Time To Blow (OKAY!!!!) feat. Ojay (WOO)
 

Shit is hot..holla at me...ojay is a sick rapper fo sho..man holla at him (www.soundclick.com/ojay)

1st verse: Inter
Hook: Int/Ojay
2nd verse: Ojay
Hook: Int/Ojay
3rd Verse: Int
Hook: Int/Ojay

Outro: Inter

holla at me..this shit is whats up...

WWW.SOUNDCLICK.COM/INTERMENTAL

"TIME TO BLOW" VOTE HOT HOT HOT :cussing:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216815
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216594

I knew this hooker one time that said.........

nvm


beat is nice


inter...pretty solid


other guy....good rhyming...flow is good


only a couple iffy spots


overall a good drop from the sounds of it


good hook


1

listening....

beat i dont like
Inter you sound good dawg.Real nice flow and ok lyrics:thumbup:
Hook is cool
But who is Ojay....Flow real nice and lyrics started of blah but turned nice

keep it up

thanks fo the feed yall....

thanks I got ure feed now......

liking the beat
intermental pretty good verse liking the flow upppp ur vocals boy ur sooo quiet lol
chorus loving it intermental up ur vocals a little bit luv the hook
ojay good flow volume is cool good presence good shit
intermental good verse u upped the volume a little bit liking it i thik flow wnet off in a few places on this verse but it was cool

overall loving the track jsut upp ur volume on the first verse the chorus and the outro props on this track

wow, this is your style, make something like this for our collab:) pretty dope track, best that ive heard from you man seriously, love your presence, i fucking hate these chords or what ever lol haha, flow is dope, quality is perfect, hook is cool, love the melody, pretty dope track mate, O-Jay is fucking ill too, dope track

thanks lol..fo sho imma comme good in our joint too dont worry bout that

Checked

Like The Beat

Like Your Vrse Lol@Crip Line

Your Flow Was Very Nice Good Delivery On THis One,With A Nice Kinda Style To It

I Dunno Seems To Fit You Very Well..Seems This Is Your Kinda Style...Presence Is Nice

Ojays Koo,Verse Is Nice No Lines Really Stand out Though Lol

Word To You Doing One Hook N Him Then Doin It Thas A Dope Idea Lol

Good Track

Overall:9/10 Keep Up:)

Rtf on My "Mother Goose" When It Is Up:thumbup:

thanks for the feed......

upppin...........

lol, this thread title is kinda homo, man.

why is it homo?....o lol u mean by the name...okay okay..whatever,,,

upppppin................

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*listenin*

inter - good flow here man, presense not great but quality and lyrics are straight kid, nice verse

hook - pretty decent and catchy just not mad on this beat

ojay - don't know you are, beta presense and flow is straight but lyrics ain't great

'okay okay' overall pretty decent, keep em comin

rtf on this please:-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=216876

pz

thanks fo the feed i got ure feed now........

upppin...............

Lol, you not whispering on here!! lol, I'm just fucking with you man.

Flow was consistent, lyrically you were good. Delivery is okay - could be upped a little more as far as enotion and the way it's portrayed on the mic. Other than that this is probably the best I've heard from you.


O-Jay - flow was strong, nice lil NY style kinda reminds me of me about 2 years ago alot of flow not much substance. Remember that people still listen to you lyrically. Towards the end you picked it up a bit. But, other than that you're solid as well.

LOL thanks fo the feed dawg.......

beat is ALRIGHT
Nothin spectacular

intermental's verse
hmm, it sounds kinda like you whisper.
your flow is stalky, its not smooth enough, it could be alot smoother
also, when you do the chorus and you say "ITS.TIME.TO.BLOW.
Its kinda stalky..or choppy,
Ojay, likin his voice, no homo. he has more confidence
his flow is also smoother, ALOT better than Intermentals.
he also says the chorus better
intermenta;s verse again
flow is choppy as fuck
like after you say "diamond in the rough"
it kinda like where you start to fuck up
now, Intermental's chours, it sounds WAAY more smooth now :-\

hmm, overall, this was an aiigh track, but it would've been GOOD, if Intermentals was a bit more amp'd, and flowed better.
Ojay really outshined in this track
its all good
keep elevatin
pZ

thanks imma work on the flow