 09:39 AM

I think that it's so fuckin' ill.

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 09:45 AM

^You heard the newer version yet?

Mike Macs 12-03-05 10:09 AM

Fuck the song is tight but ya accent kinda kills it some really tight beats there though, and that song is makin my computer sluggish as hell...

Adam 12-03-05 10:10 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Nostradamus
^You heard the newer version yet?


Not even yet. I was busy gettin' drunk. But I'll go peep now..

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 10:15 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mike Macs
Fuck the song is tight but ya accent kinda kills it some really tight beats there though, and that song is makin my computer sluggish as hell...

Yeah I hear ya man..

I'm currantly working on my recording technique to try and make it sound more appealing to american cats..

Thats another reason I'm still at this site, cause I like to test my shit on an international audience to see peoples opinions and advice.

Mike Macs 12-03-05 10:17 AM

It's tight but I can't really understand what your sayin, that's the only problem, and niggas gonna think you a joke when they hear, but they'll laugh when you kill some american kid on audio, makin it mo painful for him....

Adam 12-03-05 10:18 AM

It's easy to understand him man..

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 10:20 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mike Macs
It's tight but I can't really understand what your sayin, that's the only problem, and niggas gonna think you a joke when they hear, but they'll laugh when you kill some american kid on audio, makin it mo painful for him....

Yeah..

What can I say, I'll keep improving my vocals untill I got an exportable product..

But my first priority right now is getting to the top here in australia.

Adam 12-03-05 10:20 AM

Ontop the shouldar blades of masons
Even when this tape ends take the words I'm saying friends
Escape dense, ways to make sense become outragous

^ dopeness.

La Cosa Nostra 12-03-05 10:22 AM

Welcome to the business kid, let me show you the ropes
Like a broken chair under a tree with a noose choking ya throat

And

Breaking the base of ya head, drillin into ya skull
with a razor metal pole, fucking ya brain through the hole

Are my two fav bits..lol The second one is fucking brutal..

Spektikul 12-03-05 12:42 PM

Its all about Nostrailia..........................:thumbup:

M.C. Streak 12-03-05 01:16 PM

this is sick...i posted my thoughts in the song section and don't even worry about quality right now

Texxus 12-03-05 03:37 PM

its a tight freestyle or w/e....but not a song you would go around braggin about and bangin in your system while driving through your town....but its good if its a free/flow...and plus i cant stand the accents a lot of people have here....


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