Nick Fletcher vs -=PunchLine=-
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

3-0 = KO
4-1 = TKO

Good Luck. :thumbup:

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 12-04-05 at 11:45 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Expired battle close - win

Nick Fletcher has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-05 11:46 AM.

-=PunchLine=- has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-03-05 11:55 AM.

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^^ LMFAO!!! His battle against Kordozar...
Word to the stretched shit.

Kid, I’m about to cut you and your lines down to size.

Check,
You wack ass gay bitch, fuck the rap game, I’m a put you out
I see you say dopeness speaks for itself huh…
..no wonder you never shut your mouth. :)
I’ll fuck this kid easy, with a few near fake personals and rhymes,
Ya see whilst I may stretch the truth, he’ll just stretch his lines.
Ok, so I’m dropping half-assed, but I don’t wanna rub it in his face,
Cuz his lines are so poor his verse is considered a charity case!!
I don’t know you PL, but your skills ain’t impressive to folk
Ya punchlines get a laugh though, cuz they’re beyond a fucking joke.

puh-pow!! :)

Checkin In............

....You Think Ya Got Vicious Rhymes?...Ya Punches 'Cant Find Me', So I Say Ya 'Diss Is Blind'...Quit Runnin Fa Best, That Positions Mines...You Wack, Only Time RV Sees a "Delivery From Nick" Is At "Christmas Time"...
....Watch As My Scripts Tear This Dude...Laugh At Ya Feel Of Defeat As You Sit There And Lose...Retaliation Is Futile..So I'll Critically Diss You Til "Let Is Barely Seen" Like "Strict Parent Rules"...
...Why Do You Brawl Wit Tha Best?..Like "Shoutin Fa The Grim Reaper" You've Just "Called To Ya Death"...You'll Get Left Mauled Wit Tha Rest, You Can Say "My Verse Tripped You" Da Way You "Fall To My Text"...
....You Think You Tha Hardest, Ya Aint Dawg...I'll Murk Any MC, Regardless Which Name Called...Fuckin Wit Punch, Watch A Part of Ya Fame Fall...Cause Im Quick Ta "Fuck Up Etch" Like "Artist Who Cant Draw"...

1st Bar: St. Nick(Santa Clause)..Should Get It Now..
2nd Bar: Nick fLETcher...nameplay..strict parents dont LET kids do barely anything..

Only Barz You Should Have A Problem Understandin...

This was feedback posted for -=PunchLine=-
 

hott shit dogg..i cant vote dis homsexual dick fletcher gon say im hatin...but im tellin u now ur gonna lose not cuzz of ya skill level just bcuzz dickheads on dis site gon say they dont understand ya structure..but i was felin da verse fam

This was feedback posted for -=PunchLine=-
 

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I Put My Verse In My Poem Style...Dats Just Tha Way I Write...I Dont Battle To Beats, I Go Acapella, Sumthin Like Fight Club Do Battles...I Just Talk To You In Battles..

But A Battle Is A Contest Of Who Has More Skill?...Not Who Can Make Their Structure Tha Best...To Me, Structure Dont Matter...I Hope Other Folks See Dat Concept, Otherwise, I Wont Make It Here...

I get your structure, and you had a good use of multies...

that christmas line was nice, but the way you tried to use "LET" out of my name for a nameplay don't work........

Oh Well...Uppin fa Votes...

Voted For: Nick Fletcher

....You Think Ya Got Vicious Rhymes?...Ya Punches 'Cant Find Me', So I Say Ya 'Diss Is Blind'...Quit Runnin Fa Best, That Positions Mines...You Wack, Only Time RV Sees a "Delivery From Nick" Is At "Christmas Time"...
^^^ight opener way to stretched
....Watch As My Scripts Tear This Dude...Laugh At Ya Feel Of Defeat As You Sit There And Lose...Retaliation Is Futile..So I'll Critically Diss You Til "Let Is Barely Seen" Like "Strict Parent Rules"...
^^^weak werded wrong
...Why Do You Brawl Wit Tha Best?..Like "Shoutin Fa The Grim Reaper" You've Just "Called To Ya Death"...You'll Get Left Mauled Wit Tha Rest, You Can Say "My Verse Tripped You" Da Way You "Fall To My Text"...
^^^Good but wack structure
....You Think You Tha Hardest, Ya Aint Dawg...I'll Murk Any MC, Regardless Which Name Called...Fuckin Wit Punch, Watch A Part of Ya Fame Fall...Cause Im Quick Ta "Fuck Up Etch" Like "Artist Who Cant Draw"...
^^^ight closer

You wack ass gay bitch, fuck the rap game, I’m a put you out
I see you say dopeness speaks for itself huh…
..no wonder you never shut your mouth.
Good opener
I’ll fuck this kid easy, with a few near fake personals and rhymes,
Ya see whilst I may stretch the truth, he’ll just stretch his lines.
^^^good personal
Ok, so I’m dropping half-assed, but I don’t wanna rub it in his face,
Cuz his lines are so poor his verse is considered a charity case!!
^^^Hot....i liked this personal
I don’t know you PL, but your skills ain’t impressive to folk
Ya punchlines get a laugh though, cuz they’re beyond a fucking joke.
^^^Good closer

This was an ight battle onesided mostly punchs u came wit wack structure an some ur personals were weak an punchs....Nick u came wit a solid verse nuthin played had some nice personals..u get my vote....V/Nick Fletcher
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=215277
^^^RTF Honestly.........or this vote will be removed....:)

You know what, I should've made the rules "If I can beat you in a battle, you cant vote"...but then we wouldnt get any votes lol...but aight..
1-0 uppin fa votes....

^^ Wow, your funny......:rolleyes: fuckin herb....

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You wanna rematch dis shitt?...I'll crush you...just let me put da verse in better structure...it'll be over...

Voted For: Nick Fletcher

....You Think Ya Got Vicious Rhymes?...Ya Punches 'Cant Find Me', So I Say Ya 'Diss Is Blind'...Quit Runnin Fa Best, That Positions Mines...You Wack, Only Time RV Sees a "Delivery From Nick" Is At "Christmas Time"...
...A lot of stuff here is unneccesary;the diss is blind thing is kinda played;But the Christmas line was good.
....Watch As My Scripts Tear This Dude...Laugh At Ya Feel Of Defeat As You Sit There And Lose...Retaliation Is Futile..So I'll Critically Diss You Til "Let Is Barely Seen" Like "Strict Parent Rules"...
...Ok,but it Seems like your trying too hard to pull out a nameplay.
...Why Do You Brawl Wit Tha Best?..Like "Shoutin Fa The Grim Reaper" You've Just "Called To Ya Death"...You'll Get Left Mauled Wit Tha Rest, You Can Say "My Verse Tripped You" Da Way You "Fall To My Text"...
...Good
....You Think You Tha Hardest, Ya Aint Dawg...I'll Murk Any MC, Regardless Which Name Called...Fuckin Wit Punch, Watch A Part of Ya Fame Fall...Cause Im Quick Ta "Fuck Up Etch" Like "Artist Who Cant Draw"...
...uhh,again..seems like your trying too hard to pull out a nameplay.

You wack ass gay bitch, fuck the rap game, I’m a put you out
I see you say dopeness speaks for itself huh…
..no wonder you never shut your mouth.
....Good
I’ll fuck this kid easy, with a few near fake personals and rhymes,
Ya see whilst I may stretch the truth, he’ll just stretch his lines.
...Acctually,this was a fake personal;I read his verse,and he had multis in between his lines,his shit flowed IMO.
Ok, so I’m dropping half-assed, but I don’t wanna rub it in his face,
Cuz his lines are so poor his verse is considered a charity case!!
...Kinda played.
I don’t know you PL, but your skills ain’t impressive to folk
Ya punchlines get a laugh though, cuz they’re beyond a fucking joke.
...ehh,Ok..

Ok,this was a good battle here..
Really close,but I think Nick Flethcher barely edged it out..
PL,first off,you got a lot of uneccesary things in you verse.And 2nd,it seems to me your trying too hard,or maybe you were desperate for a personal or something.Cause pulling the "let" and "etch" out of fletcher didn't work.The rest of your lines were good too..

NF had fake personals,saying teh other guy's lines were stretched,when it wasn't,and had a semi played line (charity)..but he still won......BARELY.

Vote-Nick Fletcher

MAN....dis some bullshitt...I aint losin ta dis nigga...Im so much better than em...^^talkin bout I tried to hard ta pull out nameplays...I can see tha "LET" line...but tha last bar?...dat shitt was straight...dat nigga shitt was garbage...

Fuck Dis Battle...!!! Im too complexed fa yall niggas...I guess I gotta turn it down a notch...and I gotta put my linez is yall boring structure ta win...dis site is brainwashed on stupid shitt...

Can yall just vote on who got more skill and not who can make tha better structure?...fuck structure...this is text..text aint supposed ta have dat much flow...you prolly dont even know how to arrange it ta have flow...

man, fuck it...just get dis bullshitt over wit...

Did I say one thing about your structure in my vote?.....

PL, you clearly don't know what you're talking about.

You are dropping a verse like you would say if you was freestyling, which is technically just audio without a beat to it. With text you have to do a different sort of style and lay it out differently, that is why a lot of textcees can't do audio, and a lot of audio cats can't do text.


So, shut the fuck up and take the loss. You are turning into a carbon copy of MarvJay who cried the 3 times I beat his ass.

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher
 

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Homez..I'll wreck you fa real..if folks just look pass my fuckin structure, I won nigga...but they just cant...you niggas are readin, dont you get it?...text--...fuck it...more votes please...

This was feedback posted for Nick Fletcher
 

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