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December Crew Collab.
Either drop your verse in here. Or, PM it to me. No matter how many we have, i'm setting the cut off for Dec. 10th. Then it's going in the OM forum.
In case someone doesnt know, the Topic is: The Pendulum Swing. Make it about 16 lines on the topic, give or take. No less than 10 no more than 20. |
And DO NOT make the lines as long as an elephants dick. I hate that shit... even though I did it once. =X
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The Pendulum Swing ..Make note the illusive fluid, as it ripples the canvas stanza.. The tangant phantom grandfather's Tic' inriched bananza ..Include the lucid movement, as it performs to the chords.. Of a life torn in judgement, from the peak down to the shores It wreaks from pores, engrossed readily.. steadily swaying As The Pendulum Swings heavily across the aging painting Staged the blaming, to denounce the compound rash tactics So I'm constantly placing aim at the surrounding clash of fanatics To bad it's static, only to my eyes can I see the rue movement Shrewd and prudent, as I inquire higher and choose to prove it To loose the trueness, my soul subconsciencly adheres the course As remourse is here to hear resort to something more heavenly So brevity heads my leveling, stops to contort a life in shambles Until one by one the candles, remain unlit as they sit in waiting ..Ever changing like my lifes decisions .. forever rearanging.. |
The Pendulum Swing Supplying vivid emotions with every message in my arsenal Precious moments are rienforced By the almighty powerfull Darkness overlaps the sunshine from portraying its beauty Harvest changing while obtaing my gem Like a saphire ruby Heartless ideas are swayed by The swinging of the pendulum Artist hypnotized by The brightness of the magnified spectrum Mezmorised by the polygons that are falling on my conscience Realized the controlling of life is the cause of all my problems I feel free like cactus but the changes of life defies my status Dying alone cause no one could roam through my apparatus Percived as harmless the way reality keeps my mind hidden The pendulum swing scrapes a bit of hope wich is forbidden The Movement swaying straight foward and back it relates Rythem Vibrates But Change is what it really demonstrates |
dope shit......... why u made anopther thread bathles me lol : /
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Here is Atty's verse:
Its...nothing, all my fucking emotions fall dry, eyes lit of fires sit expired to a broken cry. Living this drift of a life, just, kissing a knife, slit by depression...blades lips ripping a site. Everyday consistence dancing an instant away... wasting in sorrow, hallow...nothing more than plain. Back and forth teeters the sands last whim, while the hourglass blackens as the pendulum swings. |
weeeeeeeerd cool shit
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Anyone else planning on dropping on this?
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*yawn* i might *yawn*
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Please...sway away. A majesty aged
under the thunders of tragedies blame. Wide eyes sustain blunderless paces left to right, then the shutterless cave in. Eye lids link together to kiss in a wink's tether... Letters to the mind find the ink to edit. Gentle hymns settle just then sing before, cut short by a pendulums swing. The wrecking ball falls, its lust dissecting the wings of all freely seen bisecting the hours by excepting. Flowers now wither in there prime, towers down... The hourglass has now bowed over. Over and over the past rounds closer. The last long sands stand to form God; as his fists twist and become the world's clock. |
Nice drop Chym ;)
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im next..........
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i'll drop for this aswell
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Dope... make it that way too ya fucks'. ;)
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alright this is looking good after mystic and fathoms drops we should drop it
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Roger that queen bee.
Except I gave a deadline, and I keep my word. ;) 'Can extend it if you want. |
I'll Drop For This Collab Later......
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I#'m droppin ''keystyles'' in open mic like bladow.
hit me up witta topic and i'll collab on anythin. |
hurry up im posting this the afternoon of the 10th so hurry up
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I have a good idea for the structure amanda, so before you post it, get ahold of me on aim.
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i gotchu that by late tonight or tomorra night..
menatlz ........ get @ me on aim ho..may.... lol, i'm on |
Cant tonight bro, im on Duty, stuck on this stupid ass Naval vessal with no AIM.
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well im just getting home from basketball n writing now. but mentalz p/m me wit some tips n shit cuz ive lost my edge
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Conciously unaware what beholds at my very presence of Commotion Motion to Notion, swinging with pride, & yet with vengence belaying Rappidly swaying, Illusively, back and forth like hung cot's.. Time's not a factor, although the movement staggers at each notch. The speed stops, slowly haulting after day breaks and the moon rises With new surprises vastly improving on speed just what is needs It arises to please the company of every living human being Cant be seeing, now having temtations to quicken the pace To push the Pendelum faster, the time is against life in the race Times a disgrace slowly loosing speed and falling off of the face Of the maps trace, connecting all dots but still the pendelum continues to sway. |
lol its not a poem you guys its a rap lol................
good job mystic |
You're weird Willa... Meh, Oh well. :|
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I'm Held Down Brutaly To Truthfully Meet Gravity
As My Life Is Manifested Into A Gruesom Reality Placing My Vision Through The Eyes Of A Barrel For I Cock It Back And Watch The Hollow Tip Settle And My Last Seconds Set In While I'm Wreckin Testin My Medication For Hell's Inn, Were I'm Headin You'd Be As Mad As Me, If You Had The Key To Open Doors To Have A Life Half As Bad As Me Cuase I'm With Satan Contemplatin' This Day And The Other Line Rings, It's God on Two Way So I'll Make Sure You Hear Me Now As Life Rings Bring A Sudden Death As The Pendilum Swings |
Dec. 10th was the Cut Off date.
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