Intermental - Real Artist
 

www.soundclick.com/intermental


lyrically i feel this track is now my strongest...wanted to see if I did contreversial joints, wud suit me?..what yall thinks..its called "REAL ARTIST"..ill rtf...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2564408
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216320

Aight

beats Dope...i Used This Before I Tihkn..:)

Lyrics Good

Wow At Dleivery...Nearly Got Me On That Here ;)

Word To The Dubs Lol

Word To The Hook

Upp The Volume A Lil On It
Seems A Lil Low :S

Verse 2 yeahh Schools Wank Lol

Word To The Deep Vocie bit

Hook Again
Word Upp Volume I Think


hmmm outro hook seems less effects on it

good shit man keep up :)

Word To Your Delivery:)

thanks dawg.................

Listening...

Beat is coo...

Quality is coo...WOW...What is with your voice..? Sounds like you have a mad lisp compared to the last time I heard you...

Anyway...you have elevated alot. Flow is good. Good shit on that.

Now what you need to do...is to work on your delivery. You sound like your whipsering on every track...could be me, but it's what I hear.

Good track man. Keep it up.

thanks dawg..LOL at the lisp...i dunno jus came out like this

upppin......................

yea...u r right this is ur best song this far

quality is better than ever

i like ur lyrics,and flow is very nice

hook is kl

ur voice was kl

im really feeling this track...keep ur shit up..nah mean

thanks alot dawg........

lyrics i was feeling the firs verse better
i like ur dubs they sound really nice good track
i think ur voice changed a little on this
emotion im feelin it fit the track really good
upp the chorus a little bit kinda hard to hear

thanks...........

very interstin delivery with the lyrics...good...

good vocab early on


ur flow needs to be tightened though...it's the weakest part of your game, IMO


the lyrics were good

flow was NOT BAD, but inconsistent and shakey


Chorus needs to be AMped


sounds pretty cool tho


did u lower ur voice on ur hook? hmmmm...


not a bad track dawg...jus elevate ur flow



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Why does your Usertitle say Soul Rebel?

^^^^cos thats the name for my mixtape......

i havent heard much from ya but this is a quality drop feelin this beat flow is real solid everybody got something to fix on they shit feel me .....lil shakey at times but fuck we we strivin stay up tho rtf ..........holla when ya drom another playa

<--has this beat...flow is nice..voice is good..need more emotion...lyrics is ok...quality is ok....2nd..same as b4..lyrics still nice....jus work on emotion...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216565
RTF plz
1ne

Listening...

Lmfao...First off, "advocate" and "cartilage" do not come anywhere close to rhyming, and rhyming "retarded" with "cartilage" is a huuuuuuuuuuuge stretch. Doesn't speak too well on your writing skills now does it ;) Beat is cool...But quality is ass...You should probably try spending more than 50 bucks on a set up if you want to sound anywhere close to professional :thumbup: Wtf at your lisp, its annoying the shit out of me..."Because of my lyrics, you won't play my records" WTF is that about? You don't rap about anything special, or controversial, so stop fronting ;)

Overall, I wasn't feeling it. Better luck next time.

Man U jus come and feed jus to hate on sum1...suck a dick faggot

ROFL :laugh2:

You seriously don't know how hard I just laughed. Thanks for making my day, now die :thumbup:

Oh yeah, Me > You. Nuff Said.

^^shut Up Faggot.....Uppin For Feed For Inter

Me + Inter>You

FOO

^^^^thas fo damn sure..

Im waiting for you to make a diss track if your so bad. I'll respond.

Nah I dont get into mindless net beef.......im all bout doin my own thang and elevating...

Thats what I thought. Know your place bitch.