SlicKnife vs rexless
 

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Check in by: 12-03-05 at 09:54 PM

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rexless has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-05 10:19 AM.

SlicKnife has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-05 05:21 PM.

slickknife aint gonna spit the truth, you cant handle it, i know pac face down /
your simply fiction in a booth, a total contradiction like mase now / 1
your rap storys a lie...you need cash to feel the throne /
i'll put 'money' to have the 'cal-see-'em'(calcium), so it'll be in your bones / 2
you beat'in me? its like a sexless-whore, fucking unbelievable!, win aint even in ya rep-itoir /
out rap you? like your first gangbang you cum-4-more.. ha, like ryding your lyrics your ass-est-is-tore / 3
when it comes to battles you'll never wirte-nicer,
how did you end up in the sites-cypher? /
you not ill, you just write-hyper so the fact still remains you cant shyin-on-my-text like old highlighters / 4
Your like a drunk style-list the way you always get lost in my tracks
Cuz 'gluein snails to spines' is the only way ur loadin slugs in backs /5
my fate is stable, but slick-knife at the corner diner waiting tables
taking soo much dick to the stomach i thought you were mating navels /6

game-over!

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...486#post2557486



In battles Slic must wreck chances, but just check what this man plans for
…if you make Front Lines a disco…then this is murder on the dancefloor…!
Hands sore? Nah, you’re just too rexless (reckless) to EVEN pick up a win
…cause like a very small lean dwarf your chances are more little, than slim…
You’re bitter and dim, on your path to loss… just see it unravel
but how were you reppin a crew…without even completing a battle?!*
I’ll make you leave in a rattle, create a victim and probably a grudge too
but comparing us two? Fuck head and shoulders…my whole body is above you…!
Rex the hopeless one so your heart will be overrun by my lines stark infests….
When you could light a fire for urgent rescue…and still not spark interest…!
So enjoy watching your demise when you draw your eyes to the captions…
…Till you steal from your own wolverine*… just to grab a slice of the action!



* was part of The Supremacy - http://community.rapverse.com/showt...35&page=1&pp=15
* check his avatar out and you will see his wolverine

Voted For: SlicKnife

In battles Slic must wreck chances, but just check what this man plans for
…if you make Front Lines a disco…then this is murder on the dancefloor…!
I’ll make you leave in a rattle, create a victim and probably a grudge too
but comparing us two? Fuck head and shoulders…my whole body is above you…!
Rex the hopeless one so your heart will be overrun by my lines stark infests….
When you could light a fire for urgent rescue…and still not spark interest…!

VS

when it comes to battles you'll never wirte-nicer,
how did you end up in the sites-cypher? /
you not ill, you just write-hyper so the fact still remains you cant shyin-on-my-text like old highlighters / 4

Ok...one-sided battle here.Rexless...you need a lot of work.Your attempt at wordplay is not working at all.Like the cal-see-'em shit.It's pronounced CAL-SEE-UM..not cal-see-'em.If your wordplay doesn't match sllyably,then it's forced.

Vote-Slicknife

nice drop you got a ill style keep it up still a close call here i think?

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Thanks for the vote NK

and Rexless, you surprised me man because you came stronger than I thought you would....if you keep it at it, you got what it takes to become a successful textcee...

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thanks i thought your drop was nice to congrats good battle here :thumbup:

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Voted For: SlicKnife

Punches-S
Personals-S
Metas-S
Creativity-S
Flow-S

Overall.......SlickKnife Took This Without A Question.....Look At His Punches Which Over Power The Few In Rexless' Verse.

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you need to explain your vote better then that man cuz it wont count

Thanks for the vote but Rex is right, you will need to explain it and break it down more for it to count man....

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This was feedback posted for SlicKnife
 

In battles Slic must wreck chances, but just check what this man plans for
…if you make Front Lines a disco…then this is murder on the dancefloor…!
Ok
Hands sore? Nah, you’re just too rexless (reckless) to EVEN pick up a win
…cause like a very small lean dwarf your chances are more little, than slim…
Ok
You’re bitter and dim, on your path to loss… just see it unravel
but how were you reppin a crew…without even completing a battle?!*
Nice
I’ll make you leave in a rattle, create a victim and probably a grudge too
but comparing us two? Fuck head and shoulders…my whole body is above you…!
Decent
Rex the hopeless one so your heart will be overrun by my lines stark infests….
When you could light a fire for urgent rescue…and still not spark interest…!
OK
So enjoy watching your demise when you draw your eyes to the captions…
…Till you steal from your own wolverine*… just to grab a slice of the action!
Nice

I think slik won not only did he have better punches but he had a better structure as well

^^^ Thanks for feedback

We need some fuckin votes...uppin

Voted For: SlicKnife

SlicKnife - You had a good flow, punches where hitten hard. Good personals as well.

Best Line - In battles Slic must wreck chances, but just check what this man plans for
…if you make Front Lines a disco…then this is murder on the dancefloor…!

Worst Line - So enjoy watching your demise when you draw your eyes to the captions…
…Till you steal from your own wolverine*… just to grab a slice of the action!

rexless - Your flow was ok, you finished strong, had some good punches.

Best Line - when it comes to battles you'll never wirte-nicer,
how did you end up in the sites-cypher? /
you not ill, you just write-hyper so the fact still remains you cant shyin-on-my-text like old highlighters / 4

Worst Line - slickknife aint gonna spit the truth, you cant handle it, i know pac face down /
your simply fiction in a booth, a total contradiction like mase now /

OVERALL - This was a close battle, but I say Slic gets the vote. He had the better wordplay, and his punches where hitten hard. Rex your flow was a lil off, you finished well, with good punches, but the start was all weak.

Vote - SlicKnife

RTF in SIG - NK BATTLE.

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Voted For: SlicKnife

slickknife aint gonna spit the truth, you cant handle it, i know pac face down /
your simply fiction in a booth, a total contradiction like mase now / 1
Nah, weak concept
your rap storys a lie...you need cash to feel the throne /
i'll put 'money' to have the 'cal-see-'em'(calcium), so it'll be in your bones / 2
Really forced wordplay
you beat'in me? its like a sexless-whore, fucking unbelievable!, win aint even in ya rep-itoir /
out rap you? like your first gangbang you cum-4-more.. ha, like ryding your lyrics your ass-est-is-tore / 3
No, forced multi's
when it comes to battles you'll never wirte-nicer,
how did you end up in the sites-cypher? /
you not ill, you just write-hyper so the fact still remains you cant shyin-on-my-text like old highlighters / 4
Nah, all forced stuff again
Your like a drunk style-list the way you always get lost in my tracks
Cuz 'gluein snails to spines' is the only way ur loadin slugs in backs /5
Creative but didn't hit
my fate is stable, but slick-knife at the corner diner waiting tables
taking soo much dick to the stomach i thought you were mating navels /6
Nah

In battles Slic must wreck chances, but just check what this man plans for
…if you make Front Lines a disco…then this is murder on the dancefloor…!
Made me laugh but pretty weak
Hands sore? Nah, you’re just too rexless (reckless) to EVEN pick up a win
…cause like a very small lean dwarf your chances are more little, than slim…
Nah
You’re bitter and dim, on your path to loss… just see it unravel
but how were you reppin a crew…without even completing a battle?!*
Meh
I’ll make you leave in a rattle, create a victim and probably a grudge too
but comparing us two? Fuck head and shoulders…my whole body is above you…!
So so
Rex the hopeless one so your heart will be overrun by my lines stark infests….
When you could light a fire for urgent rescue…and still not spark interest…!
Played concept but not bad
So enjoy watching your demise when you draw your eyes to the captions…
…Till you steal from your own wolverine*… just to grab a slice of the action!
No

Slick was better, he was just more creative and had better wording and structure. rex came weak, it seemed like he forced everything, multi's, wordplay etc.

v/ SlicKnife

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212893

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Voted For: SlicKnife

lickknife aint gonna spit the truth, you cant handle it, i know pac face down /
your simply fiction in a booth, a total contradiction like mase now / 1
^^^Ight opener
your rap storys a lie...you need cash to feel the throne /
i'll put 'money' to have the 'cal-see-'em'(calcium), so it'll be in your bones / 2
^^^played
you beat'in me? its like a sexless-whore, fucking unbelievable!, win aint even in ya rep-itoir /
out rap you? like your first gangbang you cum-4-more.. ha, like ryding your lyrics your ass-est-is-tore / 3
^^^Ight...but stretched
when it comes to battles you'll never wirte-nicer,
how did you end up in the sites-cypher? /
you not ill, you just write-hyper so the fact still remains you cant shyin-on-my-text like old highlighters / 4
^^^weak.....stretched
Your like a drunk style-list the way you always get lost in my tracks
Cuz 'gluein snails to spines' is the only way ur loadin slugs in backs /5
^^^Good
my fate is stable, but slick-knife at the corner diner waiting tables
taking soo much dick to the stomach i thought you were mating navels
^^^Weak closer

In battles Slic must wreck chances, but just check what this man plans for
…if you make Front Lines a disco…then this is murder on the dancefloor…!
^^^Good opener
Hands sore? Nah, you’re just too rexless (reckless) to EVEN pick up a win
…cause like a very small lean dwarf your chances are more little, than slim…
^^^Good punch
You’re bitter and dim, on your path to loss… just see it unravel
but how were you reppin a crew…without even completing a battle?!*
^^^nice
I’ll make you leave in a rattle, create a victim and probably a grudge too
but comparing us two? Fuck head and shoulders…my whole body is above you…!
^^^Lol nice
Rex the hopeless one so your heart will be overrun by my lines stark infests….
When you could light a fire for urgent rescue…and still not spark interest…!
^^^Played
So enjoy watching your demise when you draw your eyes to the captions…
…Till you steal from your own wolverine*… just to grab a slice of the action!
^^^Good closer

V/slicknife......he came wit a good verse that ripped rexless... he had consistent non-played punchs...he gets my vote...RTF IN THE SIG

why isnt there anybody voting? i will return the favor just leave a link one!

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Ayo, Jae...just checked this out now, will vote on your battle if it is still open tomorrow...


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