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Ike tells you exactly what he thinks of your music!!!!!!..it's the truth
yep...any audio heads...
come in here...post up songs...and ill tell you EXACTLY how i feel about em... if they absolutely suck....ill tell u how bad you suck...then tell you why u suck... i WILL be completely honest...whether we "e-beef" of not...if i like it...ill tell u...if i dont...ill tell u....... so...post em up |
*Smacks Ike*
What it do duke..? |
lmfao at me seeing this on soundclick aswell..... i don't think this one will get 400+ replies though
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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/son...&songID=3067567
tell me, Ike I want e beef, cos if thats your opinion, thats your opinion you already seen how mI feel about you, no homo. |
www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless
my verse on trade it all, 3rd verse, best recent shit I did prolly.....ROLL TIDE ~_~ |
www.soundclick.com/therevelation
Tell me something other than quality sucks. That fact has been established. |
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listening... ehh beat is gay... lol @ spend too much time on internet.....ok?.....your voice...u need to work on...it kinda sounds like u have spit build up in your mouth...just work on pronouncing shit more clear...and your voice will be straight.... flow is ok.... lyrics are straight.... quality is complete ass....spend some of your money on a new set up instead of all the gear u talk about lol.... u def. got potential...but it all comes with time...and theres some things u need to work on.....touch up flow a lil....it starts getting a bit choppy towards the end.... your voice like i was talking about....pronouncing words clearer.... |
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roll tide...word....even though they let me down the last 2 games... ok listening to your verse... always liked this beat....u sound like senser at the lil intro to your voice... flow is pretty good....but i think you gotta work on the way you deliver your words some...like your saying the words...but im not believing what your saying...if that makes any sense... your pronunciation isnt terrible...dont get me wrong...but a few words here and there are hard to understand...so id work a bit on clearing up all the words.... lyrically its ok...nothing insanely special...but some decent multies... other than that...its straight... flow is good...but try to make things about it stick out...your on beat and everything...and its straight...but it doesnt keep my attention througout the whole verse... word.. |
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copy and paste this reply in the thread in the songs forum lol please!? |
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k.... intro is shitty lol...u sound too "white" id say....its just kinda corny..... yea quality...is like...insanely horrid.... your flow...you definitely need to work on...its ok for starters...but it falls off too much to be considered a decent flow....youll get better with that though... beats coo.... you punch in too much also.....its annoying...learn your verse...then spit it...so it all comes out in 1 take....i dont let myself record a song if i cant spit the verses in 1 take....trust me...it helps...make yourself do it... lyrics are good.... delivery and presence...theyre ok....your mic takes away a lot from presence cause its soo shitty...so i cant really really break down on that....delivery though...mean what u say...and make your listens believe it....say your words in a way thats gonna come across on the track...and make someone say "damn i see what hes saying".... best thing u can do is keep recording and keep recording...... |
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Oh so I really AM dope. I thought you were after my money.
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listening to b boy stance.... lyrics at the beginning are just straight up wack man...theres no other words..... they get better throughout the verse though...its just the first few bars.... take that fucking echo off...jesus christ...that shit is annoying.. presence is def. there lol.....voice is coo...flow is ok...a couple spots where it could be touched up........ other than those few lyrics...this is ok.....some of the lines were funny... quality is ok...... this song was decently done...but it wasnt real catchy of anything...nothing id listen to more than once....try to make your flow a lil more catchy for the listeners....and your delivery too....id almost say tone down your voice a lil bit...your like screaming into the mic lol..... thats all... |
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yeah, fo that track my lyrics were really loud. if u listend 2 tha fresh prince 1 its how i usually am, werd |
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ok i must confess...... ive always loved this song of yours....seriously....damn you...lol your flow is nuts on this for real...shit is catchy...lyrics are coo... dude...fuck you for posting one of the few songs that hit rv that i actually listened to more than a couple times...lol... hook is ill....catchy.... if your quality was ill....this track would be beastly.... what can i say man...i love the song.... you wont hear that much from me....but i do... oh yea..but in the 2nd verse....your flow falls for a sec. touch that up... |
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Word, niggas is dumb... |
I never said I didn't like it.
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^qword, that's my fav pop lotty song too. word. good shit yo. ~_~
and props ike for feed |
Listen to secret wars... its real old, but i need feedback to figure out where to go with my style.
www.soundclick.com/onemb by the way, i know vocals are a bit low. |
Hey Ike, break down "Loving You" for me. And I'll give you a ajfghlkjdfg.
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"Ike ripped it better than you" "That shit sound like some old school 70's shit" "Where Ya Bars At? ROFLFLFMAMFAOMOLAFO" What? |
^lool @ "where ya bars at?" lmao
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yea man I'd like to know what you think...If you think I suck it's cool and all I just wanna know where I am at my level now. www.soundclick.com/Paranoid05 PEEP: Murder UNF Abuse I Know ft. Sib peep all of them and tell me. |
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If Ike listens to all those I honestly think he will die. |
Ike's an audio head? Alots changed
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wow lmfao Ike is one of rv's top elevated and best. |
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k.......listening... first of all....it sounds like your rushing the shit out of your words...i realize you dont wanna sacrafice lyrics for flow....but there comes a certain point...wheres its just necessary....cause it honestly makes it unenjoyable....when u cant understand what someone is saying...cause theyre trying to fit soo much into 1 bar..... one thing i really like about this track...is how u talk back and forth with the people...it def. keeps it a lot more interesting.... as far as the rushing your words thing...that was really in the beginning more than anywhere else..... lyrically this is dope....and im feelin the beat....quality is ass...but im sure thats nothing u dont already know... your delivery....is ok....BUT...i think it can use A LOT of improvement....like i said with a couple others in here...your saying the words...but im not believing what your saying...your not coming with that delivery....where everything just stands out and u can feel what the dudes saying....its just kinda the same the whole way throughout....switch it up....switch your tone up with what your saying to make people believe it....and try to come with a lil more energy... actually...i can honestly see in this track...as far as the delivery...where your on your way to "making me believe what your saying"....you switch up tone a lil in a couple parts.....and your getting your feet wet with it...but go all out on your next track with it..... but overall...track was pretty original...had nice lyrics...flow like i said..in the beginning i wasnt feeling...cause it just seemed like you were rushing too much to fits too many words into 1 bar....and delivery needs to be upped some...and youll be fresh as hell..... word |
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first off...the lil intro...where your humming with the beat....lose it...cause if someone hears it...that knows you or whatever...theyll hear that and immediately be biased towards the track cause of how gay the humming is...just talk a lil bit or something to hype the track up...talk about how dope you are or something....anything but the humming... ok..... first off...your decent for just starting to make songs...and you def. have potential.... BUT...instead of making short ass tracks like this when u start....push yourself to make full song...with a hook....cause it can hurt you....if u get good...but still cant write a good hook...just push yourself to make complete songs...and it will help a lot in the long run...dont make half ass 1 verse tracks like this.... your flow is a lil off and u need to work on it...look up a basic ABAB flow...and work off that...practice it....sometimes you cant tell what words your rhyming...and thats not good....research that flow...and start with it...then get more complex with it... delivery isnt bad for starters...but its still not convincing...delivery will of course get better with time...but...start pushing it now... beat was ok....quality was ehh... just take that advice...and run with it...NO MORE 1 VERSE TRACKS...word on hooks...itll help...trust me |
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dude....cmon now....u know i love that song you bastard... i just wanna have sex with it....its so damn sexy....so fuck you and your feed...ill turn you into a walrus you sumna bitch [/insidejokes] |
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*gets done listening to black magik - loving you...which only i can hear..considering i mixed it for him...and he loves me so he sends me his tracks that he doesnt post on soundclick....* ok enough of that listening to Creeping.... hook is dope...dude singning is ill....and beat is ill as well... "rapping my butt off".....uhh no dude....just no.... voice is cool....flow is pretty good.....but man...lyrics...you gotta work on that shit.....you use like 0 multies...no wordplay...metaphors...anything...just use some multies here and there or something.... i have always thought u had mad potential....cause...you gotta good voice..good flow ( but you DO have to make sure u dont screw up on it at all...if u mess up a lil bit....re record that shit...cause a couple spots on here..u screwed up)....your hooks are done well...pretty catchy....you have good song making ability...which you cannot say for a lot of internet heads....but dude...lyrically your killing me...just switch it up some and give me some multies here and there... delivery and presence are good....convincing....your flow falls off when u say rapping my butt off....which is the line that stands out in the track...and makes me not wannna listen to the rest of it....but i did....and its a pretty good track...minus that 1 wack ass line... but thing u gotta work on is those lyrics man.......just put some time into it...and work on that shit.... word |
^^ i suck at writing lyrics never been good sept for one song but woord thanks for the hellp yo
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LMAO @ just fucking her....good shit lol.. damn you gotta good voice for real...i like that...flow is nice...delivery is coo....you can up it a lil bit...but its no drastic changes u have to make... damnit...short ass tracks.....make fucking hooks...itll help...never do that shit...with the lil 1 verse thing...cause this is a pretty good track....but it pissed me off when it ended...cause it wasnt a full song...add a hook to that shit...and another verse or something.....like i told messenger...hooks can make a song...so make sure u work on them with every joint u do...itll help tremendously in the future... and you need a new mic...for real...u can be good as hell for real...but quality is ass.....if u had some nice quality sounding shit.....id prolly download a lot of your songs and put em on cd or something....but im not gonna put no computer mic shit on a cd...... so yea....basically u have all the right chemicals to be dope as shit....but i didnt get to see your hook making ability.......so im not sure about your song making skill.....but as far as putting a verse together....with a nice flow/delivery combo...u got it down...and got insane potential.... get a new mic...start putting together full songs......... |
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ok....im peeping UNF abuse....im not peeping more than 1 track at a time from someone...cause there are others who want feed too...and i also have shit to do.... first off...im biased towards this beat....i hate it.....so yea..... intro is ehhh... your delivery and quality has gotten better......BUT delivery i dont think is really right for a diss....i mean...its ok for what it is....but your not making it seem like a diss with the way you come across... again another short track from someone.........this could be whats holding heads on RV back with their song making ability....start making hooks with every song man....itll help.... some of the lyrics in this are coo...but nothing really stood out to me...and made me go "damn...nice".....i didnt like the 50 line...just seemed a bit wack and too basic to me......but other than that line....the lyrics were ok flow is ok...your on beat.....but its not real entertaining...like...it doesnt keep my attention on the track...its kinda the same way throught the whole song...switch it up a bit...and make it a bit catchy and entertaining for listeners... i will admit...you have gotten tons better in every catagory....but u still have to keep working hard to get where u need to be....and u got a ways to go....so PLEASE make a hook with every song u do...itll help in the future....work on switching flow up.....and work on a convincing delivery.... word |
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lol damn...how long has it been since u been to RV? |
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