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GKillaz05 vs Natural killa
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 50 Check in by: 12-09-05 at 02:13 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. Expired battle close - win Reopened for 21 more days on 12/29 |
GKillaz05 has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-05 02:14 PM.
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Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...
Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"... When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib... Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid... All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition... Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician... Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby... Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby... "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"... |
Natural killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-06-05 03:16 PM.
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Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words, ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee, Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst, And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
opener: NK's was a bit of a played line, good but a little played wen u compare it 2 G's. -Nice wordplay and metaphor in a hard-hitting punch. very amusing too. closer: NK's was really good but again wen u compare it 2 G's its a little played. GKillaz' was original, funny as hell with good wordplay and metphor use, overall a really nice closer. Overall: NK had a great flow which made it really easy to follow and it was packed with personals and heavy punches. "A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice" -I paricularly liked this bar. It summed up the whole verse really. Lots of personals but nothing very original and/or exciting GKillaz had concepts i aint ever seen before, the metaphor use with wordplay all the way thru was on aanother level. As i read the verses for the second and third time each i really see it even more. "When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib... Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid..." -This bar was great and again it summed up the whole verse showing how intelligent and funny as heel some of the bars were. Nice verses both of ya but GKillaz takes it rtf pls |
Voted For: GKillaz05
Overall: GKillaz, IMO had slightly edged out NaturalKillah with a better overall better flow, better punches, opener and closer. RE personals, both did a good job a jabbing the other....overall i think this was a tight one, once again Gkillah brought more to the table on this one.... good battle on both parts... -------------------- G'z best lines: Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head... Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread".. --------------------------- NK's Best Lines: & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED -------------------- drop me a honest vote.... check out Poetics Vs Defined - bellow Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Punches-GKilla Metas-GKilla Flow-NKilla Creativity-GKilla Strcuture-Tie Personals-NKilla Overall-GKillaz05 He Got This Due To His Opene And His Second Bar With Gave Hime His Advantage Over Natura Killa....Nice Battle Tho. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
"Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... ^^lol fav line u do good mad skill fo sho....dis battle was an easy win for u...... multies-Gk punches-GK creativeness-GK vocab-GK vote=GK lol good battle fo sho...... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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UPPIN.............. we need more votes, any reason for NK to go to the battle problems thread.
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Gkillaz05- Verse was pretty good man...Punches were also good to i thought...some were weak but most were good...structure was good...had some personals...and wordplay was good...along with a good flow...overall 8/10... Natural Killa- verse ahhh wasnt too bad...punches were good but not good enough some were a little played and weak...structure was good...wordplay good...and also you i thought had a better flow...but punches wins battles...very close battle here... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
5-0 .. keep the votes comin' NK will keep deletin', cant a man just accept when he has been beaten.
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Voted For: Natural killa
natural killa definately takes this, that orea line was funny as hell, but yea that shit was tight, his personals were direct while gkilla is bambling on about nothing so v/natural killa Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yall gotta be kiddin me, votin against ppl cuz u dont like them is gay, NK's verse was way better
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words, ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs ok A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice aight Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee, Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME nah. & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED aight So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst, And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse aight Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head... Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"... decent When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib... Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid... pretty decent All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition... Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician... decent Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby... Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby... aight "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"... good ending preety much gkillaz05 won with better punches that connect better Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Natural killa
Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head... Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"... Nah, weak When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib... Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid... Meh, so so All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition... Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician... Nah Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby... Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby... Weak concept "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED"... Nah Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words, ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs So so A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice Ok Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee, Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME Nah & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED No So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst, And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse Nah Natural took this, he had that oreo bar which was ok. Rest I wasn't feeling from either. v/ Natural Killa Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: GKillaz05
Gkillaz best line-Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid... (hahaha sick) worst line- Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head...(ok ok) over all- nicce punches couldnt have done it better myself!!!!!!!!! ----------------------------------- Natural killa best line-Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED worst line- A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice (are we talking about cows??)lol over all- wasnt that good no hate puches one nicce line _______________________ Vote- Gkillaz05 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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What a bitch!!, take the loss kid and stut the fuck up!
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And BTW,I'm not the kid here...you are.....kid :thumbup:
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Voted For: Natural killa
nk Just happenin' to get worse,cuz all your doing is babbling words, ya' got 49 wins...but too bad those all came from battling herbs ....Weak........... A style that'll never be heard,is in you..you'll never go nice, Your style's been milked out..but you still lost to oreo..twice ...Nice Personal and Good Wordplay... Ya' flow sure isn't tight,no way we'd ever call you an emcee, Cuz on the site,You only got recognized.....for LOSING TO ME ....Funny But A Lil Weak But hitz... & again,ur Getting chewed up by me..why don't u give it a rest?, Wanna merk me on Nk?,please...c'mon..just admit,your OBSESSED .....Im Guesiin Thats The Name of The account?....Nice personal and wordplay again I Like this bar... So Just quit,you can't contest..with anyone,not even with the worst, And if your shit's ever dope,then we know u've just bit a' verse .....Weak..... Overall You had some good wordplay and personals which were set up pretty nicely I like the fact that you actually didnt boost yourself up you stuck to all disses which was nice so Im giving you my v/ G Natural cant learn text, like a manakin your just a fake head... Killa ya easy to "burn" like toast now its time to "break-bread"... .....Weakk..... When your rappin' your like a liar, becuase nobody likes a fib... Man I could be a Vampire and still I would never bite this kid... ....Played Like Hell.... All you conduct is weak rhymes your gonna lose this competition... Natural Killda come up with shorted-out bars like an electrician... ...Better Still Weakk... Startin' to get old your raps repeat like listenin' to a Furby... Killa's bars are fallin' apart like cars in a Demolition Derby... ......Better and Nice Set up and Wordplay.... "Tracks" are played like Kerby, skills aint seen like the Lord... My raps run you over like a "train" yours keep us "all-a-BORED First Line was str8 2nd line'z concept was played so that kinda brought that bar down... Overall i think that you came kinda weak considering the fact that you really couldnt set up your pucnhez rii and you used some played lines (no offense) but some of them were just reused concepts so that was kinda weak comin from somebody with 49 wins so srry I coudnt give you my v in this battle If You Desire Please RTf in Any Battle Link In My Sig Thanx This Has Been Courtesy Of -Aimez Voting Outlet- Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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